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Friendly Criticism Chapter 2
The situation was much worse than he had imagined. A rock stood in between him and-
"Katon Ryuka no Jutsu!"
Ahh…yes. Uchiha Sasuke stood on the opposite side of the rock breathing fire.
Two hours previous
People looked up curiously to see a man dangling by the feet out of the window. Only the glimpse of a pale hand kept him from dropping. The shadow of dark ebony black hair jetting out in spikes was the only proof of a certain man holding him up.
"Sasuke-san, I suggest you let me up. Only I can fix your tragic, tragic story!" The man gasped out, struggling with the gathering of blood in his head.
"Is that so…" drawled the voice of the dark avenger amusedly. He loosened his grip, smirking when he heard the man cry out.
"Please! I beg you! Just let me up!" Kishimoto struggled to press the black button in his pants to alert his guards. The ebony eyebrow rose at the discreet movement of the man being dangled.
"If you so wish…" muttered the surviving Uchiha. Not a pant was wasted as he tossed him over the rail onto the marble floor of Kishimoto's office.
The man landed ungracefully with a grimace of pain. The black button lay broken in his pocket but the job was done. He saw the glimpse of a shadow of his guard hidden behind the window. He stood slowly brushing his pants and straightening his tie.
His hand raised to his glasses as a secret signal.
THWAK!
Kishimoto smiled at the smoke in front of him, "Now, now Uchiha-san, now that I have-" He broke off as the smoke cleared to reveal his guard tied with the rope in the Uchiha's hand.
Sasuke smiled cruelly, "Lets go on a journey." With a slight hand movement, Kishimoto found himself hurtling through space and time. Knowing all too well what this movement was he found himself wondering why he made Sasuke so strong.
Present
Kishimoto looked around fondly, remember drawing this place. It brought memories…it was the very place where Kakashi trained Sasuke and Sasuke's first meeting with Gaara.
"How was your journey?" asked Sasuke cruelly, leaning against the stone with a noticeable piece missing.
"MmMphmmphm! Mmph mmphmph mph Mpph…Phmpmph!"
(It was rather uncomfortable…I would have preferred to be free of binds, but it's fine.")
"I didn't quite understand," the powerful Uchiha smirked, raising one dainty eyebrow.
For a moment, Kishimoto was mesmerized by the beauty of the creation in front of him. The sun hit his beautiful face in the most marvelous manner. The pale cheekbones, the stunning lashes, the perfect lips! He had created a masterpiece.
Regaining control of his thoughts, "MmMMmmph! mMmph mph MMMph mmph?"
(All right! What do you want?)
"Ahh…that's more like it," Uchiha Sasuke circled one threatening kunai around one perfect finger. He stopped the circling and walked closely to his kidnapped hostage. He held the kunai at Kishimoto's throat and smirked at the sight of sweat forming on the older man's forehead. "What I want, you can't give me…you're the one that destroyed me," the young man hissed, "…and now, you're going to pay…Chidori!"
Kishimoto looked up at the sky and prayed to Kami-sama, Please help me!
As if Kami-sama had heard, the sound of birds died out and Kishimoto opened one eye to see a taller figure holding the Uchiha's defined arm.
"Ahh…Sasuke, I see you got yourself in a bit of trouble." Hatake Kakashi restrained a scowling Uchiha's arm, "It's time for you to head back," the masked man said cheerfully, "your time in this realm is up for now!"
In a fit of anger, Uchiha Sasuke threw something unknown near Kishimoto's feet. In response the kidnapped man closed his eyes and waited for a boom. When nothing happened, he opened his eyes to see his divine creation walk through a portal.
Kakashi smiled fondly after his prodigy, "My, my, my…you created a feisty one!"
He followed the Uchiha's form pausing to turn around and say with a smile on his face, "I wouldn't move if I were you."
"Ja!" The portal closed taking the two men away.
Kishimoto looked down and muttered, "Oh crap," underneath his breath. An exploding tag was attached to his foot.
Poor Kishimoto! I'm horrible to him! Next up: Haruno Sakura (or Kakashi!) And Sasuke eventually will make a re-entry to complain i think!
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