I'm SO sorry for takin so long to post this! I have a hard time gettin online at home, and for some reason my sleep pattern is very screwed so I'm up all night when I don't normally get internet connections and asleep mostly all day when I do get connections. Again, SORRY! Forgive me.
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Now onto the sneak peak!
I stood on the edge of a cliff, aching to spread my wings and fly. I held Tyler on one hip. Vanish grasped tightly to my free hand. Dylan stood behind me, ready to fight. Illuminate and Breeze clung onto him for dear life. Jordan held tightly to my leg.
We had just escaped the Mexican School. Now we were surrounded, and had just one logical choice. Flyboys blocked our running escape, so we had to jump.
"Come with us," the Flyboys droned. I smirked, looking down at the canyon below. This wasn't how I wanted the first flying lesson to go, but it was now or never.
What's the plan? Dylan wondered.
Fly, I answered. Dylan gave a slight nod. He was a telepath like Angel and Kuro, but his powers were greater then their's combined. Itex has a great interest in telepathy and has tested it's limitations on multiple children, but they are the only three successes.
Dylan spun around and lifted Vani off the ground, jumping over the cliffs in one swift move. He snapped his fifteen-foot silvery-gold wings open and started rising a few hundred feet from the bottom.
"Lumi? Breeze? Jordan?" I whispered. "Copy Dylan. Now."
I waited. None of them moved. I sighed. Lumi looked up at me with her light brown eyes, full of terror.
"We can't!" she exclaimed softly, in a scared child's voice. "It's against the rules!"
"We'll get punished," Breeze added, as terrified as Lumi. Jordan merely nodded.
"You guys know I'd never let anything hurt you," I reminded the kids. "Trust me. Jump over the cliff and open your wings. Fly. It's safe, I've done it billions of times."
The kids still weren't sure about it, but I gave them no time to think. Still holding Ty, I picked each one up and chucked them into the air. Now they had no choice but to fly.
"Open your wings!" I screamed, throwing myself over the ledge. The Flyboys watched helplessly. This was an older batch, I realized. None of them had weapons. They couldn't fly, either. The School underestimated me again. Big mistake.
So that's part of part two! This is an excerpt from chapter 2. I should have the first chapter up within by next Friday. I just need to go over it again. And I need to think of a title. Thanks to all my faithful reviewers, y'all are the best.