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Chapter 11:
(Hinata prov.)
I opened my heavy eye lids to be met by close dark topaz pools of Kiba's eyes. He was running his fingers through my maroon locks. I placed a hand on his cheek and kissed his lips lightly.
He placed his hand in the small of my back and pulled me closer. I pulled away after a moment. "Well so Miss. Asuna what are you up to now?" I blushed and got up.
I stepped out of the room and headed to the kitchen and started dinner. After getting out the simple ingredients for spagetti and was already boiling the sauce and noodles two strong arms locked around my waist and a chin was rested on my shoulder.
I smiled and said, "So Mr. Kiba what are you up to? Seducing a young lady?" He laughed and kissed my cheek.
"I see no lady only the most lovely girlfreind any man could ever have." I gigled at his cheesy compliment. He had a way of making me laugh. He was so flirtatious and gentlemenly. He finally let go and said, "You wanna go to a party tonight?"
My eyes widened and I grinned with excitement, "What kind of party?"
He grinned sinisterly, "The fun kind. There'll be good music, all our friends will be there, a dance floor. It's a club that just opened. It's underground." I kissed him quickly and rushed down the hall to find my cutest dress.
I could hear him chuckle and he shouted, "I'll take that as a yes?" I giggled.
"Ya' think?" I went through my new wardrobe and looked at the three dresses I bought secretly at Hitomi's to avoid Ino and Sakura's giggles and teasing comments.
The first dress was a thin strapped light green dress that hugged my curves but frayed out and the bottom that cut off at the knee. The second was a deep midnight blue with gold embellishments that had a corset upper part and frayed out at the hips and ended at mid thigh. The last was a deep purple that also had a corset top with thin sleeves that only covered my shoulder but it hugged every curve and ended at mid thigh.
I held up the three dresses and called out, "Kiba come here for a second." His heavy footsteps sounded as he came in the room and his eyes boggled as he saw the dresses.
"Which should I wear?" He opened his mouth but nothing came out. I giggled and he closed his near drooling mouth.
"Um… I'd go with the deep purple. It'll look good on you." I felt my cheeks grow hot and Kiba walked closer and said, "Can I see you in it?" I nodded and rushed off to the bathroom with the dress.
I slid off the jeans and tee shirt and pulled the hugging fabric up my body and staired at the curvy woman in the mirror. It brought out everything in smooth ways in some places but dramatized very little. The girl in the mirroe had long maroon hair with fair, lightly tanned skin and violet eyes but she looked like a foreigner. I swallowed by curiousity and stepped out of the bathroom.
Kiba stood outside leaning against the wall and smiled widely at me. He came close and put his hands on my waist and staired into my eyes and said, "You look gorgeous! You better stay close in the club I don't someone trying to walk off with my flower now do I?" My cheeks grew hot and I walked into the bedroom and slid on wedged highheel sandles.
Kiba changed into a sexy dark green tee shirt that hugged his muscles and brought out his tan and the gold in his eyes. His jeans were baggy and black and I could barely contain the erge for my jaw to drop to the floor. He chuckled as he saw me running my eyes over his sculptured body like Ares' better looking brother. He put his arm around my waist and we walked to the club.
The clubs sign was neon and it read 'Neon Sakura Blooms'. We walked down the door down under the soil of earth to a cemented club with neon lights lighting every inch, a HUGE dance floor with thumping hipnotic music and a dozen couples dancing close and flirting. The bar shelves were lined with liquor and a bar tender eyed them curiously. I shifted my gaze to see a huge neon restaurant set up with round tables and leather seated booths,that was next to the dance floor. Another dozen couples were aet around the booths.
Kiba nudged my arm and pointed to the booth in the very back with three couples sat. We walked toward them ti'll it was odvous who they were; Naruto and Sakura, Ino and Shikamaru, and TenTen and Neji. Sakura sat next to Naruto and told him something in his ear that made him laugh. TenTen and Neji were odviously flirting and Ino sat on Shikamaru's lap as she undid the top half buttons of his shirt and stroked his chest. We sat down next to TenTen and Neji.
"Oh hey Asuna-kun!" Said Ino who was odviously slightly buzzed. The good thing about Konoha: The age limit for drinking is 16. I smiled and nodded. Shikamaru was smiling cockily at them.
"So Kiba… having fun at home?" Shikamaru asked with a smug grin. My cheeks lit on fire.
"We were not brought up in a brothel so watch your language!" Kiba snapped. My eyes widened and I looked over at Kiba as he looked down and saw my shocked expression. He mouthed 'sorry' and I nodded.
I looked over at TenTen as she tapped my shoulder. She was grinning and she whispered in my ear, "Ask him to dance! Get close to him! Let 'em know how you feel." I smiled.
"Thanks! I'll try it. Can you and Neji come to? I'm scared to death," I whispered back.
She giggled and nodded and said something to Neji and they got up and she winked at me as the walked onto the dance floor where the sexy muxic flowed. I looked at Kiba and whispered in his ear, "Lets dance!" He grinned and nodded.
We got up from the booth and I felt nerves as we walked on the dance floor where the upbeat songs played and harmonized. Once we were near the middle of the dance floor and passed seven of the young couples of two dozens on the floor. When we stopped walking my heart beat increased and I stared at the ground wondering what to do.
