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Dakota

This was going to be hard, especially without his arrows. "I need a distraction" I said. Then the wierdest thing happened, the whole lake (which was behind me) cam and rose, higher than the talos, if it touched the robot, it would short circuit. I turned around to face a bold lookig boy, about his age, he seemed to be controling the water. He was Perseus Jackson. He threw the lake onto the robot, then collapsed. So did the robot, falling backwards, sparking and destroying 1/3 of the trees infront of the lake. I ran to Perseus and tried to take him to camp, but he just wouldnt budje from the ground,then I noticed it. Using his powers wasnt the reason he fainted, a Mercury boy had shot a faint gas arrow around them, it mustve been intended for him. The reason he couldnt lift him because the faint arrow stuk through his shirt and into the ground.

I took him to the field hospital, now that i couldnt heal. "I regret my mistake" i told my sibling lying in the hospital. He had been trying to fight a monster with only his arrows. But of course they didnt work, and the monster nearly kiled him. "Get out" he said back. Why did Perseus help him? He wouldve died fighting. Now i have to return to the forest wait ing for my punishment with Jacob.

Finally morning came. He was to return to center camp by 6:30. He went there and saw Jacob, he was huge. One time they weighed him and saw that he weighed 230 pounds. They figured out that he was 1% body fat, 99% muscle. He was scared, Jacob had almost every weapon possible strapped up. 2 daggers, a double bladed pure imperial gold sword. A double edged axe, and just for show a pistol, that only carried blanks. Usually. Jacob had smirked when he saw me. I walked over, my dagger drawn, then Bobby came out from behind me grabbed me and disamred me. I was pushed to the feet of Jacob. This was Camp Jupiter.

Jacob told the same two apollo kids to tie me down to a chair in his cabin. They did as they were told.

Jacon walked in, muscles buldgeing. He asked "Why were you such an idiot Trying to poison The son of NEPTUNE" He ended the sentence with a gut wrenching punch. This wasnt a punishment, it was torture, it went on liike this, the same question cut after cut, punch after punch. I wouldnt tell why. They were trying to break my guts, by shooting blanks. I couldnt take much more of this, i was bleeding badly, they said if i answered they would feed me nectar and ambrosia. I gave in. " I-I- shot him- because they- told me- they would give me my-sister back,they said they had a way to bring her back from the dead." Jacob screamed " Who? Who said this?" I replied "Porphyrion, and... Gaea, but i only shot him in the leg." "It doesnt matter, it was a poisonous arrow" he screamed ending it with a harsh slap. "take him to the nearest field hospital, once wrapped up send him to the Minerva cabin, so Reyna can talk to him."Jacob ordered is top two interogators. Well... under him of course.

"Alright boys, thanks for the files" Reyna said. "look Reyna, please forgive me, i cant spend another night in the forest. Especially like this, they sent a talos after me, but that Perseus boy came and rescued me, hes now in a deeper coma than before." i said. " We will decide that at todays councilors meeting." she replied. " For your sister, you were going to put everybody at stake. Put the risk of never finding Jason at stake." she mumbled. She turned around and said out loud " What did they tell you exactly?" "who?" i asked " Gaea and the giant" she said. i thought about it and said " They said to me that the gods would die. They said i could become a king with my sister by my side. But all i had to do was shoot the next new arrival at camp with a poisonous arrow."

" You thought it would work? The camp wouldnt know it was you who tried to kill Perseus, you know the consiquences for murder of a fellow demi god are worse than what we are doing to you. Because of you Bobby and Frank are weak and cant defend our borders tonight." she screamed! " I am sorry, but i need my sister. We can still win the war. One demi-god doesnt make a difference." I said " One demi god might not, but a leader does."