AN: OH MY GOSH GUYS, THANKS SOOOOO MUCH FOR THE REVIEWS AND THE TIPS! They helped so much, and I think this chappie will be much much better. Anyone who reviewed gets a Firestar plushie!
Dovewing's pov!
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, join here beneath the Highledge for a Clan meeting!" Firestar's yowl rang out through the clearing.
Dovewing padded over to where Bumblestripe was sitting.
"Whats happening?" she meowed curiously, sitting down and wrapping her tail around her front paws.
"Cherrykit and Molekit are being apprenticed; I hope I get to be one of their mentors." Bumblestripe muttered quietly, his eyes warm.
Dovewing looked up at the Highledge, where Firestar was sitting.
"Cherrykit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Cherrypaw. Your mentor will be Blossomfall. I hope she will pass down all she knows to you." Firestar waved his tail, signaling for Blossomfall to step forward.
Blossomfall looked delighted to be Cherrypaws mentor, and Cherrypaw was so thrilled to finally be an apprentice, that she was trembling with excitement.
"Blossomfall, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from Hazeltail, and you have shown yourself to be strong and loyal. You will be the mentor of Cherrypaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to her."
Cherrypaw touched noses with her new mentor and purring; she padded over to where her father was sitting, and seemed pleased to see that Berrynose looked proud.
"Cherrypaw! Cherrypaw!" the Clan greeted their new apprentice warmly.
Firestar raised his tail for silence.
"Molekit, you too, have reached the age of six moons. From this day on until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Molepaw." Molepaw peered up at Firestar self-consciously, as he waited for him to call out his new mentor.
"Toadstep," Firestar continued, "you also are ready to take on an apprentice. You have received excellent training from Cloudtail, and you have shown yourself to be proud and bold. You will be the mentor of Molepaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to him."
Molepaw touched noses with his new mentor and the crowd cheered for the new apprentices.
Firestar waved his tail as a dismissal and disappeared into his den.
Dovewing's stomach growled. She was hungry, and she hadn't eaten anything yet for the day.
"Hey Bumblestripe, do you wanna go hunting with me?" she asked, nudging his shoulder.
"Sure!" he purred. And they exited the camp.
AN: Another crappy chapter… 3 more reviews till the chappie! And the next one will be good, I promise, the only thing I'm saying is that there will be a battle in the next chappie… lol oh ya and I would love more tips please!
Cya!
~Leafwing~