OMG! I can't believe how long it took me to update this thing! It's shocking and i have no excuse other than i'm so sorry! This story has took a drastic turn while i was writing this, and the original plot has changed so much it's scary. and i'm seriously tempted to take it off the sight or at least leave it be. Tell me what you think.
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The White Witch's Spy
Chapter One: Illusions Of Freedom
Jadis returned to the castle in a rather good mood. She had not expected to find the Son of Adam wondering round the forest like that and it had made for a good investment. Now all she needed was for him to bring his siblings to her and the prophecy would be made useless.
She was amazed at how she managed these things at times. Did humans not have brains? Not that she wished that they did because it did make her plan flow easier but still…You'd think that he would have known. Jadis allowed herself a smile in victory.
She would not celebrate yet though. She had not worked this hard to get complacent. Narnia was almost at her mercy but there was still the resistance that needed to be wiped out. The few members of Narnia that still believed they could win.
She smirked. They definitely did not expect that to last long. Not if they had any value of their own life and if nothing else the threat of death made them accept her rule. Amazing what people would do to make sure their death sentence was aborted.
Of course there were still those that did not care about their lives and choose to disobey her anyway. Death came swiftly to those that she caught but for everyone she caught there were still more. She scowled she would be rid of them if it was the last thing she did!
She sat on her throne and laughed. That had been so easy. And he was one of the sons of Adam that was meant to dethrone her and then reign in Narnia, she didn't believe it! If that was what she had to fight then this was going to be easy the last of the resistance in Narnia would disappear and she would be able to rule totally.
She rang a bell and her servants appeared before her unable or unwilling to resist the call. Most came willing the threat of being hurt was just to intense for most but there were those that tried to ignore it and they were left in pain for their efforts.
The second General under the Queen was one of those that had found herself in a situation she wasn't sure how to get herself out of. Ruby was Maugrim's second in command though it wasn't by choice. She'd made the mistake of asking Jadis for help when she was young and stupid and the price had been slavery.
Although then Ruby hadn't realised what was what it would be
"Ruby, come here." Her general, the second in command under Maugrim, a girl that looked no older than 21 but in Narnia looks could be deceptive. Another reason Jadis had managed to rule Narnia for so long, no one had seen her coming until it was too late and they were unable to stop her.
"Yes my Queen." Ruby said quietly though her teeth were gritted. "I do not care how you do it but you do as I ask is that understood." Ruby couldn't face having to answer again so she simply nodded again. A short sharp nod and nothing more.
Ruby knew she should give more but she was only willing to give what she had too. "And is there a team out to find the Daughters of Eve and Sons of Adam." "As far as I am aware they are not yet back in Narnia." Ruby said quietly. "You must trust my judgement my Queen. Of this I am sure."
For al Jadis knew Ruby hated her servitude to the Queen and therefore the throne of Narnia Jadis knew Ruby could do nothing to stop it. She knew Ruby enjoyed being a Hunter and would have one day followed Jadis freely but Jadis did not see it fit to wait. Ruby did her job and she was loyal. She could be nothing but loyal. That was all that mattered. It was one of the reasons she continued to be the second in command of the armies.
Jadis nodded once. "Fine then you all are dismissed. Keep a close eye on the Northern forests I feel they will return soon. And I want to know about it. understand?" "Yes my queen." Ruby murmured and Maugrim growled his understanding before leading his wolves out of the throne room.
Ruby remained for a second before going in the opposite direction further into the palace and as far from Jadis as she could get. She needed space; she needed the illusion of freedom although she had not known freedom for at least three centuries.
She walked to her rooms the ice palace served her well beauty and ice masking the true nature of the palace which was to keep her prisoner. She called from her window to her most trusted friend Valiant he soared in through the open window and landed on her arm.
A beautiful sliver falcon and her only true friend in the world. She had lost all friends and family when she had made her choice all that time ago. She liked to think it didn't affect her, she had after all made the right choice. Jadis would win the war against Aslan in the end. "How are you my Heart?" Valiant asked once he had landed on her arm. "I could be better my darling." She answered in a heavy voice. "But the needs of the Queen prevail and whether I want to or not I must answer her call."
