Hello my fellow readers! I appreciate all the reviews!

I really do love getting reviews from you guys even if it is 2! Haha! Anyways! I just wanted to thank everyone who gave me advice and thank everyone who complimented my story!

Mobius14:

I really appreciate this review! I agree I hate it when fics have those kind of characters. Thank you soo much for the advice and I will take it! Here are my responses to you!

1. I think so too because I was watching my sister play the game and I saw that her hair was light pink but had silver in it.

2. Yeah, I know, Haha! I just am too lazy I guess! Jk! Actually I am just trying not to copy the whole script of the game.

3. I am new to writing fighting stories so its hard to me, I am still trying to get use to it, so yeah

4. Thanks! I really didn't know how to explain her weapon! Haha! I'm just weird like that I suppose! I really like your describing of it though!

5. Well, um Starla's role in my story is one of the main characters and is a supporting role for the original characters of the game, I don't know what you mean by eidolon so your going to have to be more specific about that because there is a lot of eidolon definitions for that word. Thanks for the review!

Crispylid:

awww thanks! I actually have a step niece named Starla and she was born a couple of months ago so that's were I got the name!

I know I just noticed about the layout too! Sorry about that! I will try my best! Thanks for the review!

Blazefiresaber:

Haha! Thanks so much! I agree! I was actually reading some fics and playing the game. 1 night I was dreaming about me being in the game and I was absolutely inspired and when I woke up I started typing away! Thanks for the review!

Starla: Lets get this party started!

Me: For what? O.o

Starla: For me!

Me: Why?

Starla: Because it's a new chapty with me in it!

Me: hmmmm okay! *everyone dances around*

Hope: Shhhh! Its starting…

Starla: Whats starting!

Hope: *sigh* The chapty, Star now shh!

Starla: Okay….

Disclaimer: I do not own anything….besides Starla!

I am going to start from when the Cie'th were coming because I looked at the scene and realized I totally messed up! and I don't feel like redoing the whole chapty, *sigh* anyways…I also want to start from here because I found out if I have Starla unconscious then its going to be hard to explain her waking up at the scene with Serah. Plus I wanted Starla to be awake during that scene so it can show the relationship between the characters. Soo here we go!

We walked onto a floor shaped into a big circle. Hope and Vanille sprinted in front of me and walked around in astonishment. Gaping their mouths open. I stood there, widened my eyes, and gaped too. It was beautiful, pillars in front of us, sparkling and glowing with beauty.

"Whoa" Hope said in astonishment.

Vanille looked back at me and skipped to me. She grabbed my hand and brought me next to hope. We were spinning in circles appreciating the beauty of the building. Unfortunately, we were interrupted by a loud and bloody shrieking noise. We all jumped and turned to the direction were the horrible noise was coming from.

We saw these monsters that looked like deformed human beings without any skin! They were dark and shadowy. Their hands were large as their fingernails were long and blood red. Their face looked like a human face but only brown and they looked as if they were in pain.

We heard another noise come from the other side of us and we gasped, more were coming! They seemed to be passing from this golden gate. I couldn't explain it. These monsters sent shivers up and down my spine.

They slowly crept up the stairs getting closer. All of us: Vanille, Hope, and I slowly came back to back to back. We were watching in horror at the monsters. We didn't know what they were. At least that's what I thought.

"What are they?" Hope asked fearfully

"Cie'th!" Vanille answered

I looked over at her. How did she know that? I asked my self, I became suspicious but I let it go. It could be a coincidence.

"Cie'th are L'cie who failed to fulfill their focus, this is what happens when L'cie don't complete the focus that Fal'Cie gave them" Vanille explained.

I looked all around me. All these Cie'th looked miserable. Don't ask me how I know I just had a feeling that they were desperate for help, but that's kind of weird since they are Cie'th now. But hey, Its not their fault! They never asked for this! They never asked to complete a focus in a matter of time!

I clinched my fists as I looked all around me, observing the Cie'th starting to walk around us. The stopped and stood in front of us wobbling their bodies around.

Suddenly, out of no where we heard foot steps.

"argh!" A man in a trench coat emerged from behind the stairs and tackled one of the Cie'th I was facing. I instantly knew who it was. The one and only.

