Any advice would be greatly appreciated!
Lines 18 ABCB
Mari dead, Adrian lives.
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Such sweet sorrows softly scream,
As my moon and sun are lost,
My heart halted with ghostly chill,
Might you kindly thaw this frost?
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You stood strong to save us all,
I hope you hear my heart's lament,
We should have been lost together,
But now I'm left to my torment.
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Should I waste my life in vain?
Never again will I know this love,
Could I fall from a great height?
That the fall leads to a sky above?
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My spirit lies dormant still,
You've saved Paris once again,
But your creation had a cost,
And I've lost my closest friend.
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I must live painfully on for you,
Your purest dream will come true.
A/N
That came out moderately well. I guess I'm just going to post poetry for Ladybug here, anybody want to recommend anything in particular?
Tell me the format you want:
AABB, ABAB, or whatever combination you think might work.
Then tell me the lines, just make sure it's an even number, and finally, tell me the subject. As in, what am I writing about.