WWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!! I'M BACK!!! Emiri-chan is back from the depths of FF.net!!
Hi, everyone!
I am very sorry about the UNBELIEVABLE amount of time it took to get even THIS up... But as you can see on my author's page, I am currently engrossed in repeating the whole brother torture thing with Aragorn and the twins.
GOMEN NASAI! I couldn't resist!
I just wanted everyone to know that NO, I have NOT abandoned this fic, nor Rended 2: Ishin's Travels in the RuroKen section. NOR Ikiru in Gundam Wing! ....It's just taking an EXTRAORDINARY amount of time. If I post another chapter t an anime fic tho, it will probably be to Heal or Rended 2 first. I was younger when I wrote the first Rended and now, looking back on it, I may do a rewrite because I think my writing style has improved. Heal too, but maybe not, as it is much more recent. I would keep the original versions on the site, so please bear with me!
THis is a short rendition of what I have planned for the next chapter. I would like to REELY thank all of you for the suggestions! WHile I only write what I think is best, I do pay attention to suggestions I like as well, so wish me luck!
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Chapter...8 1/2?
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"OW!! Don't touch me there!" He glared at the fox kit who had jumped down his body from his shoulder.
"Well, if you hadn't made Kagome mad you wouldn't have gotten sat!"
"I don't even know what I did!" Inuyasha pouted in Shippou's direction as he followed him back to his hut. The fox-demon had been asked to lead the hanyou in for the night so he could rest up from the day's exertion. His thighs were beginning to hurt again; the deep lacerations left from Naraku's metal spikes hadn't fully healed, and now he was feeling the effects of standing with muscle that was hardly there.
"At least she sat you lightly. Honestly, I'm beginning to think Miroku's right."
The half-demon blinked. "Hunh?"
"Miroku says that all women are like that," the kit shrugged. "They all get mad for no reason, and they hit for something you do before you do it."
"Why would they do that?" Inuyasha was confused. Although it did make a little sense; after all, why else would she have done that... sitting thing? He hadn't done anything wrong. Maybe she thought he was going to do something?
"Inuyasha!"
A cry from behind him made his ears twitch. He smelled humans again... children, by the scent and sound of it. A few of them giggled as he turned in the direction of the laughter. There was a scuffling as a few of them shied away, but a single set of footsteps approached him, stopping at his feet. He knelt carefully, recognizing the scent.
"Nuriko?" he ventured. There was a silence as she nodded, then caught herself and gave an "m-hm". Inuyasha smiled. It was good to hear her voice again. 'Hear but not see. Maybe never again...'
"I... um," she said shyly, "I was wondering... would you play with us? We, uh... that is, if you want to..."
"Of course," Inuyasha told her happily. "There are a few more hours of daylight left. If your parents don't mind, then I'll gladly come. You'll have to lead me to where you play, though." He could almost feel the sunbeams her wide smile emitted.
"Inuyasha, you aren't supposed to be up too long," Shippou reminded him squeakily. "Kagome'll sit me by force if she finds out I didn't listen to her!"
"Well... go back and tell her I wandered off."
The kit stared blankly as he made his way off to the village square, then skittered away to find his surrogate mother.
'Maybe that's what she sat him for.'
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"He what?" Sesshoumaru's eyes narrowed. "Why?"
"W-w-well, th-the children of the village asked him to go p-p-play with them," Shippou was shaking in his--um, paws. The glare the demon lord was giving him was enough to shrivel an unsuspecting plant. "He-he told me to s-say that he wandered off."
"That baka," Kagome sighed. "I suppose he does need a little relaxation. We worked him hard today."
"We cannot let him stay out tonight."
Kagome stared in surprise at the youkai. "Sesshoumaru?" The look on his face was one of anger, uncertainty, and... fear? He was looking steadily out the the window, gazing up at the darkening, orange-red sky in a place where neither cloud nor star was in view. She followed his gaze and glanced at him nervously. "Sesshoumaru, what is it?"
"The moon. It is not where it should be," he murmured.
Kagome's heart stopped. "Oh God. New moon! Inuyasha reverts to human tonight!"
The demon lord nodded grimly. "I have been fearing this. If he does not have his demon blood and healing to assist him, he will relapse. I don't know how badly."
"Then what are we waiting for?!" the miko cried. "We have to find him and get him to Kaede before he over exherts himself!" Without another word she ran out of the small shack, nearly knocking the villagers outside on their backs as she went.
With a quick prayer, the Lord of the Western Lands leapt out the window and away into the twilight, forcing himself to believe that everything would be alright.
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...Not if the authoress has anything to say about it. Muahahahahaaaah.... Well, there's part of it! Wish me luck; I have my first SAT tomorrow.
Want more of that chapter? Then REVIEW!!! Mata!
