Hallo everyone! How is everybody doing on this fine evening? I hope you are all doing fantastic! Sorry it took me a while to update (not as long as matchmaker (cries) but oh well). Thank you guys for all of the reviews! You all Rock!
BBraeBabe and Digital98, I love you guys! You two have been with me the whole story! I love you guys my two most faithful reviewers! (GROUP HUG!) (Both of you: run and hide it's scaring me!)
BBraeBabe- Thank you for your review! Um I couldn't really tell if you liked it or not, cause of the word 'poo' that was strange, but thank you anyways!
Digital98- Thank you for your review! I am glad you hate Malchior and yes Gar was defending himself, but Malchior has very powerful parents (in my world) so right now, Gar is the only thing stopping him from getting Raven! Yay! Not really, but ya so it doesn't really matter if he was defending himself or not. And technically, Raven is the one who actually hurt Malchior, sorta! Hehe.
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Here Be Da Story!
"Raven?" Gar half asked and half just said her name. She looked up into his eyes and sighed.
"I am not going to let you go to jail. I can't do that. Besides you didn't hurt him, I did." Both Gar and Raven knew that he had powerful parents. They could get Malchior whatever he wanted, except Raven. Gar was the only thing keeping him away from her.
Gar leaned close to Raven so only she could hear him, "It's not worth it! I pry wont even go to jail! He could be bluffing. And I cant let you go through that kind of torture it's just not right! What if he hurts you?" Oh he had NO idea.
He went back to sitting normal. Malchior smiled evilly looking satisfied. He was nearly positive he was going to get his way this time.
"I don't know." She sighed. He didn't say she couldn't just dump him in a few weeks. Make him think the whole thing is real, then just dump him, get Gar and run away to a far away city. Then Gar could become a guitarist and play professionally. Raven could write poetry books and they could buy an apartment together and get married some day! But Raven knew that was thinking WAY to far ahead. "Whatever. Just as long as you promise never to so much as even THINK about hurting Gar again! Or then I WILL kill you!" She threatened. But then she sighed and looked at Gar's sad face.
"Anything for my sweet, sweet Raven!" he said, his voice full of evilness. Malchior decided he would leave the two alone for a while. He stood, holding his bloody arm, and not really worrying about his neck, he left and went back inside to find something to wrap his arm in.
Raven threw her arms around Gar. "Rae, now what? I am sure he was bluffing!" he whispered into her ear, as he wrapped his arms around her slender body.
"I have a plan. I can just dump him in a few weeks and we can run away to Los Angeles. Then you can find a band and become a guitarist! And I can write poetry and we can by an apartment together and be away from all of this!" she said it as if it were as easy as pi. (A.N.- my French teacher always used to say 'as easy as pi!' Yay! I like it! That could be where I got my strange obsession with pie/pi came from. (Goes off in another world))
"Rae, what about my mom? And it's not that easy. There is more to it than that! We can't just snap our fingers and have everything be perfect. Life doesn't work that way." He said sadly pulling back a little so that he could see her eyes.
She could see through him. He was sad, angry, and really heartbroken at the moment. "Gar, you know I could never love that jerk! I will always love you so don't be so sad. You haven't lost me and I know I haven't lost you." She tried to smile to make him feel better but it was pointless, he wasn't about to feel any sort of happy emotions.
He pulled her back into a full hug and held her tightly against himself. "I love you, Rae. Can I kill him? It would just warm my heart so . . . " he was cut off. Raven kissed him to shut him up and to make him feel better. He kissed her back, ten times more passionately than usual.
They closed their eyes and enjoyed the sweet kiss and being in each other's arms. They wanted to stay there forever.
Meanwhile, "Terra, you there?" he whispered into his cell phone.
He heard an angry voice answering back, "WHAT do you WANT at ten o'clock in the morning? It's too early!"
"Well I have some good news. Calm down. Take a deep breath." He heard a breathing noise coming from the phone. "There, now I got Raven, now all you have to do is convince Gar that Raven doesn't love him anymore and walah! He is yours to keep," Malchior stated happily. It seemed as though their failed plan was working better than expected.
Gar broke the kiss for some air. He smiled his normal smile as if he had forgotten everything that had just happened. But for now, that's all Raven wanted. Just to have Gar happy for now. And that he was.
The boat docked and there on the peer stood Terra in a short black skirt with a yellow top with a black star. (I had a shirt like that once (twitches)). Gar sighed. "I really don't like that little horrid traitor." Gar seemed one hundred percent oblivious that Terra was there to take him away and make him hers. Of course, how could Gar ever like a girl like her anyways?
Done! Yay now I have to practice my flute! This chapter isn't as well written and I promise the next one will be better! But I had a time limit so ya! Ttyl!
DreamerGirl02
