Hello! I am pleased to inform you that I was in fact right! You all hate me now. I am still debating whether to kill Gar or not. Hehe! I got less reviews than expected, but that's ok. It's not like I ask for them. But I am VERY thankful for the ones I did get!
BBraeBabe- HI! Thank you for the review! Yay! And thank you, I am proud to be evil! YAY. You never did tell me if you liked it, but that's ok.
Bb&raeLogan- I am glad you like my story, and I don't think Malchior is gonna die any time soon. Bet that is what everyone wants lol! Rock On! Glad you enjoyed my story! WEEEEE! Thank you for the Review!
Deadinside72- Lol. Thank you for the review, and considering I am the author, I will make him dead if I choose. Hehe. I am so evil. Lol. Thank you for hearting my story! I heart all of my reviewers! If it weren't for them, this story would be dead by now! I LOVE YOU GUYS! Rock On!
I-Luv-trees-FOREVER- I am glad you all hate me, just don't stop reviewing! Send me hate mail! Yay! Thank you for your review. And once again, I am the author and if I wish to kill Gar, I shall! Hehe! Evil I am. Rock On!
ItalianGal6547- Thank you for your review! I think you and digital98 are the only two who didn't say anything bad about me! Hehe lol! I like bad comments though, about me, not the story. You are right, I could make them look like idiots, but I don't want to! Hehe. Rock On!
Digital98- Ya, Terra is dumb. And I don't know if Gar is ok. They were in Gar's pretty painted car. I am sorry that I ruined all of his hard work, maybe I will make Victor fix the car, cause I really liked how I pictured his car! Very artistic and beautiful! If I decide to make Gar live, or for that matter die, Raven will go see him. Definitely. I wont make her hate his guts or anything cause that is just not right! Rock On! Thank you for the review!
Ok! I didn't say something last chapter, cause I forgot. READ THIS OR ELSE YOU MIGHT BE CONFUSED! Ok, while still on the boat, Malchior wrapped something around his neck and arm to stop the bleeding. You know, from when Raven cut him! Hehe! Go evilness! Ok just to make that clear. Ok Sorry for making a long monologue again! I'll try to stop that! Rock On!
Here Be Da Story.
Dick called Kori and Victor and told them to meet him at the hospital. Then he called Gar's parents and told them to meet him there also. Dick himself, jumped in his car and sped off to the hospital, well a driver sped him off to hospital.
Malchior's phone began to ring, and to Raven's surprise, his ring tone was Wake Up by Hilary Duff. Raven sighed and leaned her head back on the car chairs headrest. "Hello?"
"GAR! I THINK HE IS DEAD! MALCHIOR YOU HAVE GOT TO HELP ME!" Cried a voice from the other line, clearly being Terra. Malchior had parked in a different lot so he actually had to drive to a different parking lot. Not really wanting to, when he got there, he got out and walked over to the one sided mangled car.
Seeing Gar's car like that, Raven practically flew through the roof of the car. She ran around to the driver's side and tugged on the door attempting to open it. Finally, it budged and Gar tipped over and he would have hit the ground but Raven caught him. She dropped to her knees hugging his injured body. Raven cried silent tears that fell into the boy's messy brown and green hair. The next thing that happened was quite weird but nice in an awkward sort of way. The radio came on and playing was Free-Falling by Tom Petty. Raven cried a little harder and held on a little tighter. The song had always been soothing to both of them and now it helped. But it did bring more silent tears to her eyes.
Malchior went to Terra to ask her what happened. " What the heck happened?"
"Well, Gar backed the car up then a car hit us, but they drove away really fast afterwards. They didn't stop to see if we were ok or anything. I could have died! But look, now Gar is going to die!" She wailed. Loud obnoxious cries. Terra wouldn't shut up. It's one thing to be sad, but pretending to be extremely sad, that was just annoying.
Raven stroked Gar's hair as she cried. An ambulance pulled up just then and the ran up to where Raven and Gar were. The music had calmed her, but when the song ended, the radio mysteriously turned off. Raven looked up from Gar to the large medical cars. "M'am! Are you injured?" Raven shook her head. Though, she did stand up gently pushing Gar back to the chair.
"He is. Gar is hurt really badly. His heart is still beating, but he is unconscious." She explained calmly. By this time Terra was out of the car standing off to the side with Malchior, and Raven was trying to help get Gar out of the car. When they got Gar onto gurney and put him into the ambulance, Raven climbed in with him. Malchior didn't seem to notice. The police arrived shortly after to investigate.
Dick, Kori, Victor, and Gar's mom and dad were already at the hospital when the ambulance arrived. They rushed Gar through the emergency room then into a room. His friends saw him fly by, well saw people rush him by at least. Raven ran after him but stopped at the waiting room after being informed that she couldn't go in with him.
