Okay so I'm not sure if anyone actually read the edit of the first chapter, but here's the second one anyway.

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DannyPhantomxME: Thanks for the tip, I have changed my story description now but sadly I couldn't fit everything I wanted so it's just a little less descriptive then I hope. I'll try and make the chapters abit longer too.

DizzlyPuzzled: The word limit thing does sound like a good Idea. Just so everyone knows, I only get to submit these when I visit my dad's house, so I write at mum's and submit at dad's so when ever I come here there might be a couple of chapters coming up at once. Breaking the story up, well I've tried that abit more on this one. And making it longer i've done aswell, but sadly not much longer :(. I'll try my best. Thanks for reviewing!

Major Simi: Good work for picking up on my idea. Just so you know this story is set before Phantom Planet and before Hong Kong Long's. Yes, I will try to make it longer. Thanks so much for reviewing and i'm glad you like it.

Chapter 2- The Long's meet a Phantom

Danny actually got off kind of lucky with Dash who only punched him twelve times before getting bored, but Danny was sure he would still bruise.

Danny sighed and collected his bag up from the pickup station and began to walk around looking for the Long family. It didn't take long before he noticed a sign that read, 'Daniel Fantem.'

At first he panicked at the fact that the name sounded even more similar to his alto ego self, but decided he would risk going over.

He walked over to the man holding it and the other three members of the group standing around him.

"Are you the Longs?" He asked the family of four.

"That depends, are you with the police," the man replied that started laughing and held out his hand. "Just joking, we are the Long's. I'm Jonathon and you must be Daniel."

"Call me Danny," he replied, shaking the offered hand.

"Well Danny, this is my wife Susan," continued Jonathon. "And this is Jake and Hayley."

Danny waved them each a 'hi' in turn as they were introduced.

"Well how about we get back to the house," said John. "I'm sure Jake will help you with your bags." He motioned his head towards the bags and Jake stepped forward to help.

Danny's heart skipped a beat. He couldn't let Jake pick up that bag. It was extremely heavy that even Jack hadn't been able to lift it at home, and he was extremely strong. They would easily catch on that there was something different about Danny.

"No, it's okay," began Danny, reaching for the handle as Jake did, causing their hands to lightly touch and the strangest thing happened.

Danny's eyes flashed green for the duration that they touched and Jake felt some of his dragon fangs inside his mouth begin to develop, but as soon as they pulled their hands away it stopped. The two stared at each other for a moment, before Jake reached for the bag before Danny could and too the halfas surprise, lifted it.

"Come on, let's go," instructed John as Danny watched Jake carry the heavy bag away with ease. Maybe his Dad wasn't really that strong…

The five of them headed for the airport's exit, when suddenly Danny's ghost sense went off. Startled, he scanned the area.

"What's a ghost doing in New York?" He thought to himself, when suddenly a figure appeared above their heads.

"Skulker," hissed Danny under his breath.

"Show yourself ghost child so I may defeat you and lay your pelt at the foot of my bed!" The ghost called angrily. Danny quickly ran off un-noticed due to everyone in the airport being completely absorbed with the sight of the evil ghost. Danny hid behind a trash can, turned ghost and phased through the ground. He then phased through the other wall and appeared behind Skulker.

"One Skulker, Ewww!" He said, shooting the ghost with an Ecto-blast from behind causing him to smash to the ground.

"And two, stop trying, you'll never win." He rained some more Ecto-blasts down on the ghost, tiring him out, only stopping to pull the Fenton thermos from his belt. He was just aiming it at Skulker when the hunter ghost, phased through the ground. Danny waited cautiously in the air for Skulker to come flying back.
'Come out Skulker! It's time to go back to the ghost zone!' Called Danny. There was no reply. He remained waiting, but still Skulker didn't return.

-Meanwhile-

Jake stood on the ground watching in amazement. There was some sort of magical creatures up there fighting. He thought of dragooning up and solving this problem, but he saw no need. The strange kid in the black and white suit with the DP symbol and the white hair seemed to have it under control, but still Jake wanted to find out who and what kind of magical creature he was.

Once the giant metal creature the kid called 'Skulker' had disappeared, Jake saw it as his opportunity. He ran around a corner and called out,
"Dragon Up!" There was a flash of blue light and he transformed into a large red dragon. He flew out into the other room.

"Dragon!" Came some terrified screams from below, but nobody left. They all wanted to see what would happen.

"Who are you and what kind of magical creature are you?" Jake yelled at Danny in a supreme voice. Jake expected Danny to surrender his form to the American Dragon, but instead he did something very shocking.

He doubled over laughing.

"What?" Asked Jake, confused.

"Ma-ma-magical creature?" Danny replied as he tried to stop laughing. "I'm no magical creature, I'm a ghost!" He yelled laughing even more. A few of the people bellow gasped at this.

Jake looked panicked but acted brave.

"Well who are you? And where did you come from?"

"Well I'm Danny Phantom, and that other ghost who I just saved everyone from is Skulker."

"Well you didn't really save anyone considering he just GOT AWAY!" Jake yelled back.

"Calm down, you Ermm… are you a lizard?"

"No!" Yelled Jake offended. "I'm the American Dragon. Hero of New York City, completely undefeatable!" Danny was about to protest when he saw Skulker phase through the wall behind Jake.

"Let's see then," tormented Danny, as Skulker shot Jake in the back with an Ecto-blast, he hurtled towards the ground but caught himself before he smashed into a group of screaming onlookers.

