okayy...this is kinda short and not very much information, but the next chapter is already almost done and it will hopefully be posted in the next few days!!! its pretty good! i had a lot of fun writing the next one! but this is this and i hope you like it! review! o and btw i know that i can't write songs, but i needed one so thats the best i could do!
disclaimer: don't own the people or the place but i do own the song!
Oliver started home, when he suddenly became sidetracked. Something inside of him just wanted to think and he knew that if he went home he would get no tranquility so he decided to stop and sit along the beach. He sat staring beyond the ocean as if he was looking for more than what was being seen. There was a starving look in his eye. He felt as if he was no closer than where he had started. He was so close once, but what if that would be as far as he could go? What if he had to go on with life never telling Miley how he felt! Then he remembered, " 'tis better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all." He determinedly stood up walked home thinking of one single thought. He will tell Miley, even if she says no at least he would go on with life with no regrets.
He was half smiling and half worried. He couldn't even wait to get home to call her again. He got out his cell phone and decided to call her on her cell phone so that they could talk in private. He knew that they weren't in actuality allowed to talk on her cell phone so they had to keep it discreet and she had to pretend that she was talking to Lilly when she others walked by. He dialed her number and waited anxiously for her to answer. She answered in a questioning tone, "Hey Oli…via?" "What!" replied Oliver in an utterly confused state. Miley waited for her father to pass before she could answer his question. "Sorry Oliver, my dad walked by," said Miley. "Oh, I see. That's okay," responded Oliver.
Oliver then questioned, "So, what are you doing?" She then explicated to him all about this new song that she was writing. After telling him that it was for her mother he asked her to sing it for him. He loved being the first to hear her new songs! It was one of the great perks of having a best friend who is secretly a pop star. She faltered for a second and then sang it to him.
I looked at you once
But never again the same
It's like this is all
One twisted game
I loved you from the start
And gave you my heart
I don't know how to feel
I wonder if this is even real…….
"Well that's all I have so far," finished Miley. She eagerly and anxiously waited for a reply, but to her displeasure, there was no sound from the other line. She wondered if they were disconnected, so she asked, "Oliver, are you still there?" After another few seconds he gradually replied, "Wow!"
She automatically became very self conscious, thinking that he didn't like the song, when in actuality it was written specifically with him in mind. She then quickly added, "Well…It's not finished yet, and it was just an idea. It will probably never be used for any of my CD's. I was just thinking and it kind of came to me. And…"
Oliver cut in with, "Wait a second! I never said that I didn't like it! I think that it is beautiful." He only wished that one day she would write a song like that for him. He briefly thought about writing a song to express his affection for her, but then decided against it given that, well; let's just say that songwriting wasn't his forte.
Miley slowly questioned him, "Really?" She was utterly relieved to find that Oliver didn't absolutely hate the song that she had spent all day writing in adoration for him. She knew now that she had to continue the song. She also hoped that Oliver wasn't perceptive enough to realize the genuine meaning behind the song. Her affection toward him, her best friend. Oh, no! This could end up horribly if things went erroneous.
well, there it was! please review and i know that its not a good song, but the good news is that i need to add more than just the chorus for later on in the story so this poses a contest! who ever can write songs, this is for you! all you have to do is write two or three stanzas that go with the chorus! just post them as a review or on my profile and ill choose the best one! o and again i PROMISE the next chapter is sooo much better!
