Chapter 10

(LOL sorry Emberpelt if your character acts slightly off, or says things that confuse you, I just write what pops into my head, and whatever ideas the few people who read this story add to my stockpile of story ideas)

"Just leave her be, I don't know what you did to tick her off, but what ever it was, it was stupid." the gray and orange she cat growled, rolling her eyes at shadowface.

"but, I, She, uh.." Shadowface just stammered.

Meanwhile Eddy was brooding over something, but his brooding was cut short when he looked up and saw the most beautiful she cat he'd ever seen, He was unable to think, just stare at the beautiful she-cat, looking fawn eyed. He didn't even register that sunflower slapped him, or that the cat he was fawning over was a pawstep away from him.

"Hey! Hello! Fawn eyed ruh-tard!"(LOL Ruh-tard quote from the hangover LOL XD) the rouge snapped. Eddy continued to stare. "Is this guy brain-dead or somethin'?"

"No..." Shadow face was a bit confused by Eddy's current state."Well, not usually." Okay he was Really confused.

Sunflower was just fed up with Eddy's current stupor. "Hawkstar! Eddy needs some more sense slapped into him!" she yowled.

"Slap him yourself!" Hawkstar yowled to her, still angry at Shadowface and refusing to trust herself no to seriously injure Eddy.

"Let me," the rouge sighed. She deftly raised a paw and slapped Eddy upside the head numerous times. Eddy just kept staring. "ya sure this cat ain't brain-dead?" she asked no one in particular.

"Well, he's a tom, toms are notorious for stupidity."said one cat who Hawk had yet to meet. "Iceflame, I'm second medicine cat..."

"Ah, May I ask why there are Two medicine cats?" Hawkstar inquired, rage temporarily forgotten.

"Well, I'm actually..." then Hawkstar noticed something. Iceflames's eyes were a clouded Emerald color, and they never dilated, even as a stray cloud covered the sun.

"You're blind." Hawkstar said. "I mean, not to be rude but, -" Hawkstar was cut off.

"No It's fine, I hunt better than most, I have better senses than most." She said, leveling her blind gaze at Hawkstar, she looked away, the seemingly dead gaze made her uncomfortable. "I wasn't always this way." she said, her words sounded mystic and cryptic in the tense air.

"Not to be rude but what about stupid here?" the rouge asked, flicking her tail at Eddy.

'So much for that... I'd better gather the herbs...' Thought Iceflame, looking slightly upset, but mostly frustrated that her plan has been squashed.

"I don't care! Rip his balls off and shove 'em down his throat!" Hawkstar snapped at the rouge, who just stood there, looking unbearably amused at Hawkstar's outburst. She had no clue that this cat had the advantage of extra lives.

"Tempting, But I'll pass. Any REAL plans captain PMS?" the rouge snapped. Silence met her bold words as Hawkstar leveled her Ice cold gaze on the rouge, the look in her eyes speaking volumes, but the rouge didn't heed the unsaid warning that the other cats had picked up on. Eddy had remained dumbstruck, his eyes blinking once in a while. Donny slinked away, fearing that he would see things that he didn't want to see, such as another cat's insides spilling over the ground, he'd heard the stories, but he wanted that to be the extent of his knowledge.

"That probably was a baaad thing to say to our leader..." Said Barkkit, who'd been lounging in the sun, now hiding under a bush, Fear clearly written in his young eyes.

"Momma? What's PMS? What are bal-" said Kenny, being the cute, and apparently, very slow-minded kit.

"AHG! WE'LL TALK ABOUT IT WHEN YOU'RE OLDER!" Sunflower hissed. Iceflame looked bemused trying to imagine her face.

"okaaay..."Kenny said, hanging his tongue out a bit. Yes, it was undeniable, he was definitely a slow kit.

"You... Leave... Now..." Hawkstar growled to the rouge, silently praying to her ancestors that this cat had the sense to listen.

Apparently, her prayer was unanswered.

"What if I don't want to? What if I want to stay?" The rouge asked, only to startle as Eddy spoke up.

"Stay..." Eddy rasped. Silence met his words.

"Um, Ed." shadowface said.

"what?" he said, turning to Shadowface, then his eyes went wide.

"I was Ogling wasn't I?" he asked in an ashamed voice.

"BLASPHEMY!" shouted Kenny.

"Now Kenny here, is a slow minded kit." Sunflower sighed. "I blame Genetics, my father was, impared." she sighed.

I DO NOT OWN EMBERPELT, SHE BELONGS TO EMBERPELT ON DEVIANTART! I'M ONLY BORROWING HER AND USING HER AS A SEMI IMPORTANT CHARACTER!

SORRY IF EMBERPELT WAS OUT OF CHARACTER. ^.^*

I'm always in need of more character ideas,

so Please please, please send me a comment with the name of your character, their description, and a bit of their personality.

(ALSO: Dragongirl, I Will get around to your chapter, I just need you to review, you don't have to have an account, just let me know if you want of of the moons characters to be turned into a cat, or if you want a cat named dragon in the story, or something like that, If you don't comment I'll just turn LD into a cat.)

Thanks!