HI got this story idea in my head, and I just really wanted your guys input on if I should do it or not.
I won't start it until i'm finished either "Changes to New Lives," or "Love the way it hurts."
The idea, I got was from the Lion King II, and yes I know why are you watching a kids movie, well it is a classic and I love the movie.
Anyways, heres sorta my plot.
There a two lands throughout Alicante.
One of the lands belonging to King Valentine, the other King Robert.
King Valentine is married to Queen Joeclyn, and have a beautiful daughter named Princess Clarissa.
King Robert has two children Isabelle and Alec, Jace Herondale is his adopted son who has trained from birth to be a killing machine, and to get revenge on Valentine, who killed Robert's wife Maryse.
Heres a small preview.
He looked back with so much regret, and so much sorrow. What my father said couldn't be true, it just couldn't but the cut along Jace's face tells me other wise.
Servants and Guards filled the castles foyer, my father standing in front of his trown, looking at Jace with a look of betrayl, and hate. The room is silent, waiting for what my father will say next. My eyes never left Jace, as he stared at me, begging me to understand. Then after moments a silent my father finally spoke.
"Exile." The servants and guards started shouting at Jace, telling him to leave and never come back, I looked at my father whos eyes still never left Jace.
"Father, please!" I begged holing onto his sleeve or dear life, begging him to look at me, but the Lady servants came over and held me back.
Jace looked at me father, then to me, bowing his head down in shame. He got on his black horse, giving me one last look, then made his way through the village where people threw food and stones at me. He got to the top of the hill looking down towards the castle, bowing his down once more in shame.
"No!" I screamed, ripping myself out of the ladies grasp and running towards the doors but the guards blocked it.
I collapsed to the groun in defeat, looking over towards the hill. Tears spilling over my face, and my heart breaking into millions of pieces.
He was gone.
So I hope you liked it, please review if you think I should make this story.
I would really like to, but I don't want to write it if no one will be interested, so please Review and let me know !