I will be deleting this story. I do not like the way i've done it. i am going to change some things and repost the story, differently. sorry for any who like this story, like there are any, but i'm starting over anyway. i'll delete this one when i post ch 1 of the revised version. i would just edit it here, but there are to be MAJOR changes. check my page every so often, to check for the first ch of the revised version, but i dont expect it to be dome soon.