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A/N: Yes, this is it. I won't torture you any further with this process. I've pretty much got it out of my system by now. Here are the final stages of a Mary Sue that require some semblance of a plot. After you get to this stage, you're on your own, but don't worry, no more plot is required of you.
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The Ronins couldn't believe their luck. After defeating Tulpa, things had been quiet for a while, but then all of a sudden, another enemy appeared! (1) And this one was much stronger than Tulpa (2). Now, all of the Ronins were fighting a losing battle. They'd been battling for several hours now and were utterly exhausted but they didn't seem to be doing any damage to the enemy. (3) Just when things looked lost for the Ronins, another armored figure appeared and started fighting, immediately doing damage. (4) Within just a few minutes the new enemy was defeated, but opened a doorway where a bunch of other similar creatures dispersed throughout the world. It looked like they would need the help of this armored figure again. (5) The figure turned toward them and took of its helmet. It was Ivy! (6).
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1. Of course there's a new enemy, about 90% of fanfics have a new enemy. There's really no other way to go with it if you want any action. But you have to say it like it's a shocker. If you can convince yourself that it's an original idea, why shouldn't everyone else believe you? There's only two ways you can go with a Mary Sue: new enemy flick. Either your Mary Sue IS the misguided badguy that the Ronins have to save, or she's the overpowered newguy that has to save the Ronin Warriors. You can also have her be a good guy that everyone thinks is bad or vice versa, but it's the same basic principle.
2. The new badguy must be stronger than the old enemies because if the Mary Sue is A) the badguy or B) the assisting new goodguy, she cannot show how much stronger she is than the Ronins without a stronger badguy. And she is stronger than the Ronins, for no apparent reason.
3. These and many other statements that seem to be from the mouth of someone with absolutely no fighting experience or concept of time will appear throughout every fight scene.
4. It's perfectly okay to add in extra armors despite the nine armors that were written in the show, in fact, you must. How else can your Mary Sue be infinitely stronger than the rest of the Ronins. Her armor will somehow be stronger for no apparent reason. So much stronger, in fact, that she'll have instantly done damage where five armors couldn't do damage for hours.
5. Make sure you set it up that your Mary Sue has to assist again in the future, because there's no way on Earth the Ronins would willingly hang out with your character on their own. Especially with the superiority complex she clearly has.
6. Despite building up this character previously and being completely obvious that the armored figure is your Mary Sue, you must act as if it's surprising. No way, you mean you're really going to use that character you've added IN the story? Shocker.
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A/N: I really don't mean to offend anyone with the content of this story, I seek only to make people laugh and perhaps learn from the ineffective and overdone writing styles highlighted in this story. Good night.