Masashi Kishimoto owns Naruto, cause if I owned it, it would be way better.
Please read note to end it is important!
I am really sorrty to say that I am not going to continue writing this fanfiction, I have been really busy with work I just got a second job and have had no time off to write, so I have been planning ahead, setting the entire story up so that I can just type it down when I got the time, an I realized that I was going to have a kage level Naruto by the time the timeskip happened which with how this story was going to progress was about 3-4 months, also it was turning into a perfecthappyplacemess, that is a really bad story in my opinion
Now before your email me with death threats cause I am such a bastard for doing this there is an important thing for you guys to know, I am not giving up on my idea for this fanfiction I just need some time to fix the mess this story has turned into so when I get some time off which I don't expect for a minimum of 2 weeks I am going to try and post the rewritten chapter as a separate story which should be about the length of the chapters I have already posted. Then I will try to start posting on a more consistent schedule.
I may be getting a laptop in the next few weeks so that will hopefully speed up my ability to type my chapters out as I usually get bursts of inspiration while out of the house and by the time I get home I just want to kill my PC because it is slowly dying and corrupting everything I type.
I once again apologize for this though I realize I don't really deserve it.
Chapter 6: Truth
Once Inoichi had entered Naruto's mind all he could do was stare in shock at what surrounded him. He had spent his entire life exploring minds trying to find that one piece of information that would solve a case or to help a victim find some peace after the suffering they had been through. And in all that time he had never seen anything like Naruto's mind. All minds shared a few very distinctive traits, the first was that your lifestyle would always effect how it appeared to an observer, the second was that the mindscape was small and complex, the biggest he had seen was the 3rd Hokage's mind which had been the property the the Hokage Tower stood on. The person's intelligence and outlook on life also effected the detail and substance of their mindscape, a week willed person's mindscape was very insubstantial and easy to break, and usually the bigger the mindscape the weaker the mindscape.
Looking around him Inoichi was amazed at the detail and strength of Naruto's mindscape, he did not understand how Naruto's mindscape could be so large, he had never seen a mindscape with this much detail let alone the size of Konaha.
"So like what you see?" Inoichi spun around to see Naruto sitting on top of a horse sized fox with his legs crossed, he then noticed that said fox had 9 tails. To say Inoichi had a fit would be an understatement. As Inoichi backed up into a wall gibbering like a little girl Naruto was trying to figure out why he was gibbering like a little girl.
This is what I had written before the shit hit the fan with work and my realization that my story was shit. IF you want to adopt this story I have no problem with it as the only real similarities between this and my fixed version are Naruto's powers, and that it is a harem.
Some of the ideas I had if you wish to use them are:
Sasuke never get curse mark and is kidnapped rather then leaving of his own free will
Hinata replaces sakura on team 7
Sakura becomes a genjutsu specialist with medical skills
Kakashi actually teaches them stuff
Naruto eventually retrieves 2nd half of kyuubi's chakra
Naruto with rinnegan – with an awesome explanation as to why
gaara's seal is fixed/replaced
All I ask is you mention me in summary or 1st chapter as a contributer to story.
If you want any more info just message me and I will answer your questions.
Got a new story out basically a sequel to the rewrite for this story but i have not written the rewrite no passion for it so check it out.