I gasped as Kibas strong arms linked around my waist and I looked up at him as a smirk grew on his perfect rose lips. I smiled back and wrapped my wrist around the back of his neck. I pressed our bodies close and soon my gaze couldn't leave his chocolate eyes. As the music flowed through our bodies everything became like a red haze exept his face and the music that dwindeled to soft purr to my ears.
After about five songs Kiba face grew closer and soon my eyes closed as the red haze grew across my eye lids and his soft lips were all I felt. We remained like that for a long time ti'll I heard giggling from behind me. I broke the kiss and glanced back to see TenTen's eyes teared up and her giggling like mad. Neji had his hand around her waist and smiled. Sakura smirked and Naruto just staired with wide eyes. Ino was leaning against Shikamaru with smirks plastered on there faces all I could do was smile weakly with my cheeks feeling like open flames.
I stepped shyly away from Kiba who was just smiling back. As soon as I stepped away he put a hand firmly around my waist and pulled me back. As soon as I gathered myself again I pulled Kiba back to the booth. The three couples followed, all smiling… except Naruto. When we were all settled TenTen asked, "So you guys are really getting married? I mean out there you didn't seem to mind, right?" My cheeks flamed again.
"I'd marry her any way even if we felt we were obligated to. I… love her." I looked up and smiled at him. He beamed back.
"AWWWWWWWW! KAWAII!" Ino, Sakura, and TenTen said together. I giggled and broke our gaze. Once it was quiet again Naruto frowned and made fists of his hands on the table.
"Whats wrong Naruto?" I asked frowning.
"Your just a cover up girl! Kiba loved Hinata! We all knew it! Kiba how could you?! She just DIED for Kami's sake!" He got up and I closed my eyes and bit my lip. I opened them again and made up my mind. Naruto was huffing as he leaned on the side of the booth.
"Guys I… gotta tell you the truth. But… not here." They all looked at me with wide eyes. Naruto frowned and nodded. Kiba had a mixture of fear, pain and fright emotions on his face.
Later at Kiba's house…"Asuna don't do it!" Kiba said as we all sat down. We had left the club right after I said I'd tell them. Kiba was begging me the whole way home.
"Kiba there gonna find out anyway. The likeness is to strong. Neji already figured it out and I think Naruto's catching on to."
"Catching onto what? What aren't you telling us Asuna?" TenTen asked with a frown. I didn't have to look up to know it was her.
"The thing is that… I'm not who I say I am… my name isn't Asuna." I said with my head down.
"Then who are you?" Naruto asked with a stern voice.
"My real name is… Hinata Yuki Hyuuga." There was gasped and I looked up to see all of them staring at me.
"I knew there was a slight likeness but I never thought…" Sakura said with pain in her expression.
Naruto shot up and shouted, "How DARE you! Hinata was my FRIEND! She killed HERSELF! You actually have the GUTS to say you're her!" He was boiling mad I could tell. His face was red and flustered.
"Naruto… I'm sorry. Let me expl-," He cut me off.
"No don't explain your just a descusting liar-," Neji caught his arm and pulled him down into his seat.
"Naruto listen. She's telling the truth! I saw it with my byakugan." Naruto calmed down at Neji's words and listened.
"There is no Hisashi clan. This is me! My father moved the date of the wedding so I panicked. Me and Kiba excaped together before my wedding and covered it with the suicide mission. Hana took me to a inn where I stayed and dyed and cut my hair and tanned my skin so I didn't look so odvious. I made up the clan story… I made It all up! All I wanted was to be with Kiba!" I felt the salty tears rise in my eyes and fall down my cheeks.
Ino's expression was blank as she came up to me and slapped my cheek with her palm. "How dare you! You're so selfish! You left for love I get that but… you left EVERYONE distraut and mourning for you! You only thought of yourself! You use to be so selfless!… that's what I liked about you. You were different! You were PURE! Do you know how RARE that is! You use to be the only girl in Kanoha that I actually wanted to be like! I guess I was wrong."
Instead of getting upset and apologizing I did something I never use to do… "Yeah I was selfless! I looked after everyone else and never myself! Look at where THAT got me! I do one thing for MYSELF and I get slapped! I HATE being selfish but you know what… I gotta look after myself once in a while! Your not one to judge Ino!" I could feel all eyes on me but I didn't care.
Ino stood speechless and then she went to sit back down. After I cooled off I said, "Please I just wanted to be with Kiba okay? I'd like to ask that you don't tell anyone, alright?" I looked around and felt scared.
TenTen smiled and said, "Of course Hin- I meen Asuna! I'm just glad your alive!" She ran over and hugged me with strength you'd never know she had. I just hugged her back. When she let go I looked around the room again. Sakura nodded and smiled.
"Hinata. I'm so sorry! I… didn't meen anything-," Naruto started but I held up my hand and he stopped.
"Naruto its okay. I know. Just don't tell okay?"
"Of course! But… Hin-," I held up a finger and he continued, "Asuna can you at least hug me? I was so sad when I thought you died." I smiled and ran over to him and gave him a big hug. He just hugged back. When I let go I snuggled into Kiba and watched.
Ino's head was down when she said, "I promise not to tell and I'm sorry. Asuna I was just mad and I had to vent. I just got mad that you didn't trust us." I nodded.
"It's okay Ino. I forgive you. As for not telling you… I was scared. I thought word might leak out. Not ecusing! Just you know… by accident." They all nodded and I sighed with releive.
"I promise to. Sorry." Shikamaru said. I nodded and smiled at him.
Maybe this would end good after all. I hoped so… I prayed it would.
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