I haven't been getting many reviews. I was looking forward to hearing what you guys think. One more thing we're going to be adding more characters now so one person will be writing for multiple characters. That's about it.
Olimar
Seeing the tattered condition of my new team I resorted to one of my trump cards. I call upon my new species of pikmin. A
new green onion came from the orbit of this planet. I go to it and take out only ten. The green pikmin had two stems with
flowers then just one. These pikmin had twice the intelligence of the other pikmin and have a potent healing ability. I whistle
and the green pikmin start chanting and dancing around me. The wounds of the two teammates that were hear and the
wounds of the pikmin started to heal. The two native people seemed uniquely unsurprised by this. At that moment everyone
stopped, even the monsters. The darkness at the tower grew three times its original size. I find my friends on both sides of
me. They looked worried and thanks to the monsters that were still around I started to get me very apprehensive. I
gathered my courage and decided to finish this. I gathered 100 yellow pikmin and used their ultimate attack. They got close
together and released an extremely large amount of electricity. Then they spread out and the lightning slowly made a giant
dome of concentrated electricity. This fried every enemy near us. When the dome faded and all of my pikmin came back my
friends looked shocked (no pun intended). A bright flash of purplish, black light came from the tower. The two people who,
until they tell me there names I will call giant Hocotations, started to run towards the light. I followed them because I didn't
want to be alone in a dark desert.
Do people like my advanced pikmin? I don't know if green pikmin will be in pikmin three or not. I just like the thought of
healing pikmin.
Marth
As the darkness falls over me I stay unconscious. Soon after, I start to wave in pain most indescribable. "Urgh… Ow!" I
cringe in pain as I try to sit up. My blood escapes me rapidly. After trying a few times I finally sit up. "Urgh…mmnn.
Zelda….Link…no one?"I look around to see nothing but a vast desert. I groan and grab my sword. I sit for a moment to
gather myself. Once I manage to stand I walk, weakly while having to use my sword for support. "My… castle. I need to
protect my people." I say while looking at the darkness. Limping slightly as I walk I drag on to my castle. As I walk on the
sunset and the moon shines, full. Soon the temperature drops and I can start to see my breath in the air. "My castle", I
keep walking, getting stuck in the sand every now and again until I'm forced to give in to exhaustion and fall. "Huff huff…
man… so… tired. I close my eyes and begin choking. When I catch my breath I slowly fall asleep. I subconsciously curl up in a
ball in the sand and my body rest peacefully, but I dream of my castle coming to ruin.
Link
As Zelda, Olimar, and I race towards the dark light we hear a strange and horrible sound our right. I turn to the sound to
see a powerful dark creature in the horizon. I notice a reed on the ground in front of me. I pick it up play it to summon a
large bird. The bird comes from behind and picks us up then heads toward the dark cloud. We go to face the winged beast
and hope for victory.
Princess Zelda
I survey the ground from the air. "I hope Marth is alright." I turn back to the direction of the creature. It's approaching us at
high speeds. "I hope we'll be alright. For that matter," I pull out my bow and arrows, and start shooting at the creature. The
arrows barely graze the beasts' shoulder. It just angers the beast and it increases its speed. I turn to Link, who is also
firing arrows, and see something on his shoulder. "Link what is…" I stop midsentence as I see one of the pikmin that were
following me jump onto one of Link's arrows. Link smiles slyly as he shoots. His arrow sinks into the flesh of the avion's
throat, and the pikmin start attacking relentlessly. I watch as a light comes from the beasts' mouth and consolidates itself
into a beam. I quickly raise a shield, but it's too late as out bird's wing has been destroyed. We plummet to the ground as
my necklace glows black followed by a royal blue. I hear an impish chuckle that states, "I leave you light realm people alone
and look what happens." Our decent slows and upon impact I black out to the sound of evile laughter mingled with a
familiar, concerned voice.
-everyone
From this point on I will also be Midna.
Codi-Zelda, Midna
Nick-Link
Chris-Marth
Zeke-Olimar
And one more character for the royal blue. I won't tell you who it is or who plays him yet though.