Here are a few of scenes I took out of some of the chapters…

1)

Chapter: 3
Scene: After Lucy finds her looking at Edmund training
Reason: Didn't go well with the chapter and was moving to quickly for the story to go the way I want it to. In the end it didn't fit.

"Susan will be taking you to archery practice tomorrow." Lucy informs me after a while of looking at the field.

"What! Why?" I asked obviously intimidated and scared of Susan.

"Well… it's what all of us do." Lucy says quietly obviously not wanting me to hear. But obviously I heard her.

"Us?" I asked her.

"Susan, Beatrice, and I." She tells me slowly, trying to get the point threw. I understand the point but still don't want to follow it.

"Something tells me I don't belong with those names." I say quietly.

"You do. Emma do you see any other girl besides you here?" Lucy asks me.

I stay quiet but she answers it for me.

"You don't and it's for a reason." She tells me slowly moving closer.

"But there others. There just not here." I try to reason with her.

"There not here." She repeats looking me in the eyes.

"We only talked once." I said more to myself then her.

"That was enough to convince him that you could be it. You're here for him to truly meet you. Because he already likes you." She tells me.

I notice she's leaving it out the part of that am basically set to marry her brother. She leave's that to me.

2)

Chapter: 2
Scene: Before dinner.
Reason: I wasn't sure if it was really necessary for the story.

"What are going to do with the crops?" Helen asked me, I was outside looking at Arthurs crops. There were healthy and shinny.

"Helen we're coming back." I told her kneeling down to check the tomatoes.

"What if we don't?" she asked me slowly. I looked up at her she was walking to the apple tree.

"Arthur isn't going to leave his crops behind, Helen." I reasoned with her.

"But we can't take the crops with us." She said grabbing an apple.

I was about to respond when Grace came out telling us it was time for supper. Helen went in throwing the apple to the side.

I got up and grabbed the apple. Things are getting harder every minute…

I put the apple in a basket and entered the hut.

3)

Chapter: 3
Scene: During the first part of the ride to the castle, after they pass the village.
Reason: Didn't think it was really important.

"Sir Simon…" Helen started saying.

"Please call me Simon." Simon told her smiling. I was starting to think that maybe he get's pay to smile..

"Sorry." Helen said blushing. She's blushing this can't be good.

"Are you married Simon." Grace asked batting her eyes. I rolled my eyes and opened my book. I'm not so bored I want to hear (or see) Grace's flirting

"Actually yes. To one of the maids at the castle." Simon said shyly.

I peeked up from my book to see Grace blush madly and look away. Everyone shifted uncomfortably in the carriage, every one to involve in there own things to notice the small smile over mine and Arthurs face.

Hope you guys enjoyed :)