"Maybe a red flying lizard's pelt would look nice on my wall. It may impress my girlfriend," thought Skulker aloud.

"Who Ember?" Teased Danny. "Oviosally she hasn't seen your natural self."

"Not funny whelp," snarled Skulker.

"Oh but Skulker, it was," Danny replied shooting some ice blasts at Skulker.

"Ha! I've recreated my suit so it deflects your ice abilities whelp!" Laughed Skulker without noticing Jake coming up behind him.

"What about fire abilities?" Jake asked sarcastically, before catching Skulker on fire.

"Ha! Serve's you right for shooting the Am Drag!" Boasted Jake.

"Hot Metal, hot metal!" Came a squeaky voice from inside Skulker's suit and a small green blob came out. Danny grabbed a hold of the blob.

"Now that's what Ember wants to see," teased Danny, holding out the Fenton Thermos. "See you Skulker," Danny sucked the small ghost into the thermos. Jake then flew up towards Danny.

"Now-" he began, but Danny interrupted.

'Sorry Dragon, gotta fly,' and with that, Danny turned invisible and flew away.

"Aww...man," moaned Jake as he too flew away. They both went and hid from view. Danny Phantom turned back to Danny Fenton and the American Dragon turned back to Jake Long. They both ran back over to the rest of the Long family.

"That was amazing!" Exclaimed John.

"I wonder why there's ghosts' here. We've never had a problem with them before," Jake added.

"There must be a portal to the ghost zone around, there all over the world." The Long's gave him a puzzled look.

"Okay well here's the story. My parents are ghost hunters, it's sort of the family business, so I know all about ghosts," Danny explained.

"Your parents are ghosts hunters?" Hayley replied.

"Yup," Danny answered. "Strange I know."

"Actually that's pretty cool," contributed Jake and Susan nodded.

"What about that o-" began Hayley, but John interrupted.

"How about we get to the car and then Danny can tell us everything on the drive home."

The group continued towards the door and had just reached the exit when Danny heard a call.

"Hey Fenturd!" Danny turned around slowly to see Dash approaching with another boy. Jake turned around as well.

"What do you want Dash/ Brad?" Moaned Danny and Jake at the same time before looking at each other. "You know him?" They asked each other at the same time again.

"Staying with the Long's for two months. Man, you'll learn a lot about being a loser over that time." Teased Brad.

"And you'll have to live without your goth girlfriend too," added Dash.

"She's not my girlfriend!" Yelled Danny.

"Is that why Paulina, Valarie and Kwan all claim they caught you kissing?" Dash made kissy noises. Danny's eyes flashed green, and Jake noticed.

"That's not true! It was a fake out make out!" Danny yelled angrily. A couple of passer- byers stooped and looked at him.

"We should go," informed Jake walking away. Danny let out a huff before following.

"So, who's that Dash kid?" Jake asked, while he thought about what he saw Danny's eyes do.

"He's the other kid who got a transfer here from Amity Park. He like's shoving kids into lockers, bashing me up when he fails a test. That sort of thing.' Jake nodded. "What about the Brad guy?" Asked Danny.

"Just the school Bully," Jake replied simply.

After a bit more walking they eventually reached the car and Danny had to sit in the back beside Jake and a couple of times they touched each other's arms or legs causing Danny's eyes to turn neon green and Jake's fangs to grow.

"So what's life like in Amity Park?" Asked John.

"Well, we're always being attacked by ghosts like Skulker back there and our mayor's a Frootloop who's in love with my mum. He even named his cat Maddie,' was Danny's reply.

"I'm guessing your mums name is Maddie," said Jake. Danny nodded.

"So what are the ghost's like?" Asked Hayley.

"Well there's good ones like Danny Phantom, that ghost back at the airport and bad one's like Technus, Ember, Desiree, just to name a few. There are also some really useless ones like Lunch Lady and Box Ghost."

"Box Ghost?" Questioned Jake.

"Yeah, if you ever meet him you won't need to ask who he is. He like flying around screaming, I AM THE BOX GHOST! BEWARE!" Danny laughed. "It's really funny actually."

"And what about this ghost zone place you've been talking about?" Asked Susan.

"Well it's where all the ghost's live. Some just stay there and roam around and other's come out and try to take over the world."

"How do you know about the ghost zone?" Asked Hayley.

"My parent's made a portal to get in there. They have never used it, but I've visited a couple of times in the Spector speeder with my friends, Sam and Tucker."

"Speaking of friends," interrupted Susan, "There's no school tomorrow so Jake can show you around and you can meet his friends, Trixie and Spud."

"Cool," said Danny simply, but then something caught his eyes. A large banner hanging over the rode that read...

"Ember!" Exclaimed Danny, surprised.

"You not one of that stupid teen sensations fans are you?" Moaned John.

"No!" Exclaimed Danny. "I mean, she was a bit of an idol at Amity Park till the public found out she's actually a ghost."

"Ember McLain's a ghost!" Yelled Jake. Danny nodded.

"Yup, she uses her guitar to brainwash teenagers and the more people chanting her name the more powerful she gets." Explained Danny. Before anymore could be said, traffic stopped flowing and John quickly slammed on the brakes. Suddenly they heard something land on the top of the car and a hand reached through the roof and grabbed a hold of Danny's collar, turned him intangible and pulled him up out of the car.

Ohhhh, Cliffhanger!

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