The First Dive
That first moment of jumping into the glorious pool. Mara was in her blue and red polka dot bikini as she jumped in. She found herself surrounded by refreshingly cool water, and she relaxed as she heard her favorite song come on the radio they were playing. She sat there for a moment, until a boy with black hair and tan skin said hi to her. It was Josh, from her old school, who she always kind of liked. She heard him say,
"Wanna go get a soda?"
Anonymous: (And everyone, if you're interested)
I respect your opinion, thank you for your review. I already have a few things like that planned, including a four day mini-series. I have written this story with the intentions of just being a series of cute snapshots, about a hundred words a piece, and they will get a bit more original as the story goes on. Thanks to everyone for reading, I hope you enjoy!