Okay. I just realized that there wasn't a train station fight until a few days ago…so here is the rewrite of what should have happened! I hope you like it.

Normal: Speaking/Actions

Bold: Authors notes

Italic: Thoughts

It has been a year since the glorious years of the Pevensies ruling Narnia and let me tell you that they didn't like the life of normal England, the country was still in the war. They were scared that their mum and dad have died already, but tried not to think about it, they have changed since Narnia, so let me give you a brief description about what they are like now…

Peter has changed quite a lot, but it wasn't really a good thing. His attitude changed, he started to get very angry at something that wasn't really that bad. He missed being king, everyone missed being royalty, so they all wished that they could go back, but nothing happened. He started to lose the family bond with everyone and now is just the older brother who can act like the youngest one of the four Pevensies…

Susan changed a bit too, thankfully she didn't turn into a stubborn boy like Peter. She looked a little different, she was becoming a very beautiful young lady, well that was what all the boys thought. She still thought logically, just like when they were in Narnia for the first time. But she still cared very much for her family, no matter how immature or stupid they were.

Edmund however was a very smart boy. He wasn't the bratty little boy he used to be; he turned into a very mature, caring, selfless and kind-hearted young man. He helps Peter whenever he can, but doesn't even get a thank you. He misses his family the most, he still has the picture of his father in his room, even though the glass cover is broken, he still prays, making sure that they are okay.

And finally Lucy Pevensie, she still is a kind, sweet, lovable, and a very big hearted girl, except she has grown to become a gorgeous young woman. She missed Narnia the most, because of Mr. Tumnus, the beavers and most importantly, Aslan. She is the one that appears to be right, even though not many people believe her. But that doesn't stop her from believing…

Susan was at the train station reading the newest edition of the POST magazine, when she heard someone talk to her.

"Um excuse me but are you new around here?"
"Yes, yes I am"

"I always see you here every morning reading…by yourself."
"Wells sometimes I would like to be left alone for a bit."
"Me too, what's your name?"

By this point she was getting a little annoyed with this boy, not only because he was trying to talk to her, but that he was staring at her, so she decided to lie.

"Phyllis"
Suddenly she heard a young girl's voice was calling out her real name.

"SUSAN!"

Susan turned around to find Lucy running towards her.

"You have to come quickly, he's fighting again!"

"Oh no! Excuse me but I have to go"

As the two girls ran to the train station, they discovered a massive crowd surrounding five boys, one of them was Peter. When he looked up, all he could see was the disappointed face of Susan Pevensie. But before he could speak he was pushed to the wall and hit his head. But within seconds another boy got involved in the fight, and that boy was Edmund.

But even with his help they were still losing.

After minutes of fighting, Peter got kicked to the ground, he was so weak, he couldn't fight anymore, so he closed his eyes and expected the worse, but in fact discovered something completely different. He opened his eyes to find a girl standing in front of him. At first the thought that it was Lucy or Susan, because she had the same uniform, but then he saw the girl kick the boy right in the face and knew that it wasn't wither of them. He quickly stood up to find a girl around Lucy's age, she had long brown hair and brown eyes. She looked young but could fight a boy twice her size. All he could do was stand there, gaping…

Within minutes the fight was over and everyone went by with their lives. Lucy went over to the girl that saved her lives, finding out that she was actually a sweet, kind girl, Lucy seemed to like her very much. She invited her with her brothers and sisters. They ended up walking into a very serious conversation.

"Your welcome Peter"
"I had it sorted Edmund"
"What was it this time?"

"He bumped me"
"So your best solution was to hit him"
"No, after me bumped me, they tried to make me apologize"

"Is that it?"
"Well when I didn't apologize, they said some things"
"About?"
"About the family"

"What did they say?"

"You don't want to know"

"Um, excuse me, I don't mean to be rude but, is this a bad time? Cos I can leave you guys to solve your family problems"

"No its okay, oh and by the way thanks for saving me and Peter back there"

"Its okay, it happens a bit here, those guys always start a fight just to get attention, but believe me, I always teach them a lesson"

"Yeah I know, I've never seen a girl kick that hard before"

"Well, you need it over here. But let me first introduce myself, my name is Michelle, Michelle Harkinson"

"It's a pleasure, my name is Susan, this is Peter, and this is Edmund"
"Nice to meet you guys"
"Its nice to meet you too"

After a few minutes of chatting, Lucy suddenly shrieked of pain.

"Be quiet Lu, people are here!"
"Something pinched my arm!"

Suddenly Peter felt it to.

"Ow, who is pinching me?"

"Can we all just st- wait what is going on?"

The room started to shake and wind was picking up.

"It feels like magic!"
"Quick everyone hold hands!"
Edmund, being next to Peter of course complained about holding hands, so Peter just grabbed his wrist.

Suddenly, the walls began to fall apart, and the tunnel began to rip open, and the train started to show a beautiful beach with giant rocks everywhere. Then…a white flash.

As the white flash started to fade away, the beautiful beach started to reappear. Lucy had this very bizarre feeling that she has been here before, the rocks and the sea were the same as Narnia, but she never remembered seeing giant rocks in the sea.

Surprisingly everyone was still holding hands, but when Michelle realized what was going on, she nudged Lucy gently and gave her a cheeky smile. When Lucy caught on, they looked at each other smiling, and at the same time, screamed…

"LAST ONE IN THERE IS A ROTTEN EGG!"

I hope you liked it! Review please!