Hawkfur's story

by Redbane

A tale of a she cat fleeing her home,leaving her only family behind she wont tell why and finding a new home, a new life. Life seemed great! And then.... all hell broke loose. Rated "T" for some scenes later on in the story.

5. Chapter 5

Chapter 5

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Rosepetals, Donny, Shadowface, and the other cats' mouths dropped open.

"Whoa.... what the name of a mouse's tail just happened?" Barkkit mewed groggily.

"It's a VERY Long story young one." Hawkfur sighed heavily.

"I like stories." Barkkit said.

"Tomorrow, little one, tomorrow." Hawkfur sighed.

"Fine... will you teach me how to fight like that?" Barkkit said, his eyes were shimmering with that young peaceful innocence that all kits' eyes had, but now his eyes seemed to be... deeper, like someone had moved into his mind, moving things aside to make a bit more room.

"That fighting style is only to be used by leaders of my clan, It is not meant to be taught to others." Hawk sighed.

"Why is that?" The kit asked, "It doesn't seem nice to hold out on that sort of stuff."

"It's complicated little one..."

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Sorry it's so short!

I'm on a time crunch...

Well you know the drill.

I need someone to give me ideas on what Redfang should look like.

I need more character ideas,

so send me a comment with the name of your character,

their description, and a bit of their personality.

Thanks!