Well this is going to be the first time where I respond to a review lol so bare with me it might be interesting for you guys to read it as well.
Here is the review:
I think you are going to have to choose between developing your own story or quitting this. There probably wont be enough of the two on the show to really on the episodes for background/storyline.
Now here is my answer…the reason why I don't turn this into my own story is because this is my style. I want to be different I don't want to be the same as everyone else where they make the characters their own with hardly no connection to the tv show. This is where I come in where I make it either take place, during, after or before the episode. I know there isn't a lot of contact between Jeremy or Tyler anymore but that's why I can bring them together somehow, in a way that my fans will like the episode even more. Even with my last story 'The Knowing" there were one or two chapters I didn't write because there was no interaction between the two. At least this season I'm trying harder and I will have you guys craving more. There that is my answer lol XD
Oh and sorry for no update last week I went to the USA and I couldn't write it in time. So to make it up to you guys it's two chapters this week!
Love you hope you enjoy this chapter, you will probably love the tie in I did to the next episode at the end here hehe ^^
Jeremy panted as he made it to the school where Tyler was at Football practices. Today was the worse, not only did he see Anna a lot more, the reason for it was because he was thinking of her. He didn't want to think of her but to see her there, all the time while he was with people.
His eyes widen when he saw Anna standing beside him and before she could say anything he changed his train of thought. He had to be careful on not thinking of her. He then saw the football players start to walk off the field and Jeremy slowly started to walk towards the doors to wait for Tyler to come back out.
It wasn't long till the boys of the football team started to come out, he just hope Tyler would at least listen to him, he needed to tell someone other then Matt and he knew he could trust Tyler with this. His head shot up when Tyler came out the doors.
Tyler was walking away from the doors but stopped when he caught scent of the sweetest thing he ever smelt and it was coming from only one person. "Jeremy" he said as he turned to face the kid. He was the last one leaving the school so no one will see them if anything happen. He looked Jeremy over and frowned when he notice that something was bothering the kid. "Whats…." He paused his eyes widen in shock when Jeremy ran towards him and kissed him hard on the lips. His arms automatically went around Jeremy and he kissed the kid back on the lips.
Jeremy needed Tyler and he didn't give a shit if Tyler will hurt him, if they fucked he just wanted him, to feel him. He slowly broke the kiss as he stared up at Tyler panting a bit.
Tyler looked Jeremy over when the kiss broke "Jeremy what's wrong?" he asked as he looked around before looking back at Jeremy.
Jeremy shook his head "Nothing is wrong…its just that…I….I can see the ghosts of my past girlfriends" he said as he looked up at Tyler.
Tyler's eyes widen in shock at what Jeremy said, "What?" he asked
"I can see Anna and Vicki" he stated as he stepped crossing his arms over his chest. "I've been seeing them ever since Bonni brought me back from death" he stated
Tyler's eyes widen more before he looked around "You can see them now?" he asked
Jeremy shooked his head "Only when I think of them" he stated and watched as tyler's eyes narrowed.
"Why have you been thinking of them?" he asked as he took a step towards Jeremy.
"I…you have been ignoring me! What I'm I suppose to do when I suddenly think of them and then they appear" he stated as he glared up at Tyler.
Tyler growled as he took Jeremy's shoulders and slammed him into the ground.
Jeremy let out a grunt when he hit the ground glad he hit grass and not rockand he stared up at Tyler. "What happen about keeping away from me" he said in annoyence when he tried to push Tyler off of him.
"I can't stand you thinking of your ex's" he stated as he lean down and kissed Jeremy hard on the lips.
Jeremy let out a small groan and kissed Tyler back on the lips his arms coming up and kissed Tyler on the lips.
Tyler growled and he took Jeremy's hands into his and pinned Jeremy's hands above his head. "No, I'm in control" he stated as he moved his hand down and placed it between Jeremy's legs. "I want you to only think of me…no one else understand" he growled
Jeremy let out a soft groan when Tyler started to rub him. He could feel himself getting hard under Tyler's touch. He then nodded his head slowly "I un…under…stand" he moaned as he raised his hips towards Tyler's touch, he couldn't stop himself from groaning when Tyler started to rub him harder.
Tyler then let Jeremy's hands go as he started to undo Jeremy's pants. "I'm going to fuck you and I ain't stopping" Tyler growled as he pulled down Jeremy's pants.
"I'm not as weak as you think I am Tyler" Jeremy said as he reached up and gripped the back of Tyler's neck. "Fuck me all you want I won't break" he said as he then kissed Tyler hard on the lips.
Tyler groaned against Jeremy's lips feeling how Jeremy kissed him. He then finished pulling of the others pants tossing them to the side along with Jeremy's boxers. He then undid his own pants and pulled out his cock which was very hard from all this time while talking to Jeremy. He then spread Jeremy's legs apart lifting them up before he thrust deep inside Jeremy without preparing him.
Jeremy broke the kiss letting out a cry when he felt Tyler suddenly thrust into him. "Shit" he said this was only the second time they've done it and he wasn't use to this.
Tyler panted and lean down "Sorry" he whispered as he kissed Jeremy softly on the lips before he started to move himself in and out of Jeremy. He moved slow at first before picking up the speed.
Jeremy let out soft groans of pain that slowly changed to moans of pleasure with each thrust Tyler did.
Tyler moaned gripping Jeremy's legs as he continued to move his member in and out of Jeremy. He could hear how Jeremy was in pain at first but it soon changed where he only felt pleasure. At this Tyler then moved his hand to grab hold of Jeremy's member and started to move his hand up and down along the shaft.
"Tyler" Jeremy cried out in pleasure as he arched his back getting closer to cumming. "So close" he moaned as he reached up with his hands and wrapped them around Tyler's neck pulling him down against him.
Tyler moaned and he thrust into Jeremy a few more times before he came hard inside of him, feeling Jeremy cumming soon after. He panted hard as he fell down against Jeremy.
Jeremy panted as he let his body relax against the ground, they were both covered in sweat and semen.
Tyler slowly sat up and stared down at Jeremy, he reached forward and ran a hand though Jeremy's hair. "You alright?" he asked and Jeremy slowly nodded his head in response.
Tyler nodded his head as he fixed himself up before gathering up Jeremy's clothes and then picking Jeremy up into his arms carefully. Jeremy's arms went around his neck as he carried the other to his car. He carefully placed Jeremy into his car before closing it behind him. He really hoped that Jeremy was going to be okay, not to mention that he couldn't believe the kid could see ghosts either. He let out a sigh as he then got into his car and turned to face Jeremy but his eyes widen when he saw Jeremy missing. "Jeremy…" he paused and he looked everywhere in the car before he suddenly caught scent of a vampire. He didn't know who it was, before he realized it was because it smelt almost like Elena, it was Katherine. He then shot out of the car looking around the place "Jeremy!" he shouted
