Hello all. Thanks for all the reviews. I kinda feel like I'm going to answer Sweetums128neo and silversoraki reviews so maybe some of ya can get whats going on...(or I just have nothing to write as an a/u...Plus I love to talk to readers...) She wrote:
Oh wow... GO KRAD! Saving Risa's ass!(A/u: XD lol. You're funny, u know that?)So, Satoshi AND Krad were in control; that's why he was nice and bitchy, and why he had his hair in front of his other eye. It was Satoshi's eye, no? XD Man I've got this all figured out.
haha, you're close. Got everything but...drumroll The control bit...mua hahah. You'll figure out farther, ok? and...
i really do like it (A/u: awww...thanks...) heres a question is this a crossover of harry potter cause if it is... i love it even more!
No, it's not a Hp crossover, even though I had some major thoughts about. I may put some things that feel harry pottery (i know it's not a word, ok?) but it's not. Sowwy X3
Disclaimer: I hate saying this because it makes me sad but I don't own DNAngel.
onward!
Chapter 8
Satoshi leaned against the wall in the museum. He stared at his watch, he only had about ten minutes left until Dark came.
It was a bit hard to think. Last night, Satoshi had told Daisuke about what Krad said. He didn't know what Daisuke would do because they avoided eachother all day. In fact, he wasn't prepared for Dark's arrival at all. He was having problems with Risa too. How long could it be until he told her? She was so close to finding out about him. The hair, the keychain, how long would it be?
Don't worry, Satoshi. Krad's voice said. Something scared Satoshi. Krad's voice seemed to be caring and, maybe even, soothing. Let me just warn you, things may get a bit tense because I'm sure that boy will care more about you than stealing.
Ok, so what about it? Satoshi asked, remaining calm.
I'm just telling you, if things get rough, let me take control.
But-
Just do it. Krad didn't say anything else. Satoshi didn't want to take his advice. Why would Krad want to take over besides the reason of wanting to kill Dark and all the Niwas. What the, -Satoshi thought. Why was he even thinking of giving Krad a chance? He couldn't let Krad get his way.
Then something broke his thoughts. He felt his cell phone vibrate on his leg. Slowly, he quietly took out his phone and answered. "Hello?" he whispered.
"Why are you whispering, Satoshi?" a females voice asked. Satoshi could hear Riku's voice shaking. "I was just wondering if you've seen Risa?"
"No, why?"
"She never came home. I haven't seen her and I thought you might have."
"I'm sorry but I haven't." he said quietly. Satoshi looked at his watch, Dark was five minutes late. "Have you seen Daisuke?"
"We were going to go on a date but he canceled. I actually called his mom about a half a hour ago. She seemed a bit mad and when I mentioned you, her voice sounded scared. Then, she just hung up."
"Alright. Well thanks." Satoshi closed his phone and put it in his pocket. Before he was ready, he heard a footstep and hid behind the statue Dark was here to steal. He stood there, laying himself against it as flat as he could and as he was being as quiet as he could.
There was no noise afterward. Making sure no one was around, he walked from behind the statue. But wasn't that...? He looked around, wondering who could have made that noise if it wasn't Dark.
This time, he heard a swoosh sound and knew it was Dark's wings. Once again, he ran behind an artifact to hide. He watched Dark jump from the window to the floor. His steps were even, Dark never made a breath and he smirked the whole time. For a moment, he stopped and looked around.Satoshi could tell he was waiting for something.
The stayed still for a minute, then Satoshi noticed something passed by. He looked up and saw one of the search lights they always had outside of the museum. Dark's eyes followed the light. When the light passed by Satoshi, Dark smirk grew wider. "Hello Commander." he said simply.
With no choice, Satoshi walked out. "Hello Dark." he hissed. Satoshi could have sworn he heard something gasp. They had their normal Minute Stare-Off. Satoshi clenched his fists, he was ready for anything Dark was going to throw at him.
In a blink, Dark jumped up and sprinted past Satoshi. He chased him. Satoshi tried to punch Dark but he was too far. He ran a little closer. There was a chuckle from Dark and Satoshi looked straight, there was a long staircase in front of them. Dark jumped up on the top railing as Satoshi began to fall. With one last chance, Satoshi jumped. Thirty feet down, he landed but fell with a grunt.
"That didn't hurt, did it?" Dark asked. Satoshi only growled and ran back up the stairs. When he was at the top, Dark was already at the statue.
"Don't you dare, Dark!" Satoshi gasped for air.
"Too late, my friend." He lifted the case off the statue. Satoshi lunged at him. Luckily, Satoshi grabbed Dark and dragged him down. "Get off me!" He pushed Satoshi away and stood up. Satoshi got up after him and smirked. Right as Dark reached for the statue, bars shot up from the floor. "Why you little-damn you."
Dark flung himself at Satoshi, knocking him down once again. He bent down next to him and raised his fist. "I'm going to smash you into a pulp." As he raised his fist higher, he winced. He backed away from Satoshi. Dark stared down at Satoshi, glaring but Satoshi knew Daisuke was yelling at him.
