Update: I have been thinking lately, and to be honest I'm just not quite satisfied with the story overall. I originally wrote this for a friend along with a picture (which is very naughty indeed). I know, I kind of rushed the ending and I mostly did it to post it up so she could read it. Much of what I put in this story was at the behest of my friend. But overall I am not satisfied with it.
So the itinerary for the story is this: I am going to edit the ending to the first chapter a bit. Then I am going to post an alternate version of this story (the chapter would be labeled as such) with a slightly different scene. It may seem similar, but it will have changed in a sense.
On a final note, if I get enough requests I might be inclined to continue the story. But that is only IF I get a certain amount of requests for it. I will be working on it in my spare time.
Thank You to all who reviewed and gave me your feedback. You collaboration was much appreciated.
Also: Continue Testing!