"Hey, Raven," Victor said in a worried tone.
"Hello, friend," Kori greeted through tears.
"How are you doin?" Dick asked in a caring voice. Kori leaned her head on his shoulder to cry after she said hello to Raven. Victor sat next to Dick. Next to Dick, were Gar's parents. She nodded to her friends and went up to Mr. and Mrs. Logan.
"He is breathing, just unconscious. I think he should be ok." She said trying to calm Mrs. Logan who was crying her eyes out. Mr. Logan was trying to comfort her by rubbing her back and hugging her, ect. Mrs. Logan stood up after Raven spoke and gave her a hug.
"Thank you, dear. You are such a nice girl." Raven hugger her back lightly. Her words made Mrs. Logan's heart pain cease.
"Thank you for calming my wife, Raven." Mr. Logan thanked. Gar's mom released Raven and sat back down.
"Sure." Was all she said in response to their 'thank yous.' Raven went over to her friends and sat down on the floor, leaning against the legs of Kori's chair. She leaned her head back, closed her eyes, and cried silently once again.
About an hour of crying and sleeping and waiting passed by and a doctor appeared in the waiting room. He said they could all go and see him now. But he also told them that Gar might not respond.
Mr. and Mrs. Logan went first and alone. "Gar, honey," Mrs. Logan spoke softly to her son. Much to their surprise Gar opened his eyes and looked toward them.
"Hi Mom. Hi dad." Gar smiled weakly at his parents.
Suddenly, All-American Rejects filled the waiting room with the sound of 'Dirty Little Secret'. Raven flipped open her phone and spoke, "Hello, Malchior."
"Raven, love, where are you?" Malchior asked with a hint of anger in his voice.
"Look, I don't care what you do I want to stay with Gar so you can just go to hell." She hung up the phone and slammed it to the ground.
Soon after, Gar's parents re-entered the waiting room. "Go ahead, he is fine." Mrs. Logan said in her normal cheery tone.
All four of them stood up at once. The walked quickly into the room where Gar was.
"Hey Dick, Victor and Kori! How are you guys?" He asked happily. Raven stood in the back and she figured that he didn't see her.
"We are most joyful that you are not badly injured friend!" Kori exclaimed giving Gar a bone-crushing hug. When she realized he was straining for air, she let go.
He talked to the three of them for a while then they left Gar and Raven alone for a while. "Hey Gar." She spoke, happy to see he was alive.
"Wow, you are really pretty. Who are you though? Wow, you are amazingly beautiful. Am I dead?" he questioned.
Raven was taken aback. 'Gar doesn't remember me?' "Gar, are you joking around? We have been best friends since we were born basically. We got together about half a year ago maybe." She spoke trying to refresh his memory.
"You're my girlfriend? Wow I am lucky. Uh, what's your name again?" he wondered with a puzzled look on his face.
"Raven, Raven Roth. But you never call me that. You always call me Rae." She sat down on the edge of his bed.
"Rae, that's a pretty name." he sat there looking amazed and dazzled by the name Rae.
"Ya, I thought so I just didn't like anyone but you calling me that. You took me out on your parents boat yesterday for my 19th birthday. Do you remember that?" She didn't tell him the bad things that had happened hoping he wouldn't remember.
"Well, I remember being on a boat, but I don't remember anything about it. Hey, do you wanna go out? With me, I mean. Right now?" He asked hopeful.
Raven smiled slightly. "Sure, but you cant leave right now can you? " He looked down at all the wires connected to him. He sighed.
"I guess not. That sucks. Hey, why do you look so sad?" he asked sitting up a little bit. He used his arms to keep himself up right. He was now maybe 6 inches away from her.
"Well, you don't remember me. We grew up together, you were the only one who knew my deepest secret. We would walk through the park and you would tell me some ridiculous jokes. Then you met Terra, she was a real jerk. She broke your heart. Then we got together and we were inseparable. Then this happened. You don't remember me now. And your car is ruined. . ." She was about to go on when he shot up and spoke.
"You're kidding! No! I spent hours on that car! I was doing it for the most beautiful girl in the world! I don't know who, but . . . Oh I spent hours and hours on that car. It cant be ruined! NOO!" He hugged Raven due to the fact that she was the closest human to hug. "My car! Where is it? Maybe I can fix it. It was so special. I painted it for her. And . . ." Gar got a sent of Raven and he gave her a funny look.
"Raven . . ."
Ok. I have to do my homework and eat now. Hehe! I hope you all watch Naruto tonight! Then on Wednesday you should all watch the Grammies and pray that Avril Lavigne is there, even though she probably inst going to be, but hey have hope right? Enjoy!
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