Ok I would love to apologise for my friend's lack of commitment as I have been having a go at her every day for the next chapter as I am as excited to read it as I am sure you are.
Once again thank you very much for all your reviews they are been a pleasure to read and my friend couldn't be happier, she is even thinking of using parts of this story for her English creative writing essay! What do you guys think??? Hope you aren't too annoyed at her, I certainly was... :P lol...so anyway, here it is the next chapter... enjoy !
Two weeks later saw Bella leaning back into Edward's arms. Her hair whipped back in the strong wind, and the sea spray brought pink tinges to her cheeks.
They stood at the front of the boat, the setting horizon stretched out in front of her.
She felt a smile stretch across her face as Edward nuzzled his face into her bare neck.
She blessed whatever God's there were that after their argument two weeks previously in the parlour, they had grown so much closer, ever since that day James had left Bella well alone.
Edward, on the other hand, was being worked to the bone for annoying James. But at last Edward was happier with her around.
A slight tugging on her waist caused her to turn around in Edward's arms as he refused to loosen his grip on her.
She stared up into Edward's amazingly green eyes, and felt herself sigh with happiness.
He pressed his lips to hers, as she melted; she could only feel slight annoyance coursing through her as someone screamed, "land ho!"
Bella leaned further forwards, engrossed in the beautiful sight that was unravelling before her.
The island was slowly appearing, as if from a daze, the sun beating down on it, glowing, showing them the way.
Bella couldn't help but jump up slightly in her excitement to reach their new destination.
She glanced up at Edward, her face beaming with joy. He smiled her favourite crooked smile before, taking her elbow and leading her back down to the cabin.
She didn't want to go but she understood that she could not be asked to unload, as was too weak, and Edward wanted her safely in the cabin whilst he went to help.
Five hours later they were dumping their stuff in their cabin, Edward, his bare chest glistening with swear under the glare of the sun, had just finished harbouring the ship.
Bella swallowed her nerves and pushed him onto the bed.
She shuffled a bit, he drew breath, she had no idea what that did to him.
"It would be easier if you took your shirt off."
"Oh, of course", he pushed his torso off the bunk careful not to tip her off, and she slid her hands around to his chest to undo the buttons keeping his shirt together.
When his shirt had been disguarded on the floor she ran her hands gently down his back, smoothing his sides and the crinkles that the past few days had etched into his muscles.
Bella began to hum, the tunes of several beautiful melodies entwining into one, her voice lilted like that of a lark as she rubbed his skin back and forth, her small yet very commanding palms blessing his back with an empty, tension –removing state. She lightly traces the scars that she had bestowed on him. He flinched under her touch 'Bella?'
'Its ok,' she relaxed her fingers and continued with her ministrations.
Slowly Bella felt Edward relax underneath her, a sigh escaped her lips as her hands continued their path along his spine.
His breathing soon became slow and she knew he was finally asleep. The sound of his breathing slowly lulled her closer to sleep.
She slowly slid off his back, careful not to wake him, sitting on the edge of his bed she looked back at the Adonis that had stolen her heart, a small piece of hair fell in front of his eyes, without thinking she reached forward to brush it away but quickly caught herself in fear of waking him, he need all the sleep he could get.
She went to leave but was stopped by a strong muscular arm wrap slowly around her waist. She was pulled back against Edward's warm, bare, chest.
She was enveloped in his arms as she fell asleep to the reassuring heat of his breath upon her neck.
They were woken with a start when Jasper came barging in, alerting them that James was approaching the ship.
'How far away is he?' Edward groaned, immediately awake
'less than 5 minutes' Jasper replied. Bella knew that their moment was gone and that they may not get another.
Seven minutes later James walked along the deck towards where Edward was standing.
'I want you to spend the night on the island. Prove your worth and your strength to me, you'll take the girl with you.'
He turned away 'Oh be careful you don't know what might be out there' he chuckled deep and low.
'yes sir' Edward scowled, James simply smiled and stalked away.
Bella, who had been watching close by, felt fear rise in the pit of her stomach. Even though they were facing danger together, she knew he would be reckless to save her. Still, they would be alone, together.
The sun was low in the sky by the time Edward had completed the makeshift camp.
He looked over to see Bella wondering along the beach, the water splashing against her ankles. He jogged over to her grabbing her around the waist and spinning her around.
A surprised yelp escaped her lips as she was flung around, her legs flailing helplessly, her feet just skimming the water.
Edward put her down carefully and caught her in a passionate gaze, looking into her soul.
He reached down and silently entwined their fingers as he led her deeper into the sparkling water, not once breaking his gaze.
Edward stopped when he could feel the water splashing the top of his now soaking trousers as the waves sprayed his bare chest.
Pulling her closer Edward pressed her to him, still looking in her eyes his hands travelled down her back as hers reached around his neck.
His hands moved down and gently cupped her bottom bringing her closer to his now evident arousal. A warm desire instantly raced through her body, a sensation she had greatly become accustomed to.
Her mind was in a trance of the unknown, only now aware that he was touching her so intimately.
This kiss was like none of the previous ones, it was longer and more torturous, and awakening senses she didn't know even existed.
He slowly pulled her further into the awaiting sea.
Ok my friend is currently going through a writer's block and has, her words not mine "hit the blasted wall!!" . she isn't sure where this story should go or what should happen to the characters, she has a few ideas but not enough to create a whole story....sooo, what i am trying to get to here, and what my friend would really like is some help and ideas on where you guys belive the story should go, what should happen next and all that jazz.......
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