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Previously…

Suddenly, the walls began to fall apart, and the tunnel began to rip open, and the train started to show a beautiful beach with giant rocks everywhere. Then…a white flash.

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As the white flash started to fade away, the beautiful beach started to reappear. Lucy had this very bizarre feeling that she has been here before, the rocks and the sea were the same as Narnia, but she never remembered seeing giant rocks in the sea.

Surprisingly everyone was still holding hands, but when Michelle realized what was going on, she nudged Lucy gently and gave her a cheeky smile. When Lucy caught on, they looked at each other smiling, and at the same time, screamed…

"LAST ONE IN THERE IS A ROTTEN EGG!!"

Everyone snapped out of their dreams and saw the two girls running to the sea letting their hair out, taking of their blazers, socks, shoes and ties, and without thinking, Peter took Susan's hand, this made Susan's cheek turn strawberry pink, they both ran to the sea, to join the girls, just leaving poor, confused Edmund.

"Hey, wait for me!"

Hours seemed like minutes to them, they were so happy to be away from the train station, time really did fly. Everything just seemed to be perfect

At one point, Peter and Susan were hugging each other because they were so happy to be with each other, Peter spun Susan around. When he gently dropped her, they looked at each other with love in their eyes, they never have been this close to each other, only when they hug, and they rarely hug. Susan's hands were around his neck, and his hands were on her waist, it was the perfect moment for them both.

While this was happening, the three younger children saw what was happening, so they got in a huddle, and thought of a devious plan.

Meanwhile…Peter slowly leans in, Susan does the same; they were literally millimetres apart, they didn't want anything to stop them until… they felt something, something that they felt before. And it wasn't the kiss.

It was the water that the mischievous three musketeers splashed! (He he!) And within seconds, another water fight was happening, but this time, it was a lot shorter because Edmund realized what was above the sea, it looked like castle, a castle that was attacked.

"Where are we? It's seems familiar, like it's Narnia."

"What's Narnia? Its sounds absolutely amazing though!"

Lucy turned around to realize the same feeling. Peter and Susan saw the castle, it took a few seconds to sink in, and within seconds, sorrow grew in their eyes, it IS Narnia, it IS Cair Paravel, or what's left of it. They recognized the mountain Cair Paravel was laying on, the trees and how green the grass is. Some of the parts were still up there. The colour, everything was the same; only half of it was destroyed.

Peter broke the silence, "It IS Narnia, its Cair Paravel! Someone attacked it! How long were we gone?" Michelle was starting to get a bit frustrated, because no one was paying attention to her. (By answering her question.)

"WHAT'S NARNIA?" Lucy finally snapped out of her thoughts.

"Oh, it's a wonderful land, where talking creatures roam, trees talked and danced, OH, and Al-ALSAN! How could he of let this happen?!" tears began to form in her eyes, Edmund walked over to her, and slipped his hand in hers.

"I don't know, but only one way to find out, we have to find out who cause this, with the help of our Christmas gifts of course."

Peter and Susan smiled at each other. They loved their gifts, all of them did, and soon, instead of walking in the soft sand and warm water, they were climbing over rough, cold boulders, remembering all the moments they spent in Narnia. They missed those days.

Edmund was still holding Lucy's hand; he knew she was going through a tough time, for she was the one that missed Narnia the most, Cair Paravel, her gifts and most importantly, Aslan, the sweet and warm lion that had a voice that made Lucy feel like she was truly home.

"We are here! Oh, who could have ever done this?" Lucy was starting to cry again. Edmund pulled her into his arms, he didn't like seeing her cry, no one did, even Michelle.

Michelle tried to find to doorway to the treasures, but the only door she could see (Or half of it) was blocked by a massive boulder.

"Hey, I think the giant boulder is blocking a door to your treasures." Susan looked to were Michelle looking.

"Oh yes, that's the door, Peter and Edmund, can you push it…pretty please?"

Peter and Edmund looked at each other and rolled their eyes. As they walkover to the boulder covering the door, Michelle put her hand on Lucy's shoulder.

"It will be alright Lucy, we are all her for you. The scenery is spectacular, whoever destroyed it will pay, I can assure you that."

As the girls walked to the door, Peter started to rip his uniform, break a stick from the tree above them and wrapped the cloth around the stick, as if to make a torch.

"You don't suppose, you have any matches do you?"

Everyone started to check their pockets, the results were nothing.

"Um…no, but…will this help?" Edmund pulled out of his bag, a torch. (Don't ask me why he has the torch, he just did.)

"You might of mentioned that a bit sooner, instead of me ruining my uniform!" He's going to be in trouble for that.

The girls giggled a bit, Lucy and Edmund looked at each other, Lucy was smiling brightly again. Edmund deliberately did that just to make Lucy smile (aw) Peter will understand, it was for a good cause.

Peter realized that there was a lock on the door, someone might have broken in, but the Narnians were smart, and locked the door before they could break in.

Susan came to see if the lock was old enough to break, but she wasn't the strong one in her family, so Peter, Edmund, and even Lucy tired to open it. No luck.

"Now how are we going to get in?"

Then, Michelle kicked the lock in half; this left the Pevensies staring in amazement. They were all in bare feet, so it would have been painful to kick it that hard, and not yelp of pain, or even show pain.
"What? Haven't you ever seen a girl kick like than before?"

Lucy was the first one to speak, and she was speechless.

"Um, what do you think?! Well, come on, I want to see the treasures."

Peter was being the gentlemen and told Susan and Lucy to go first. This made Susan smile. Lucy however was smiling at Edmund. Michelle tapped her on the shoulder and gave her the, you-so-like-him look. Lucy blushed at they all went inside, they just couldn't wait to see the gifts, little did they know that they were going to get the surprise of their lives.

So…ya like? Please review! I will update as soon as I can. I know it's a bit shorter than my other chapter, but I hope you still like it anyway.

By the way, I am publishing a new story, it's going to be called Young Love, its romantic, and Edmund and Lucy are the special couple.