He bent down again and looked at Satoshi. "Are you ok?"
Satoshi nodded. "Yeah, I'm fine. But what are you doing?"
"I could break through Dark for only a little bit. But listen," Daisuke said, putting his hand on Satoshi's shoulder. "You have to run. Dark's really pissed. He's not going to-" Daisuke suddenly started grinding his teeth. "-take much more of this." He wrapped an arm around his chest and continued. "I don't want you hurt Satoshi." Daisuke hugged Satoshi. Satoshi was shocked by this. He never knew that Daisuke was this serious about the rivalry between them. "You're my best friend."
Satoshi smiled. "Thanks Daisuke." Daisuke relesed Satoshi and smiled too. But his smile was broken by Dark's attemps to escape. Satoshi jumped up to help but Daisuke put out his hand. "Leave me alone, ok? Just get the-" Now Daisuke doubled over. "-statue and-get-out." Satoshi put his hand on Daisuke's back. He still felt weird because he was still in Dark's form. Dark had such a different structure than Daisuke. He patted Daisuke's back before Dark finally broke out. Satoshi closed his eyes, he didn't want to see Daisuke be in this pain but heard, "AHHHHHHHH!"
He stood back up straight and grinned. "Well, it looks like your last chance is gone, Commander."
"You're such a-"
"What?" Dark grabbed Satoshi's collar and lifted him off the ground. "What am I?"
Satoshi, please let me out.
NOT NOW! Satoshi shouted to Krad.
"Leave him alone!" a voice shouted. And to both the boys suprise, Risa walked out with her hands on her hips.
"Risa?" Dark asked. He threw Satoshi on the floor. "What are you doing here?"
She didn't respond to, Risa just glared. Her eyes met Satoshi's. Satoshi was still on the floor, coughing and gasping for breath. Risa tried to run to him but Dark blocked her. "Leave him. This is our buissness."
"I-don't-care." she growled. "You hurt him. I dont care what you say, you hurt Satoshi."
Satoshi stared up at her. She...She really does care about me, doesn't she?
Of course, Satoshi. Now please let me out. Krad said to Satoshi.
Satoshi ignored him and continued to watch. "Risa, leave. Don't make me make you." Dark said with no emotion in his voice.
"I don't care what you do Dark." she scowled. She seemed to just notice Satoshi truly for the first time when she saw him on the floor. Her face relaxed for a second, then tensed up. Knowing he didn't want anyone to interfere, Dark pushed Risa back and she tripped.
"Now that that's taken care of-" Dark grinned and Satoshi knew something bad was coming. He wanted to shut his eyes but that would make him a coward, Satoshi kept his eyes open. Happening in slow motion, in Satoshi's eyes, Dark stopped hard on Satoshi's leg.
Three reaction came from this. "AHHHHHH!" Satoshi screamed in pain, tears were in his eyes. Dark was smirking widely and through the ringing in his ears, Satoshi heard Risa yell, "Satoshi!"
That-is-IT! Krad said with his teeth clenched. His first try to escape came softer than Satoshi expected. It didn't hurt to badly. Satoshi thought maybe Krad was afraid. But the girl...
Satoshi knew what he had to do. He held a feather in his hand and threw it at his beloved. It exploded and by the looks of it, Risa passed out.
Krad tried to get out again. Satoshi could feel a pounding on his chest and wasn't sure if it was his heart or Krad trying to escape. He felt his blood lighting on fire. It began to spread through his body, and once it hit his heart there was an excruciating pain. Satoshi let his body fall down to the ground. It was like he couldn't think anymore. He didn't know where he was, what his name was or why everything was becoming dark.
As soon as the pain came, it had stopped. When Satoshi opened his eyes, he noticed that he was in the place he always went when Krad took over, the back of his mind. He wiped away the cold sweat from his forehead and took deep breaths. It was like watching a dream, watching what Dark and Krad were doing.
He wasn't sure if he was supposed to be happy that Krad was now winning against Dark but he was. Throughout the past couple months his hate for Dark grew stronger as so did his friendship with Daisuke. Daisuke...Satoshi forgot! Krad! Stop! Satoshi banged the walls, trying to get Krad's attention.
At the moment, Dark was lying on the ground, like Satoshi himself was, and Krad stood over him. He was laughing like he always did. For some reason, Satoshi felt his own mouth moving with Krad's. He was laughing with him, that horrible laugh Satoshi loathed so much. With a blow to the chest, Dark screamed. KRAD! Satoshi ceased to laugh.
What is it now, Satoshi?
Your...hurting Daisuke. Satoshi said quietly. He saw Krad pause. He dropped his arms to the sides and let out a deep breath.
I'm sorry. Krad stood over Dark's weak body and tried to help him up. The theif jumped up and stepped away from Krad.
"You've been acting weird lately..." Dark growled and flew away, without the statue.
