This is my first published poem, so I'd appreciate it if you reviewed…
"Innocence"
When every ounce of innocence
Is left inside your mind
You start to care about everyone
And you're actions are too kind
When every ounce of innocence
Has finally left your head
You start going mad and crazy
And twist everything that's said
When every ounce of innocence
Is left there in your past
You begin to start to wonder
How it all left so fast
When every ounce of innocence
Is left next to you
You start to act childish
And everything seems so true
When every ounce of innocence
Is gone from all of Underland
Can it be save by that Alice
Or has the hourglass run out of sand?