Battle Ark 5

by J.V.J Heartless

Yusei has a dark secrect to his past,once out. Yusei and his wife,Akiza are on the run for thier lifes. Battle Ark 5 are out to kill him. Preview chapter is up.

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Thank You TO All

Thank you for reading and faving my work mostly for Battle Ark 5 it make worth while to keep updating. The list of name of those who liked my story are here:

I like where you are going w/ the story but I am a bit confused because your story says Yusei is married to Yubel and the summary says his wife is Akiza.

SilverHeart92

I'm liking where this story is going but I'm really confused it says in the summary that Akiza is Yusei's wife and not Yubel. Keep up the good work.

dbzgtfan2004

This is a good story. Please continue. Yusei and Aki forever.

Ladywiz

very imaginative and exciting.

Ladywiz

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Ladywiz

good going!

Ladywiz

Dear Ms Heartless,

You didn't learn English when you should have so it's perfectly understandable that you have trouble spelling; don't worry about it. Even spellcheck doesn't catch everything. The more you read and write (and type carefully), the better you will get. And you have a great vocabulary and writing style.

If you get helpful criticism, that is useful. But if readers are just putting you down, go ahead and block them.

KEEP WRITING!

Ladywiz

These people should be in jail! Are they in a gang?

zane knight

You had me going there in that chapter! It's really goooood. You should have the sceond one come out in July 2! Looking forword to it!

Starberrylove95

This chapter is really short but it EXPILAIN what is happing. Is Yubel is the same from Yu-Gi-Oh GX? Or she is made up?

zane knight

Hrash! thay wabt the main dead and his wife they poeple don't give a man a brake in his life.

Starberrylove95

IS ALIVE! well in this one he is.

zane knight

Starberrylove95

Is she Yusei' mum? I wanna Know!

16.) Zane knight

I know this was Yubel from Gx I just know it!

17.) alaskamanmountie 12

this is awesomse i loved jvj keep making more !

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Thank You all again for reading my story.

Battle Ark 5:Retrunes

Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D

Heartless/Wakamiya

Note: Has been set for reasled date.

Posting: July 22

Writting: July 22

Yusei and his friends must track down the killer who killed Rader. Jaden stays in hinding. Hasaki must bring a family back together. A crose over Yu-Gi-Oh 5D/Yu-Gi-Oh GX

Coming in March