I'm going to postpone all my other stories and finish one at a time. This one was my third story to be written, so this'll be the third to be finished. Then it will be I'm a Black Cat and then Different to Special. I'm not going to continue Guess the Warrior (in Poems) unless you really want me too (because don't wanna disappoint my fans). Warrior Cat Generator Thingy Of Awesomeness, I will try to continue, updating everyone in a while. I might also take the story within it, and make it and actual individual one on fanfic. Sorry about changing the clan's tree to a rock. Anyway, I feel since I haven't been active on my account for a long time, I owe you an extra long chapter. Here we go, 923 words (approximately):
"Great!" Breezestar curled his lips into a smile "your mentor will be Smokewhisper (ooh! Ominous name!). Smokewhisper, you are a great fighter and have courage no one could underestimate. I trust you to pass on these skills to Vixenpaw"
Only a few cats cheered. Her family smiled, not getting was was going on but recognizing it as a happy moment. Vixen-wait, she was Vixenpaw now- beamed inside.
"That black cat over there, he's your mentor. Go up to him" Breezestar whispered to him. Vixenpaw bounded down from the rock. Unsure what to do, she just stood in front of the massive black cat. Stiffly, he reached out his neck and touched her nose with his.
"Vixenpaw!" Foxfrost was among the only cats that cheered. Her family didn't know what was going on, but they understood it was a cause for celebration. They stamped their feet, traditional celebration style. The other cats looked at them strangely, Crimson shot an arrogant look back. Some cats recoiled.
Since the ceremony was over, Vixenpaw bounded over to her family.
"What were they doing?" "Why were they yowling" "Who was that black fennecin?" Streak and Crimson hit her with a storm of questions.
"Umm... Well, they have this system where you go through certain steps to become something called a warrior, I think."
"You mean like Milk name, Meat name, Hunter name"
"Sort of. But their system is weird, ours makes much more sense"
"Well, of course, they are fennecins"
Vixenpaw stiffled laughter.
"We have another matter on our paws" Breezestar called out across the clearing "as I said before, we fould a family of foxes, two cubs and and adult female. They are Vixenpaw's adoptive family, but they are still foxes. Therefore, they are banished from out territory, wether they go peacefully or not! We will keep Vixenpaw, but the foxes must go"
Vixenpaw gasped.
"What? What did he say?" Crimson asked. Vixen delivered the bad news to her family.
"What?" Streak growled "they dare"
Melody sighed. Just then, Foxfrost came up.
"Can you beleive Breezestar?" He said.
"Who's this dog-faced fennecin" Streak's fur bristled. Vixenpaw quickly made introductions, explaining how Foxfrost was on their side.
"Well, if he's your friend, then he's mine as well" Crimson said.
"What did she say?" Foxfrost whispered to Vixenpaw.
"She said that since you're my friend, then your her's as well"
"Cool!" Foxfrost mewed "I never thought I'd be friends with a fox!"
"Cool!" Streak said at the same time "I never though I'd be friends with a fennicin."
"Can he teach me how to speak fennecin?" Crimson asked, and eyed Foxfrost like she was inspecting a prize prey.
"I guess, want to ask him?" Vixenpaw asked. Crimson nodded. Vixenpaw whispered how to in her ear.
"Can you teach my hi to speck cat?" Crimson said. Foxfrost looked at her strangely.
"You want my to teach you how to speak cat?" Vixenpaw nodded, for Crimson's sake.
"Okay, tell her that mouse-brain is an insult?" Vixenpaw laughed and repeated it to Crimson.
"Why would you call anyone a mouse brain? Mice are delisious!"
"I have no idea" Vixenpaw shook her head.
"Hey, who are those cats and why are they heading towards us?" Streak made a worried wimper.
"One of them are Breezestar. The one who is forcing us apart. But, I don't want to leave you guys!"
"I know, what could we do?" Crimson said, her bark starting to turn into a whine.
"I could sneak out of camp! And visit you sometimes" Vixenpaw whined "I don't want to leave you"
"I think that's a great idea!" Crimson said "you can have a paw in both worlds. Everyone is happy. We get to visit you, they get a super tough fox, and you get to with us and be trained as a warrior!"
"Right!" Streak gekkered happily. Three large cats came up. Breezestar as well.
"Vixenpaw, tell your family the news and we'll get these creatures out of here"
Vixenpaw tried to keep her fur flat.
"Sure" she said through gritted teeth.
"They'll lead you out of the territoy, make sure to make your scent easy to follow, so I can find out where your den is"
Melody purred, a sounds foxes rarely make
"We'll meet you then". Streak, Crimson and Melody got to their feet and were escorted out of camp. Just before Crimson went out, she turned to look at Breezestar and harshly said, in perfect cat "mouse-brain". Then she shot him an arrogant look, a Crimson specialty, and strutted out of the camp.
So, what did you guys think? And who's your favorite character? So far, I'm debating between Crimson and Vixenpaw.