Ok. Well Hi everyone. I hope you liked the new chapter. I just got a review that I wish to this is getting tiring respond to. The whom mistake is one that grammar check said was wrong. It kept popping up as who even when I kept typing who. The fell/feel mistake was a typo and as I am only human I am sorry that I made the mistake. Since fell is a word spell check didn't catch it. And the comment made by Steve was meant by he corrected himself. Seeing as how Rory in this story is 20 she is no longer a girl, so as I said before it was a correction on his part. So I just wanted to explain myself, as I should have such a right. I am really sorry if any of this caused confusion. So I am going back to writing this story. I apologize in advance for any other typos I make. That is of course something I cannot help.