(A/N) Heh heh. Still with the Mary Sue comments? I am still not 100 possitive on what one of those is, but I think people maybe think that Kacia is a Mary Sue since in the first chapter she said to Ren that she was too powerful or something like that and that this makes her idealised or has special powers etc. Well I would just like to take this time to say, Kaica is an abnormal shaman. But a Mary Sue (or so it said in a comment I was given) is someone with no faws and is almost perfect….there is a reason why this is called " an INPERFECT power." Kacia is in no way perfect. But I would like to thank those who told me all the Mary Sue stuff as I am now able to say this to you all, and thank you for those who have asked me to continue writing. . xxxx
Ren was on the floor in a deep sleep. Yoh could not help but notice that his breathing was very slow. Too slow. It looked as though he was hardly breathing at all. Kacia was crying, though no one had noticed.
"Why are you doing this Hao?" Horo Horo shouted. "This is inhuman."
"Of course it is." Hao said "I am not human."
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Ren could remember what he had been doing. The last thing he could remember was sitting out in the rain. Hao was there, in his mind. He hated him through and through. He knew it sounded childish, but he had taken Kacia away from him. The next thing he remembered was a large swarm of what looked like golden insects flying into his face. They had been everywhere. As soon as they had disappeared he suddenly realised how tired he was and walked inside…..
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"I will never forgive you for this." Yoh spat.
"Ad you would have forgiven me for all the other things I have done?" Hao sneered.
"Kacia, why are you with him. You do not belong with him." Jessica said. Kacia still refused to answer. The truth is, she did not know why she was with him. She just knew that Hao would kill her if she left him now and that, though she was powerful, she could not control her power and would either kill herself and everyone around her, not not be able to summon anything, let alone her oversoal.
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Ren was dreaming deeply now. He was in his father's house. But for some reason he was dressed in a suit. Jun walked into the room.
"Are you coming now?" She asked him.
"Coming where?" Ren asked.
"Don't be so silly." she said laughing. He took his wrist and pulled him through the house until they were standing in the main room in Yoh's house. Ren could not think why Yoh's room was in his father's house.
"What are we doing here?" Ren asked.
"Ren, you are getting married."
"What?" Ren spluttered. But then the sound of music reached his ears. A wedding march. Jun pushed him to the end of the isle. Ren looked behind him so see who the bride was. She was wearing a long white dress and a veil coving her face. The isle seemed to stretch for miles….
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"Hao, wake him up." Jessica ordered.
"I could if I wanted to, but I choose not to." Hao replied. Yoh charged at Hao, followed but Ryu and Horo Horo. But Kacia had reached him first. Ignoring any shaman abilities he had, she spun him around, to meet her eyes and punched him as hard as he could across the face. Hao stared at her. Kacia, realised what she had done and stepped away from him. He looked daggers at her. He raised his hand slowly. A beam of light shot out of his hand. As soon as it Kacia, she realised that it had not just been light, it had been fire.
Yoh, Ryu and Horo Horo finally reached him. Jessica was right behind then and ran to Kacia. She would lying on the ground behind Hao. With Jessica's help, she got to her feet and walked back to Yoh's house where she sat beside Ren. She took one of his hands in her own.
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When Ren's bride finally reached him, he was able to see through the veil. He regognised the red hair. It was Kacia. He felt his heart pumping. Yes he loved her, but he was not ready for this. The vicar turned and Ren's beating heart froze in horror. It was Hao.
"Kacia," Hao said. "Will you make this promise, to be my follower and be forever loyal to me?"
"I do." Kacia said.
"Ren," Hao said. "Will you make this promise, to be my follower and be forever loyal to me?"
"I…" Ren said. He looked at Kaica. "I do not." Kacia looked back at him and took on of his hands in hers.
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"Check his pulse." Jessica said. Kacia checked it.
"It is too slow." she said quietly. "Ren, I am so sorry."
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"Ren I am so sorry." Kacia said.
"What are you talking about?" Ren asked her.
"I didn't mean to do this."
"I don't understand." He looked around. Everyone in the room…though Ren had not noticed the presence before now…was looking at them. He suddenly felt very cold.
"Ren wake up." Kacia said. He now saw that she was crying.
"I am awake." Ren said.
"Please wake up."
"I AM awake! What are you talking about."
Kacia came close to him and lifted her veil. She then did something that took Ren completely by surprise. She kissed him.
"What?" Ren said stupidly.
"I am sorry." Kacia said again. Ren still felt very cold. "Please wake up." Ren looked at her. Unsure how to react. She then did something else unexpected. She raised her hand and slapped him across the face.
"What are you doing!" Ren shouted. She slapped him again. "Get off!" But that triggered something. He could feel the warmth coming back to him.
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"He moved!" Jessica exclaimed.
"So would you if you had just been slapped." Horo Horo said. The fight waith Hao was over. When it had become clear that Kacia was leaving him, he disappeared with dark warnings of his return. Ren's eyelids flickered.
"Wake up." Kacia sobbed. "Wake UP!" She said slapping him again.. Ren took a sharp intake of breath and opened his eyes.
"Ow." he moaned.
"Heya!" Yoh greeted.
"OW!" Ren said more loudly.
"Morning." Horo Horo laughed.
"I'm sorry." Kacia said. Ren sat up and kissed Kacia. Everyone smirked and knew that this would be a perfect way of teasing him when he was back to his usual self.
"Don't you ever slap me again." He said smiling.
(A/N) please Rate. Thanks for reading. Will update soon.
