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Chapter 3

"Professor if you can do this why hasn't anyone done it before?" asked Harry

"Harry I have just found it out myself so I was thinking do you want to be able to see your parents again?" said Dumbledore

"Yes I would love to see them again but are they going to be able to see me, talk to me?"

By what I have done yes you will see them be able to talk to them and they will be able to respond and they will be solid form so you will be able to hug them, but I must warn you they are only around for 4 days at the most this is from my knowledge and I don't know if something bad is going to happen to someone because rising someone from the dead things can happen bad or good."

Harry thought for a moment thinking of all the good things that are going to happen if this works but then feared for everyone else of all the bad things that could go wrong. He sat there thinking of all these things and finally said

"So are we going to take this risk?" asked Harry

"I am willing to conjure the spell so we can all see them." Answered Dumbledore

Harry being so excited about seeing his parents asked

"When are we going to do this?"

"Tomorrow morning as soon as we are ready." Answered Dumbledore

"I'm going to tell everyone this the moment we get out of here so lets not keep everyone waiting." Said Dumbledore

So Harry and Dumbledore made there way out of the lounge room no one was in the hall way and so they made their way to the kitchen and just before they got inside Harry looked at the clock and sore that in was 6:30, It didn't seem that long. So they walked through the kitchen door and everyone started asking what it was about and as Dumbledore said he told everyone what he and Harry had been talking about. Harry wasn't listening but was sitting there thinking of what tomorrow would bring and seeing everyone's faces excited, but especially watching Sirius's and Lupin's faces that had tears in their eyes about seeing their best friend again.

So once everyone was finished with his or her questions they had a quick delicious dinner from Miss Weasley and then made their way one by one to bed.

Harry was laying on his bed wide awake unable to go to sleep thinking of tomorrow then unwillingly fell asleep have pleasant dreams about his friends and family all getting along.

Well there is my 3 chapter of my first story what do you think