hey... i know i just updated yesterday, but what did i say! i was very inspired for this chapter soo i couldn't help but post it early! well i really like it! if you don't then im sorry! well i didn't get any responses to my song contest and i really need some! i am not a good song writer so i need your help! well here it is! please review! (i only got 2 last chapter!!! eek!)
Disclaimer: Don't own hannah montana or the dance quote but i did really...well ill tell you about it after!
He told her that her mother would have loved the song and would be very proud of her. This brought tears to her eyes. She didn't want Oliver to hear her crying over the phone, but being the concerned best friend that he was, he did. It started to rain right at that very second. He then thought of very inspiring words to cheer her up. He told her to look outside her window. She walked over to her window and sat on the ledge attached to it.
She looked at her driveway, down the street, and around the corner, but she couldn't find anything out of the ordinary. She then asked him what he was talking about still in a depressing manner. He told her that she was looking too deep and that she was passing up the obvious. She was silent trying to consider about what he meant. He told her to tell him what she saw. She told him that she saw her father's car, the mailbox, the neighbor's hot tub… with that he cut her off. He told her that she was overlooking everything. He asked her what the first thing she notices when she looks out the window. She took a moment before answering thinking exclusively on what he said and where he was going with this. I swear this boy is very hard to read; one minute he's a doughnut, and the next a philosopher.
She then answered his mystifying question with, "Well the first thing I notice…is that…it's raining." He smiled and let out a sigh, not that she could see any of this. "Exactly," was his only reply. Miley waited in stillness for a short time speculating why he wasn't continuing with his point to all of this. After realizing that he wasn't going to continue, she said, "So…" He answered back, "Well you know what that is don't you?" She rebutted, "Well, yeah. It's when the clouds get filled with precipitation and they.." "No," he cut her off in a majestic voice of reason, "it's your mother, crying tears of joy for you."
After hearing this Miley's heart completely stopped. Her head was whirling. That was the most beautiful thing that anyone had ever said. She felt a new, more alive, spirit overcome her. She told Oliver that she had to go and that she would call him a little bit later. She ran downstairs in her jeans and shirt not even bothering to grab a jacket. She flung open the door and ran outside slowly becoming drenched, but she didn't care. She got to the middle of her driveway and simply looked strait up into the sky. But she knew that she was looking much farther away than just the sky. She was looking at her mom. Her cell phone started to ring. "If We Were a Movie" blared from her pocket. She looked down to see who it was, but she had no intention of answering it. Nothing could disturb this inconceivable bond she was having with her mom at the moment.
It was Oliver. He was probably calling to make sure that she was okay. She was about to silent the call, when something gave her the notion not to. Instead she put it back into her pocket and began to dance. She didn't care who was watching or what they thought. Her body moved around but her spirit wasn't present. She could feel her soul drifting up to connect with her mother. She cleared everything out of her mind and felt completely one with her mother. When the music stopped she fell to the ground. However; she did not cry. She just lay there breathing heavily.
Her father opened the door and came running out in concern. He knelt down by his daughter and put her jacket around her. He picked her up and brought her inside. He sat her down on the couch and made her some hot chocolate. Her dad asked her if she was okay and she simply nodded back at him. He asked her if she wanted to talk about it and she said no. Once she reconnected herself she got up and ran upstairs.
She ran over to her desk drawer and opened up a pink and gold jewelry box. She opened up the box and revealed all of the precious possessions that her mother left her. There was one very important paper that she got out. When she was much younger her mother gave her a list of all of the things that she (her mother) wanted to accomplish before she died. She told her that she had accomplished all but one of them and that it was one that she could no longer attempt.
She gave Miley the list and asked her to please complete the list for her. Her mother had put stars next to all of the finished tasks; Miley instead drew hearts. She gave her specific instructions to not turn the page over until she had accomplished every other task on the list, for the one on the back was the only one that she never completed. Miley was determined to finish her mother's list as her dying wish.
She was now able to cross off "dance in the rain like no one is watching." She only had one more until she was able to look at the other side. She had been tempted many times to look, but she never did knowing that her mother wouldn't have wanted her to. She quietly folded the paper back up and tucked it back into the stunning box. Her cell phone started ringing again and, of course, it was no other than her concerned best friend, Oliver.
well...tell me what you think???? anyways... i was never intending to have her dancing in the rain or have the list! i was inspired the other day when it was raining! i had to walk in it and i had my i pod. i suddenly stopped and just started dancing! and well things just gradually built off of that! don't you just love imagination! well ya! so please enter a song so that i can continue it! if no one gives me one, there won't be any more! and if you haven't already read it, i wrote a story before this called "When Everything Goes Right!!!" just go to my profile and read it! its pretty good and especially if you like this one you will like it! thanks! o and if you were confused about the list at all just ask and ill explain it better!