Krad seemed to ignore the comment and he picked Risa up in his arms. Krad, what are you- He kicked off the ground and flew out of the museum.
At a near by park, he laid Risa down on a bench. Krad smiled and stared at her. Satoshi felt himself gaining control and gasped when he took complete control. He stared down at her face, it seemed a bit pained because he attacked her. He ran his fingers through her hair, smiling to himself.
After a few minutes, Risa stirred. "Sa-Satoshi." she smiled. He was the first thing she saw. He just nodded. "Why are we here?" Risa asked, noticing they were at the park.
"I don't know." said Satoshi, casually. "I was walking by and saw you here. You must have fallen asleep. You did seem tired at school today."
"But-uh-I was-forget it..." Risa sighed and leaned against Satoshi. "You know, I had the weirdest dream."
"Oh yeah? And what was that?"
"See, I was even thinking about it earlier. I wanted to do it, but in my dream I watched Dark go to steal something from the museum. You were there, and you two fought. It was really scary, you almost broke your leg when you tried to jump down a staircase. Dark was being really mean-but then he was being nice to you. And...you called Dark, 'Daisuke'." Satoshi tried to hold back a reaction to this. "Then the mean Dark was back and starting hurting you badly again. I can't remember anything after that..."
Satoshi put on a fake smile and chuckled. "How weird. Why don't we head home?"
"But Satoshi, I want to stay with you."
With a couple first trys to say something, he finally forced something out. "Your sister is worried about you. But I...could stay with you if it's ok with Riku." he gave a soft smile. "You know how she is."
He helped her stand up. Risa brushed off her skirt. She hooked her arm with Satoshi's and giggled. He smiled back and they marched to her house together.
But for some reason, Risa's "dream" was bugging him.Risa was so close to finding out about Daisuke and Satoshi and it hurt him to think about him attacking her. It wouldn't be long now before he had to tell her or she would find out herself and he knew it would be more painful that way.
I know the most recent chapters have been short X3...but you know, I've always loved those extra little comics at the end of mangas and Mike and Kyle didn't get to show up so just guess what I'm gonna do...come on, guess XP
How Satoshi Makes Sure His Traps Work
"Alright guys, ready?" Satoshi had a whistle in his mouth and a flag in his hand. Mike and Kyle had their fingertips touching the wall, getting prepared to run. "I said, are you guys ready?" Satoshi asked again. Both the boys nodded.
Satoshi held his free hand out and signaled, 5...4...3...2...he blew the whistle and waved the flag.
The boys set off. At first the just ran but then, catching them by suprise, bars starting shooting from the walls, ceiling and floor. Mike shouted and ran faster. "Hey!" whined Kyle as he tried to catch up. Once the reached the ther side of the room, the bars stopped. They high-fived but then the door opened and from inside the room, it was shooting small little bullets that didn't puncture the skin but they did sting.
This time, the boys were hit multiple times. "Ow, ow, ow, ow." The twins kept trying to cover the wound each time they were hit but they would just be hit again.
After they were finished with that room, they came to another ordinary looking room. Kyle, thinking they would get a break, and walked into the room. At once, lasers came from the walls. Kyle squealed and began to dodge them all. At the other side, he cried out, "Darn it! I liked these!" He looked down and half of his left pant leg was burnt off.
"Haha, you stupid bloke!" Mike started laughing.
"I don't see your dumb ass getting through this yet." hissed Kyle. Mike growled, he dashed through the room and sure enough, when he was finished, the bottom of his shirt was burnt. They looked at what was next and saw a large door. At the same time, they both approched it to open it. Mike counted and they pushed but it wouldn't open.
"What the-" he said, sounding mad. Both of the boys began pounding the door but it didn't even budge. They even ran at it but it still did nothing.
"I have an idea." Kyle smiled and help his hands out and said, "Open Sesame!" Mike stared at him.
"I'm not even going to say anything." he snapped. "It's like getting a wand and saying, 'Alohamora', it's not going to happen."
"Actually, you guys are a bit close." Satoshi smirked, walking up to them. "This door can only be opened by magic, something you two will not be able to accomplish."
"This is fun!" Mike and Kyle both said. "So this is how you're gonna help us?"
"Sure." Satoshi shrugged.
Later, when they went back home, Satoshi droppedthem off at their apartment. "Boys! So nice to see you're back home!" Ella stepped out with her arms wide open. But once she caught sight of the boys, her jaw dropped. Their clothes were burnt and they had scratches and cuts all over their bodies. "What happened? Get inside and take a shower!"
"But mom-"
"But mom nothing! Get your slow butts inside and clean up!" she shut the door, waving good bye to Satoshi. As he walked back to his own apartment, he could hear the shouts and cries from the family and laughed.
I'm sorry it's taken me forever to put up a new chapter. School just thinks I am smart...which I'm not and I have the attention span of a goldfish. Thanks for waiting and I'll try to update soon, kk?