"Sounds like trouble, come on boy" Steve exclaimed while rushing to the scene. " Oh god" Steve said while watching the scene happen. The scene was, a girl was laying on the ground being kicked by a group that calls there self's rainbow griefers. Their were one of the loudest jerkiest groups of all time, but while they sound bad, they only attack either one person or a weak village, they never pick on someone tougher than they are, except the elites, they are the most bravest out of the group, there motto is, "either die for something, or live for nothing". OK back to the story. "Alright, Jack if something wrong happens run to the village and lead the chief here, because God knows I'm not a fighter, I'm good hearted, OK Jack go" Steve whispers to Jack. Jack ran up the hill they came from and watched from a distance, Steve on the other hand was behind a pile of sand, thinking of what to do. "screw it!" Steve yells while running towards the rainbow griefers. Surprised, the rainbow griefers turned around and blocked. The rainbow griefers friend ran behind Steve and punched him in the back. Steves body went forward, in a result a huge cut appeared on his chest, and started bleeding. "Look at what be got here, the guy that wears blue all the time, you wanna know what blue stands for, a squid and guess what squids are, stupid, weak and peaceful mobs, like you! " The leader of the rainbow griefers said. A arrow shot out of the woods and hit the griefers in the arm. "ahhgh, what the-RUNNN" the leader Exclaimed while running away. The chief of the village and his townspeople emerged from the forest, about 6 or 7 people. "you wanna know what else blue stands for, diamond, and diamonds are strong, valuable and rare to find." the chief says while helping Steve up "you OK great one" "yes" Steve said while getting up "OK Steve if you need anything, we are here for you" the chief said while walking back to the village. Steve walked over to the girl, but the was out cold, so Steve picked her up and brought her to his house and laid her on his bed "I hope tomorrow will be a better day for both of us" when he did that Steve went downstairs and sleeped in the guest bed beside Jack.

-authors note-

I got my first review which was exciting, it helped my mood and helped me put more work into my story, I have been a little stressed out but it's OK, cya guys!