Snow Villers

Snow tumbled to the ground and did a summersault landing in front of me.

"Lets even these odds, shall we?" Snow said putting his fists together getting in his fighting position. I looked behind me and saw Vanille and Hope already had their weapons out and ready to fight. I nodded my head at them and took out my gun. I smirked and pointed it at the monsters known as "Cie'th".

"Bring it on!" I exclaimed.

They growled at us and got in their fighting positions.

Snow and I were both facing 3 as Hope and Vanille were too. I watched as they wobbled. I sighed and pulled the trigger. The bullet seemed as if it ran at the speed of light and shot the middle Cie'th in the head. The middle Cie'th growled and slashed its long and deadly nails at me. I jumped back and dodged the attack. Snow ran up to one of them and punched them right in the face.

I smiled and turned around real quick to see how Vanille and Hope were doing. I saw Vanille had her weapon out and was using her staff to shot some wires that detached and pulled the monster while slapping it altogether. I looked over at Hope. He threw his boomerang and it flew at one of the Cie'th. It was spinning around its head and smacking it while spinning around.

Hope looked so shy and fragile. Yet, there was something inside of him that showed he was a fighter. I smiled to myself.

"Star! Look out!" I heard Snow yell at me.

I turned around but was stopped as I felt a pain shoot at my arm. I gasped in pain and was flown to the side. I looked down at my arm and saw I was scratched by one of those Cie'th. I saw one of them getting ready to strike.

I felt rage over flow me. I got back up on my feet and dodged the attack. I shot the middle Cie'th in the head again. It grunted and fell down to the ground. Snow was punching the right Cie'th multiple times. I turned to the left Cie'th that was just standing there. I smirked and shot 2 bullets at it. One in the arm and the other in the leg. The left Cie'th shrieked and ran to me but fell on to the ground. I walked over to it and stepped onto its head and pointed my gun at it.

"Rest in peace" I whispered and shot the Cie'th in the head.

I turned to everyone and saw that they were done fighting the Cie'th. I put my gun back into my pouch and turned to everyone. Everyone was panting. Hope landed on his knees and fell to the ground. As Vanille put her hands on her knees and was panting. Snow turned around to face us.

"How did you get in here? You gotta leave" Snow demanded.

Vanille looked up at him and down at Hope. I looked down at Hope and saw that he was clinching his fists and was gritting his teeth. I looked over at Vanille she put a smile on her face and was giggling nervously. She looked down at her fingers and started twiddling them. Snow looked at me. I looked at him and shrugged my shoulders. Snow sighed and put his hands on his hips.

"Okay, listen. Find some place to hide and keep quiet, Once I find Serah we'll leave all together." He instructed.

"Serah" I whispered to myself

Snow started walking passed us. We all turned around to look at him.

"You'll be home in time for dinner" Snow said with a grin.

Snow was about to take a sprint but was stopped by all of us.

"Snow!" I called out

"You-" Hope yelled but was cut off by Vanille

"Wait!" Vanille called out.

Snow stopped in place and stood there. Vanille looked down at her hands then at Snow.

"Who's Serah?" Vanille asked.

I looked at Vanille then to Snow.

"She's his wife" I answered.

Vanille looked at me and looked stunned.

"My future wife that is" Snow revised.

He turned back around and looked up.

"She's a pulse l'Cie" Snow said quietly .

I clinched my fists and looked down at my self. My bangs covered my face.

Thank god. I could feel Vanille and Hope's eyes on me.

"Oh no…" Vanille said putting her hands to her mouth.

"She's here. Somewhere here with the Fal'Cie" I said still looking down at my feet. Snow nodded his head.

"I've gotta find her and set her free" Snow said. He started walking again. I looked up and looked at Snow. Hope stood up and clinched his fists.

"What's wrong with you?" Hope asked.

I turned my head to Hope and looked at him.

"Why do you want to help a l'Cie? They're the enemy!" Hope fiercely said.

I watched Hope in astonishment. I didn't know what to say. His shyness has disappeared at this exact moment. I was surprised.

