Chapter 24: When is it ok?
(camra fades in to Kakshi into 30 minutes into the battle. He is getting tired and is sweating fercely. They both land on the ground, Kakashi in a battle postion and the fox staring at Kakashi.)
"So why did you use them?"
"Because I could. Hinata's love for Naruto was her own fault for having him killed, not mine. He stopped and turned his back right as the battle began."
"That's still no excuse for almost killing him."
"Your right... Maybe I should tell you why. I killed him because I like killing. Plus it's love for someone or something that leads to your death."
"I see. So maybe I should show you what loving something is!"
"Finally."
(The battle resumes and Kakashi is able to hold back the fox. Fade out as another claw slashes Kakashi. Fade into Hinata carring a blood Naruto following a bunch of people that said they would take her to a hospital.)
"How much Further?" asked Hinata.
"Not much just a few more blocks." One man answered.
"Hang in there Naruto. Don't die. Please hand on Naruto."She thought as tears came to her eyes.
(They run another block and turn the corner to find the hospital.)
"There it is!" Shouted a few men.
"Almost there!" Another man said.
(They run into the hospital o the front desk were people start screaming at his bloody condition.)
"What the hell happened to him!" The Nurse asked.
"No time we have to get him some help please!" Said Hinata
"We can't we are full. We have no rooms availible. I'm sorry."
"Please do something he is going to die!" shouted Hinata.
"I'm sorry but we have to take care of the other pacients who have serious cases. You friend has a slim chance of living if he gets treatment anyway. I'm sorry."
"Please try. Please try anything!(She falls to the floor in tears) Please I want him to live. Please.."
"I'm sorry but.."
"I'll give up my place for this young lass and her boyfriend.(An old man says as he stands up) I can wait."
"Yeh let her go in. We can wait an hour."
"Yeh her case is too serious to ignore."
(Soon everyone gave up their place in line to let her in,)
(Hinata, still in tears)"Thank you all."
"(sigh) I guess so. Well we will get him back here in 5 minutes."
"What 5 minutes! But he won't survive that long!" Shouted Hinata.
"I'm sorry but a doctor will be free in 5 minutes."
"Isn't there anyone?"
"Not anyone who can help him. We have doctors availible but none that could treat him."
"Please we have to get him in to get him in there." She beggs.
"I'm sorry but we have no rooms how many times do I..."
(Hinata pushes past her and runs to a group of doctors who are chatting in the staff lounge. She barges in surprising the doctors."
"What are you doing here? Your not supposed to be in.."
(Before he can continue he notices her bloody cloths and the very bloody blonde boy she is holding.)
"Please treat him.(The doctors look in shock at him.) Please he's going to die."
"Quick Dr. Gruto find a nurse and tell her to get a ER open. Everyone else follow me."
(They find a strecher and put him on it carefully. The nurse (The one from the desk) sees this and leaves them alone.)
"How's his pulse?"
"Weak and unstable."
"Damn it. Hey girl. (Hinata, who has been running with them finding and ER room, looks at him.) What's his name?"
"Naruto.(At that name they stop) Why what's wrong?"
"The fox is in him. WE can't treat him."
"No wait the fox escaped from the seal and out of him! He got that wound from the fox."
(The doctors examine the hole to notice it had been done by large claws.)
"Her story seems to check out quick get him to the ER."
(The rest of the doctors carry him around while Hinata says behind with the other doctor.)
"What do you want! I need to stay with Naruto!"
"Look he is going to be fine. Just wait in the waiting room. As soon as we have made progress i'll imform you ok?"
"But..(She doesn't see the band of doctors or Naruto anymore so she bows her head in dissapointment.) ok."
"Good now I have to go catch up with them. NURSE!(A nurse rushes over)"
"Yes doctor?"
"Make sure she gets back to the waiting room and make sure she gets something to eat. Anything she has will be put on my bill."
"Right away doctor.(The nurse puts her hands over Hinata's shoulders and walks her back. As they enter the waiting room, all the people who let her go in front of them stand and await for her to say something. One by one they come over to confert her.)
"It'll be alright. I'm sure they can do something for him." Said a man.
"Come on. Chear up. He is going to be fine. Don't worry." A women said.
(Just then Sakura, Sasuke, Ino, Gai, Lee and the hokage run in. They spot Hinata in her bloody cloths. They run over.)
"What hapened Hinata, were's Naruto?" shouted Sakura.
"Calm down Sakura, take a deep breath. (She tried to but still seems to be upset) Good enough. Now Hinata can you tell us what happened? Where is Naruto?" asked the hokage.
(Hinata slowly lifts her hand and points to the door to the ER section of the hospital. They look at the door, then back at her. Sakura colapses crying mumbling stuff like "That Idiot better not die")
"How's he doing?" Asked Gai.
"I'm..not sure. They took him only minutes ago."
"How bad was the wound?" asked Sasuke who accoully seemed to care for once in his life.
"Bad. I'll tell you how it happened..."
(They all seemed to be assuming he was dead when they heard her story.)
"But no one could survive that!" yelled Ino.
"Not unless your Naruto who had the fox's chakra in him. He probably survived like that, didn't he? (she nodded her head.) Well the only thing we can do is sit and wait for some news."
(An hour went by and Hinata was still depressed and felt guilty that she was the one that caused him to be like that. Everyone tried to say it wasn't her fault but she didn't liston, deep inside she knew it was because of her that Naruto was like that. After 3 more hours the doctor that told her to wait emerged from the room with blood all over him. Hinata looked up for the first time in 4 hours.)
"Hinata is it?"
"Yes. How's NAruto?"
"Well I have good news and bad news."
"What's the good news?" asked hokage.
"The good news is that he won't be dieing..."
"Well then how can there be bad news!" shouted Ino.
(The doctor looked at all of them and sighed)
"The bad news is that he fell into a deep sleep from all the blood loss."
"Like a coma?"
"No not a coma. Just resting. He might be out for a little while."
(A few cheers from the pacients that were still there from when he first came in.)
"Well that's nothing! Can we see him?"
"Sure he's the third door on the left."
(They all rush in except hokage and Gai)
"So what's the real bad news?" Asked hokage.
"You know that he wanted to one day become hokage?(They nodd) Well... he won't. We had to put in iron and steel plates in his chest and had to get a replacement for guts. It's nothing too bad but if he tries to fight or gets another injury, we can't garentee he will live."
"Well that is bad news for Naruto."
"Yes I hate to see him like that but I have other pacients to treat. so I can't sit here and chat. Hope he does well."
(The doctor walks back in to the ER and looks through the window to see them staring at Naruto.)
"Well if what Hinata said was true, then the fox would be coming here after he has killed Kakashi."
"Yeh well.. let's get ready."
End! Chapter 23 done. Remeber this is a.. nevermind... well see you next time!