Hi everyone, or anyone that would actually take the time of day to even read my fic, I usually take bad comments pretty well,but not this one. Yes I know some people don't care about my OC that's okay, that's your choice. Yes I know that this genre has been overdone, I'm trying my f$ing best!The program that i'm using to write does not have grammar/spell check.I'm not the type of person how likes to write but I had this in my head since I first played the Jak and Daxter Trilogy.Sorry AdviceMouse () That I didn't major in English/Literature I'll try to not make my self sound like a 13 YEAR OLD!Well, since no cares about what I think, here's the damn disclaimer.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own the Jak and Daxter Trilogy, if I did there would be a virtual reality where you can actually be in the game and the characters could interact with you to your hearts content! Just like that simulation room in star trek (I forgot which series).
Chapter II
"Let's take them with us , I smell a stom coming." The lead elf motioned his crew to put them into the dunebuggies and head off back to their home. As Nami, Jak, Daxter, and Pecker lay unconcious in the vehicle, one of the elves (the heavy set one to be exact) notices Nami's unique outfit. A black, long sleeved men's dress shirt, long red tie, black men's cargo pants, red sependers, with medium high black zip up boots; yes you guessed it she ws sporting the gothic look.Nami always had a thing for the gothic look, it made her feel comfortable and content despite the fact that she felt alone and depressed." Hey Damas, don't ya think this lass is from a crowd than these three mates?" said the almighty large one feelign on Nami's poliyester tie.
" We will find out we they awaken from their slumber, Kleiver,just have patience," Damas reassuring the very impatient Kleiver as they headed towards an enormous gate that led them into their city. When the gate opened enough for them to get through they entered just in the nick of time as the sand storm colided into the now closed gate.While this waas all happening Nami was dreaming...
Nami's Dream
It was dark, pitch dark, I was floating in what i don't know. My eyes were closed, the atmosphere was cold and silent, i tried to open my eyes but couldn't .As i tried and tried again the atmosphere changed, it became warm,then hot and humid, as i finally got my eyes to open i stoped floating. i was staring at something blue, it was the sky but not the sky I was used to seeing it was quite different. where am i i said finally landing on my feet, i realized i was standing in sand in the desert. As i looked around i notice a sand stornm coming my way but i had no where to go. so i covered my eyes and waited for the storm to hit yet i never came it stayed in one spot. I looked on in amazement when i saw a figure walking out of the storm , he was about my height with semi long hair with long pointy tears that's all i could see. then he reached his hand out towards my direction and spoke, "grab my hand, Nami" he said with compassion in his voice.
so I listened and try to reach for it . I couldn't grab it so I tried again while walking towards him and I still couldn't reach this guy's hand. "grab my hand, Nami, you can do it trust me," i'm trying but i can't reach you I said running this still trying reach for it but couldn't then out of nowhere a bright light started to shine behind this guy it was so blinding i had to stop and close my eyes. the last thing I heard from him was "Please grab my hand, I don't wanna lose you."
End of Nami's Dream
"Hn-huh?" Nami rubbing her eyes, "Where am I and why do I feel like I had a hangover?" Then she remembered what happened to her, the TV, the sand, seeing Jak in the flesh. OMG I saw Jak, the JAK! While Nami was basking over the fact she saw Jak she looked around to see where she was. It was beautiful, there were lit torches in every corner, water was seeping out of the ceiling into small pools on the ground, potted plants were spotted in in some areas near several pools the enviroment was peaceful, this place was fit for a king.As she got from where she was she some guy and a rodent in one of the pools, she then realized how they were, it was Jak and Daxter.
"Ahhhh, I love water," Daxter garggling water in his mouth then swallowing."Oh yes, it's so good.Desert bad"
"Please tell me i'm dreaming,tell me this isn't happening." Nami said sitting down taking off her boots but not her socks and dangling them in the water.'O-M-G , tell me this is a dream, please tell me that this is a dream.' Both Jak and Daxter watched Nami putting her feet in the water from afar, she could feel their eyes burning a hole through her. As she began to look in there direction Damas stepped down from his throne.
"Well, you've come back from the dead have you;And my monks were ready to pray for you.I am Damas, King of Spargus."
Jak looked at Damas with confusement written all over his tanned face,"Spargus? Wait, nobody lives outside Haven's wall... not a whole city."
"Ahh yes...we ARE the forgotten ones.Haven's city refuse thrown out and left to die.Just as you three were."
Jak glances over at Nami, ' Three? She wasn't with us during the ride to the wastlands.and where's Pecker?' Jak thought to himself.
"But now that you three have been saved.Your life belongs to the people of Spargus, and we will use it well.If it's actually worth anything." Damas, looking down directly at Daxter ringing out his tail drenched with water.As Nami and Jak looked on Daxter spoke up with disagreement to Damas' 'Spargus own you' line."Hey, That sounds like a bad deal!"
Damas stomping the end of his staff on the ground,"YOU are in no position to 'DEAL'.Out here everything is either useful or dead weight.Prove yourselves worthy, or the desert will be your grave." After hearing this, a now annoyed Jak, speaks up in his defense,"You need to work on making a better first impression."As the little conversation was going on between Jak, Daxter, and Damas, Nami sat in the back and watched as they all talked, she remembered this scene from her videogame which meant that there was going to be an arena event very soon that involved Jak and Daxter. " I need to get home. I can't be here anymore, I need to talk to someone but who?" Nami said quietly. Then she came up with an idea of speaking to Onin since she was the ' all knowing one' she could help her figure out how to get home, with that Nami got up and walked towards the incredible duo to see if she can partner up with them till she get to see Onin.
"Complete your training, then enter the arena.Just the bravest craw out and are allowed to stay in Spargus.It's quite simple really." Damas said while walking back to his throne,this gave Daxter an opportunity to ask a question that he soon regreted to ask.
" Um... what happens to the ones that don't crawl out?"
Looking back at Jak's shoulder where Daxter was perched, Damas replied." Then it would be as if we never found you."
"(GULP) I was afraid of that."
I'm sorry. I know it's short, VERY short but I've been having problems lately with the computer and my writer's block.I'll make sure the next one will be longer. R&R.
blu42nj out.