A/N: Hey. I know it's been forever since I updated this story. I just wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten it. I received a review today from tribebohemian and decided to address it because we have the same concerns. Firstly thanks for all the compliments and support I have received on this story. It is my first fan-fic and I feel it shows how far I have come as a writer. I hope to move even farther along, though. As for the concerns about the Mall Rats being a bit dry, I guess it's because there are so many of them. I have hopefully come up with a way to remedy this problem in the next couple of chapters. No, that doesn't mean I am going to kill half of them offf...-hands out paper bags to any who hyperventilated-. I am going to split them up, but I am not going to tell you how...can't give away all my secrets.
I am hoping to have Chapter Twelve : Pay in Blood, up by this coming Wednesday. It is the most action-packed chapter yet. Plus a neat little twist at the end for those of you that think I do those well. I hope I have garnered enough knowledge from working on my other fics to truly take the potential in this one and let it really shine. Please feel free to give me constructive criticism, a true author cannot grow without it. Once again, thank you so very much for your support. SpiritChild.