Valiant nuzzled her neck affectionately. "When will she understand that you only fight her because she forces servitude on you?" Ruby laughed quietly. "I think it is a game the Queen and I play." "You will get through this Ruby." He said strongly. "You always do." "Thanks Valiant, sometimes I don't know what I'd do without you."
She smiled and stroked his feathers then her head snapped up. "I have to go Valiant, Maugrim calls me." Valiant took flight leaving her arm. "Do we know why little one?" He asked. "Apparently Mr. Tumnus needs to be questioned. I have to be there the whole pack is being called." Valiant looked at her. "The whole Pack?" She nodded.
"Yes. The whole Pack." "I'll speak to you soon." Ruby rushed out of her rooms changing into her wolf form as she went. It a secret between her and the Queen that she could shift shape it was something that had been part of her enslavement meaning she became one of the queen's trusted secret police. It also made her one of the most hated individuals in Narnia but then, no one knew that she was really human.
It was a lot easier to hate the She Wolf of the Pack. She changed as she ran through the palace and ploughed through the snow to catch up with her Pack that were three miles ahead of her heading towards the Northern forests. She snarled and picked up her pace. She was not about to let them have the hunt without her, after all she was the one with the connections. She was the one that knew the forest and its alliance's.
She caught up with her pack as they neared the cave Tumnus kept as his own. She snarled at the Pack and they parted to let her through. Maugrim was waiting for her at the head of the Pack. "You should not have left without me." She snarled.
"When the Queen orders there is little we can do." Maugrim said acknowledging they had left her to catch up but not apologising for it. "One more minute would not have mattered it only took me five to catch you at full run." Ruby snarled but said nothing more. She was not going to argue this. Not now.
"Just forget it." She said. "Let's get on with this. Now." The wolves formed a semi-circle round the cave and then Maugrim walked up and howled at the door. "Tumnus get out here now." Maugrim snarled. The wolves could hear a commotion inside the cave. Ruby snarled. "Let's break down the door!" Maugrim smiled a wolfish smile before throwing himself at the door and it splintered with a crash.
Ruby led the wolves in behind her and they found Tumnus collapsed on the floor as if he had crashed head first over his table. "We're here to question you in the name of the Queen." Maugrim snarled.
"Why would you need to come here?" Tumnus asked looking at the Pack liket they were the last people he really wanted to see. "We have information that you have been hiding a Daughter of Eve here in your cave." "A Daughter Of Eve?" Tumnus asked. "I've never even seen a Daughter of Eve before and even if I did the rules are that we are to hand them over to the Queen. There has never been a Daughter of Eve in this House."
Ruby stalked the House trying to decide whether he was lying or not. She may have been a slave to the Queen but she was damn good at her job as a Tracker. It also made her one of the most hated beings in Narnia. She hoped one day that if she did her job correctly the Queen would grant her, her freedom.
She picked up nothing but the scent of Tumnus. "There has been no one else here Maugrim." She said. Kicking a piece of fabric out from under her feet. "If the daughter of eve was here then she is gone now. It is obvious to me though Tumnus that your alliance's are no longer trustworthy. We will take you to be questioned."
As Ruby led the Pack outside she caught an unfamiliar scent. She snarled. "The Daughter of Eve was here! You Tumnus betrayed the Queen!" The Pack turned on him. "At least I was never a traitor to my people and my family!" Tumnus snarled back at her.
Ruby lashed out in anger and back handed Tumnus across the face before snarling at the wolves. "Get him out of my sight. Half of you to the palace with the prisoner and half with me. We search the forests!"
Maugrim looked at his second with pride. He was head of the Secret Police but he was happy to let her take charge for the moment. He could supervise the prisoner and take advantage with the Queen. He watched as his second led half the wolves North while he went South towards the Palace. Things were about to get interesting in Narnia but he knew his Queen would prevail.
No one would dare to challenge the might of Queen Jadis. He led his wolves further south intent on showing his queen his trophy and proving to her that his police were capable of capturing traitors in Narnia.
Further South…
Four children discover for the first time the wonders of Narnia and bring hope to a nation that previously had none. Now the fight is on. Who will win when the battle of Good Vs. Evil really begins?
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