Alright this is just a note for all of you, the next story to this is up, it is called Innocent Betrayal.
I can't thank all of you enough for the nice reviews and I am happy that you all enjoy this story and my writing, it makes me happy seeing all your comments :) hopefully I will see you all comment on Innocent Betrayal so i know nothing is sounding wrong in it, its based on Breaking Dawn like Innocent Sorrow was based on Eclipse.
Anyway, I hope you continue reading and that you enjoy it still :)