Hi, everyone!
I am very sorry about the UNBELIEVABLE amount of time it took to get even THIS up... But as you can see on my author's page, I am currently engrossed in repeating the whole brother torture thing with Aragorn and the twins.
GOMEN NASAI! I couldn't resist!
I just wanted everyone to know that NO, I have NOT abandoned this fic, nor Rended 2: Ishin's Travels in the RuroKen section. NOR Ikiru in Gundam Wing! ....It's just taking an EXTRAORDINARY amount of time. If I post another chapter t an anime fic tho, it will probably be to Heal or Rended 2 first. I was younger when I wrote the first Rended and now, looking back on it, I may do a rewrite because I think my writing style has improved. Heal too, but maybe not, as it is much more recent. I would keep the original versions on the site, so please bear with me!
THis is a short rendition of what I have planned for the next chapter. I would like to REELY thank all of you for the suggestions! WHile I only write what I think is best, I do pay attention to suggestions I like as well, so wish me luck!
()()()()()()()
Chapter...8 1/2?
()()()()()()()
"OW!! Don't touch me there!" He glared at the fox kit who had jumped down his body from his shoulder.
"Well, if you hadn't made Kagome mad you wouldn't have gotten sat!"
"I don't even know what I did!" Inuyasha pouted in Shippou's direction as he followed him back to his hut. The fox-demon had been asked to lead the hanyou in for the night so he could rest up from the day's exertion. His thighs were beginning to hurt again; the deep lacerations left from Naraku's metal spikes hadn't fully healed, and now he was feeling the effects of standing with muscle that was hardly there.
"At least she sat you lightly. Honestly, I'm beginning to think Miroku's right."
The half-demon blinked. "Hunh?"
"Miroku says that all women are like that," the kit shrugged. "They all get mad for no reason, and they hit for something you do before you do it."
"Why would they do that?" Inuyasha was confused. Although it did make a little sense; after all, why else would she have done that... sitting thing? He hadn't done anything wrong. Maybe she thought he was going to do something?
"Inuyasha!"
A cry from behind him made his ears twitch. He smelled humans again... children, by the scent and sound of it. A few of them giggled as he turned in the direction of the laughter. There was a scuffling as a few of them shied away, but a single set of footsteps approached him, stopping at his feet. He knelt carefully, recognizing the scent.
"Nuriko?" he ventured. There was a silence as she nodded, then caught herself and gave an "m-hm". Inuyasha smiled. It was good to hear her voice again. 'Hear but not see. Maybe never again...'
"I... um," she said shyly, "I was wondering... would you play with us? We, uh... that is, if you want to..."
"Of course," Inuyasha told her happily. "There are a few more hours of daylight left. If your parents don't mind, then I'll gladly come. You'll have to lead me to where you play, though." He could almost feel the sunbeams her wide smile emitted.
"Inuyasha, you aren't supposed to be up too long," Shippou reminded him squeakily. "Kagome'll sit me by force if she finds out I didn't listen to her!"
"Well... go back and tell her I wandered off."
The kit stared blankly as he made his way off to the village square, then skittered away to find his surrogate mother.
'Maybe that's what she sat him for.'
()()()()()()()
"He what?" Sesshoumaru's eyes narrowed. "Why?"
"W-w-well, th-the children of the village asked him to go p-p-play with them," Shippou was shaking in his--um, paws. The glare the demon lord was giving him was enough to shrivel an unsuspecting plant. "He-he told me to s-say that he wandered off."
"That baka," Kagome sighed. "I suppose he does need a little relaxation. We worked him hard today."
"We cannot let him stay out tonight."
Kagome stared in surprise at the youkai. "Sesshoumaru?" The look on his face was one of anger, uncertainty, and... fear? He was looking steadily out the the window, gazing up at the darkening, orange-red sky in a place where neither cloud nor star was in view. She followed his gaze and glanced at him nervously. "Sesshoumaru, what is it?"
"The moon. It is not where it should be," he murmured.
Kagome's heart stopped. "Oh God. New moon! Inuyasha reverts to human tonight!"
The demon lord nodded grimly. "I have been fearing this. If he does not have his demon blood and healing to assist him, he will relapse. I don't know how badly."
"Then what are we waiting for?!" the miko cried. "We have to find him and get him to Kaede before he over exherts himself!" Without another word she ran out of the small shack, nearly knocking the villagers outside on their backs as she went.
With a quick prayer, the Lord of the Western Lands leapt out the window and away into the twilight, forcing himself to believe that everything would be alright.
()()()()()()()
...Not if the authoress has anything to say about it. Muahahahahaaaah.... Well, there's part of it! Wish me luck; I have my first SAT tomorrow.
Want more of that chapter? Then REVIEW!!! Mata!