Chapter 4

WARINING: SOME MORE NOT SO MILD SWEARING IS USED IN THIS CHAPTER

OK.....I MESSED SOMETHING UP IN CHAPTER 3, Icewing SHOULD HAVE BEEN Icenose. I think Icewing is a real warrior cat..... my mistake.... any way.... back to the story.

"I Will never take back my words Hawkstar, You can't make me!" Icenose (Icewing) spat the name Hawkstar like it was a fish bone," And you know that Larkshine loved me! "

"You filthy little bitch! What right did that give you to kill my son!" Hawk screeched at Icenose, leaping at her.

"Your son was a bastard and a weakling! " Icenose yowled as Hawk's weight barreled down on her.

"Donny! We've got a she cat fight! I need back up!" Shadowface yowled. He was shocked at Icenose's past, did that explain why she was so fidgety?

"Oi! I'll try to pull 'em apart! But if I gets shredded, yous in BIG trouble Shadow!" Donny said warily, but he was running over any way, hoping he wouldn't be shredded, but as he began to step in, Hawkfur reared up on her hind legs, her ice blue eyes glinting in furry.

"YOU WILL DISHONOR ME NO MORE ICEHEART! I WAS YOUR LEADER! AND I WILL ALWAYS BE YOUR LEADER!!!" Hawkfur shrieked, bringing her claws down over Icenose's face, leaving deep scratch marks over her right eye, shredding her right ear, and slicing her nose."You dishonored your leader, now I, your leader, have returned your favor."Hawk's voice was suddenly calm... it unnerved Donny.

"Yes Hawkstar....." Icenose whimpered like a beaten dog.

"I'll give you a chance to start fresh with me Icenose." Hawk said "As you remember, I was a fair leader." Hawk's calmness made Shadowface feel.... different.

"Yes Hawkstar." Icenose meowed obediently.

"Do you have a medicine cat here Shadowface?" asked Hawk.

"Erm... yes." Shadowface said,he felt like he'd just came out of a trance. Padding out of his den's entrance, a large gaping hole in the twoleg nest, "Rosepetals! Over here please." Shadowface said, his voice shaking a tiny bit.

"What is it Shadowface?" asked the medicine cat, a slim, blue-eyed Siamese she-cat.

"It's Icenose.... I... I'll explain it when we get there, I promise." Shadowface said curtly.

When Rosepetals saw Icenose, and heard Hawkfur's story, she was shocked. Icenose.... a killer?

"I'll do my best, but the wounds will scar." she sighed. He slightly curled tail twitched with confusion, but she said nothing.

"I know they'll scar. That's how my clan worked." Hawkfur said." If you disgrace your leader and leave them with scars, they have the right to scar you back."

"I dishonored her." was all Icenose said.

"Hawk... yous not as big a wuss as I thought you was!" Donny said. He'd really thought that Hawkfur was a bit of a wuss at he wasn't so sure.

"You thought I was a wuss?" Hawk said.

"Not any more!"

"Whoah..... I wanna learn how to fight like dat!" came a voice, a kit had been hiding and watching the whole time.

"Barkkit! You get over here right now!" came an angry voice, Sunflower.

"Yes momma." He sighed obediently, but as he turned to leave he froze.

"Barkkit!?!" Sunflower meowed, then more softly, "Barkkit?" Barkkit remained frozen in his spot.

"Starclan...." Shadowface whispered, Rosepetal's eyes grew wide.

Then Barkkit spoke,

"Where the hawk flies, a mighty storm will arise, fire will burn fire, and only Snow will save us all." the voice the kit used chilled Hawk's bones. The voice wasn't his, it was... someone elses, it was the voice of another cat that Hawk new, Icenose new that voice to.

"Was that.." Hawkfur said.

"It was..." Icenose wimpered.

"Was what !" Sunflower demanded.

"Redfang..." Hawkfur and Icenose answered as one.

"Who?"

"My brother......." Icenose said, her eyes wide.

Well you know the drill.

I need someone to give me ideas on what Redfang should look like.

I need more character ideas,

so send me a comment with the name of your character,

their description, and a bit of their personality.

Thanks!