The End of Missing Someone

by AppleCiderr

We were so alike, yet we knew so little about each other. The second we met, we knew there was more to our story. We simply could not be strangers, not when it felt like we were meeting again. Surely I know you from somewhere, surely we are more than just strangers? I feel like I know you, there is something more than what we can merely see. But what is it? Who are you to me truly?

4. Chapter 4

So, I love the concept of this story but I think I went too far trying to make the plot interesting. I made it a bunch of strings that don't connect at all. There are already continuity errors!

I'm going to make the plot a little simpler and have it focus on the boys more than some gigantic plot. This story is supposed to be tamer and I was pushing too hard and sending it the opposite way.

Plus I made this when I was like 15, I can do much better now.

I'm going to rewrite all 3 chapters and post them all at once!

Thank you for understanding.