"How can you save a l'Cie and not…" Hope kept trailing off

I looked at him up and down.

"There insane!" Hope yelled stomping his foot on the ground like a 5 year old.

"Probably, but hey I gotta do something, right? I'll be back!" Snow answered and gave us a little wave sprinting off.

Hope fell back down on his knees as Vanille dropped her arms down to her sides. I walked up to Hope and bent down next to him. I put a smile on my face and sat on my knees in front of him.

"Hey Hope, um, do you think we should follow or…um, wait?" I asked.

He didn't answer. I was about to touch his back but my action was cut off.

"I'd rather go to Pulse!" Hope Yelled slamming his hands on the ground. I flinched at the action his body made.

"Why is this happening to me?" Hope asked his voice was more gentle now.

I frowned. I felt like I was doing something wrong. I felt like I was starting to go down the wrong path on the road. I felt like I was going to cry. Hope seemed so…confused, stressed, sad, and …desperate?

"When they found the fal'Cie the other day we were only visiting Bodhum" Hope started.

I looked down at him and waited for him to continue.

"The army took us. Threw us on the train…" He yelled. He slammed his fist on the ground again. I flinched again.

"And because of that guy, my mom is-" Hope sat up and looked at me in the eyes.

He looked so sad. He darted his eyes away from mine and put his head back down.

"And he wants to help a l'Cie?" Hope asked.

Vanille and I looked at each other then back at Hope. I stood up and turned to the direction Snow disappeared to. I sighed and started walking in his direction. Hope looked up and was wide eyed.

"Starla, where are you going?" He asked

I didn't answer and kept walking. I sighed and decided it would be mean if I just ignored him.

"I'll be right back" I said and started jogging. A minute or two I had finally saw Snow coming my way.

"Snow!" I called out

"Star!" Snow called out back and ran to me. He lifted me up and twirled me around. We both laughed and I begged snow to put me down but he didn't.

"Snow! Haha! Stop!" I begged.

"alright, alright" Snow said and put me down.

He put his hands on his hips and looked down at me.

"I was just heading your way! I thought it I shouldn't leave you guys alone by yourselves! Who knows what you kind of trouble you would have caused?" Snow exclaimed with a grin ear to ear. I smiled and giggled.

"I was just heading your way, too!" I exclaimed back.

"Great minds think alike!" Snow said tapping his head.

I smiled and thought about what Hope and Snow were saying earlier. I sighed and looked up at Snow.

"Um, Snow?" I said.

Snow looked down at me with a raised eye brow and smiled.

"What is it, kid?" He asked

"Is it true, you will…um, going to set Serah free?" I asked

I looked deep into his eyes and he set his hands on my head.

"I promise" He promised.

I smiled. I knew Snow loved Serah very deeply with all his heart. He would give his life away just to see he smile. But I always thought, would snow always keep his promises? How many promises has he made? Has he every kept them and achieved them? But I was wondering about this promise. I think he shouldn't be keeping promises he cant keep. In the end it would just hurt the person.

Like me.

3 minutes later

I stepped up the steps and saw that Vanille and Hope were still in the same position. Snow looked at each of them.

"Hey again!" Snow and I said in union. Snow did a little wave too.

"Hey" Vanille said with a smile and a nod.

I saw Hope and frowned. Without thinking I walked over to him and bent down.

I wrapped my leathered gloves around his. Hope looked up at me, I smiled and looked deep into his grey eyes.

"Come on, Lets go with him" I gestured towards Snow.

Hope looked at Snow. Snow did a little wave with a smile. Hope snapped his head away and back at me. Hope shook his head and looked down at our hands.

"Hope, You have to talk to him. You have to. Or its just going to be a little thing that your going to regret forever " I said. I shook our hands at the words 'have to'.

Hope looked deep into my eyes and nodded his head.

"Okay" He said.

I smiled and we both stood up with our hands still together.

"Alrighty, lets go!" Snow exclaimed.

All of us ran after him and into a adventure of a lifetime.

Me: Yay!

Starla: Yay!

Me: Okay

Starla: Okay

Me: Okay, stop copying me

Starla: Stop coping me

Me: Ugh! Just review

Starla: heh. REVIEW!