Iris Cornelia Jade: What is your problem? So you had a sucky day, so what? That doesn't mean you get to take it out on me. There is a reason it's called Fan fiction. It may not be perfect, but it is what it is. Fan fiction reviews are supposed to have constructive criticism, but you are just an Internet troll.
If you don't like my stories don't read them, and don't insult me.