Hello readers. I know it's not that important, but I got my first review from someone named iChocoLove yay. Now, on to the story. I love pikmin. Warning Marth decides to get a little bloody in this one, so... uh... just to warn ya.
Olimar
Without thinking I mobilize the pikmin. I whistle and the pikmin are ready. As I throw the pikmin they seem to yell. When they hit the bulborbs they start head
butting them. Everytime they hit the bulborbs they burnt them until the bulborbs caught fire all together. I see the pikmin are doing fine for now and go to the
other onions and my ship to get out 150 of the other 4 types of pikmin. As I'm doing this many other creatures appear: Burrowing Spriggates, a few Beady Long
Legs, and green human-like things that have weapons, and some of them were riding giant pigs. I call my pikmin back and grab my log book. I go over to my new
partners as fast as I can and give them my log book. It explained everything about me, the pikmin, and those odd creatures that made these supposed warriors
tremble. After Zelda takes the book and reads a little then closes it. I start jumping wildly to try and get the point across that I need information as well, but they
ignore me and take a battle ready stance. I hang my head in depression and irratation, but when the weird green things yet out a "battle cry" I snapped to
attention and my pikmin mirrored me. We started to attack once more.
Link
As this strange man attacked the foul beast that surrounded us, I protected Princess Zelda. Hacking and slicing with keen precision I defeat each foe one by one.
After killing those around me I reached for my bow and aimed at the creatures surrounding Marth. When I did I heard a scream that made my stomach turn. I turn
to find my fear had come true. Zelda was bound by the bublins. I went to attack, but realized that if I did I'd risk hurting the one that I loved. As I stood there
helpless a dark and foreboding shadow looms overhead...
Marth
I glance over to where Zelda was. A tingle shoots through me, and my sword glows a deep red color. I charge toward one of the beast surrounding me. I slice
with my sword dance 1, then 2, then 3 as if to show off my ability as a prince and swordsman. Most of the beast fall victim to my blade. While off guard one of
the monster snaps its jaws over me. A few moments go by and the creature swallows. The monster starts to the horizon a full creature. Inside the creature,
air is dwindling and fast. My whole body was in excruciating pain. My clothing melted as if it were ice in a cup of hot water. I screamed in agony, choking for air.
The acid burn and numbs every inch of me. "I have to get out of here." I think to myself. I reach for my sword with a now gloveless hand. I grip it as much as my
power allows. Outside the creature stops, realizing something is wrong, and makes an odd purring sound and show a little agony. I slash through the creature
and fall to the ground. I'm covered in organs and black crimson blood, and i'm choking on my own blood. My vision is blurry and my body, aside for a few pieces
of acid burnt cloth, is bare. I start to get up but I fall once more, out cold. I'm to far from any of my partners. My body burns with pain and my mind is blank. Blood,
half mine half the creatures, surrounds me. The monster lay in two pieces with blood pouring from its mouth.
Princess Zelda
I struggle against the ropes that bind me. "Why does the kidnapping always happen to the princess?" I think to myself. The triforce glows from beneath my
glove. "Pikmin I call for your aid." I think trying to use my power. Ten random pikmin who heard my call came to assisst. "Ow! Careful where you are attacking."
I say, a little agitated from this cliche experience. The pikmin continue to attack recklessly until the roped are broken. I stand up and message my now free hands.
"Thank you strange creature."I say as the pikmin just stare obediently. I look to the creautures advancing on Link. The pikmin follow. "Din's Fire!" I yell
determined to exact my revenge. In a huge fiery explosion the enemies fall. Two bublins, coming from behind, get attacked by the ten pikmin who were also
behind me. I look behind completely confused, but shrug and continue to Link. The pikmin once again follow me. I run to Link and get out my sword. "Where's
Marth?" I whisper to link. Upon seeing his blank expression I focus my attention on the battle, dimly noticing the portal of darkness coming from the former
location of the twilight mirror. The darkness in the sky seemed to be connected with it. The pikmin trembled in fear of the darkness.
So how do you like the edited and revised version of the story? Who loves Olimar (my character)? And who thinks that Zelda's pikmin are awesome. I gave them a
little bigger brains, but they're still dependent on someone.
Codi-Zelda
Nick-Link
Chris-Marth
Zeke-Olimar