Murder in the Forest

Foxpaw followed his mentor into the medicine cat's den. His ears were pressed flat against his head in shame. "I'm sorry." He whispered quietly.

His mentor didn't respond, he had his back too Foxpaw refusing to look at him.

Foxpaw sighed. "I was just so angry with Rainpaw…I don't know what came over me." He said. "I beg of you to forgive me, and let me continue my training to be a medicine cat."

Sadgewhisker still didn't turn around.

"Come on please. I'm sorry I messed up, please I promise to do better!" Foxpaw pleaded.

"No you're not." Sadgewhisker finally sighed.

Foxpaw gaped at him. "Wha-what?"

"You're not sorry in the slightest about attacking your brother are you? Answer me honestly." Sadgewhisker told him. His turned around and looked right at Foxpaw, his gaze penetrating the young apprentice.

Foxpaw froze. He desperately wanted to say yes, but he couldn't being himself too. Like always his mentor could see right through him. He didn't regret attacking Rainpaw and he'd gladly do it again.

Sadgewhisker shook his head and turned away from him again. "Do you think I don't know of the dreams that haunt you…and the cat's that visit you."

Foxpaw looked down, clenching his eyes close. "I'm sorry." He murmured.

"So am I." Sadgewhisker told him. "You could have been a great medicine cat Foxpaw…you really could have been. But I must think of the clan first…and the clan needs guidance from Starclan."

"I promise to never go there again!" Foxpaw pleaded. "It was a onetime thing I promise."

"I'm sorry Foxpaw but we both know that I can't do that. You are too connected with that place and as long as you're connected with them Starclan can't visit you." Sadgewhisker told him sadly. "I'm sorry but you can no longer be a medicine cat."

Foxpaw turned away her minty green eye clenched shut he walked out of the den.


"Are you sure about this?" Rainpaw asked, standing next to his Mentor. He always imagined getting his warrior name with Rosepaw…but now the glory of getting his warriors name seem faded almost gone.

Stonetooth glared at him. "Are you saying that you don't want a warrior name?" He hissed.

"Well no I mean yes, wait no err…" He looked down at his paws. "I feel like I'm betraying both Foxpaw and Rosepaw."

Stonetooth sighed. "Look You've earned this you escaped from a giant twoleg nest by yourself…I think you've earned it."

Rainpaw smiled at him. "Thanks." He would except his place as a warrior, he can't let his sisters sacrifice be in vain.

"Let all those old enough to catch their prey-" (I don't know the rest of what that is for ShadowClan…why can't I ever find information on shadowclan! :(


Foxpaw watched from the edge of the camp. Rainpaw stood in front of the boulder his leader on top gazing down on him.

Foxpaw sneered. How can they treat him with respect he has done nothing!

"In the memory of Rosepaw we bring this young apprentice to become a warrior. Rainpaw to you promise to uphold the warrior code, and protect your clan?" Cedarstar asked him.

Foxpaw glared at him. He doesn't deserve to be a warrior that should be me and Rosepaw getting our names!

"I do." Rainpaw told him.

"Then from this day forward you shall be known as…" He paused thinking. "Rainfire may you surve your clan with the best of your abilities."

"Rainfire, Rainfire!" The clan shouted.

Foxpaw just watched. His eyes blazing with rage.


Sorry If there is a few mistakes my new beta is busy today.