this is only short cos im still doing the next part
"Hey Shun" a voice rang across the school ground I quickly scanned around to find the source of the voice I spotted Dan racing towards me he had a serious expression on his face. He stopped about 3 feet away from me "what is it Dan?" I asked already dreading the conversation "I want to battle, settle our little disagreement right now" I admit it's a very good idea but I'm not going to let him know that "that's a stupid idea Dan," he looked annoyed at my answer "just listen alright, we have a 1 on 1 battle my strongest against your strongest whoever wins is right." He appeared to be quite pleased with his plan so I decided to hummer him "ok then I'll give it a go." Dan punched the air triumphantly "yes," we pulled out our field cards "field open" we called simultaneously. I gazed around as time slowed it had been so long since I had battled that I almost forgot just how amazing it was.
"Gate card set" we yelled throwing down our cards "bakugan brawl," Skyress and Drago crashed mid-air and a battle of will started first to give out would land on their opponents card witch I desperately wanted. Luck was on my side and Drago and collapsed on my card he quickly stood shortly followed by Skyress "gate card open," I instructed outstretching my arm "character." Skyress' power sored from 360gs to 720gs. "Let's finish this quickly Skyress," she nodded her head showing her approval "ability activate fire-" "well, well, well what do we have here." I was cut off by a mysterious voice I scanned around the battle arena but couldn't see anyone apart from Dan and our bakugan "up here" the voice called drawing our attention to the floating figure of masquerade the number 1 ranked brawler. "Masquerade" I muttered under my breath he was a very bad person he sent peoples bakugan to the doom dimension witch is practically were they were sent to rot. "Now this is a tough one, who to take," I stared up at him what the hell was he talking about "if I take you Shun I can get rid of one of the best bakugan brawlers, but if I take Dan well I can get rid of a potentially strong rival." I glanced at Dan and I could tell he was just as confused as I was "you know what I think I'll go for my second choice and take you Dan." With one swift wave of his hand Dan started floating and disappeared in a bright white light. "Dan," I yelled in shock "what did you do to him?" "Sorry but I can't answer that" with that said he vanished and left me staring at Drago and Skyress.
what do you think I know that the fight is awful but it was my first one so review and tell me how to improve