Hey guys. Welp on with this edited chapter. Ughh didn't know editing took so long -.- but hey it's different from the first time I wrote this story.
Disclaimer: don't own anything. Plot is mine and stuff. Welp here we go.
Edited Version
Chapter 4
Sakura stepped forward shyly and got into a basic academy stance but it was tweeked for her liking I guess. Kakashi charged at Sakura and she ducked when he swiped at her with a kunai. She was on defense for a bit before she finally got enough courage and started attacking head on. 'Hmm not bad' I thought. She swiped, twisted, and back flipped out of the way. She was handling herself pretty well until kakashi started to attack more rigorously. Sakura couldn't handle it and lost.
The next part was genjustu, Kakashi put sakura in a genjustu before she could even prepare for it. She stayed in there for at least 4 minutes before she dispelled it. It wasn't a bad time but not the best; I had to give her props though; seems as if she isn't useless after all.
The last part was ninjustu. Sakura took charge and started doing a series of hand signs. 'hmm interesting. She knows more than the academy based techniques.' I thought to myself. Sakura jumped up in the air and blew out of her mouth; dirt needles started spewing out and tried to attack kakashi. But he blocked that with a water vortex. Sakura used shadow clones to fight but you could clearly see that her chakra was beginning to shorten. Before we all knew it sakura couldn't go on and next was Naruto's turn.
Taijustu wasn't that bad; he just needs to think before rushing into a fight. Naruto did manage to get some hits on the silver haired jounin. But kakashi clearly beat naruto after a few minutes.
Oh naruto… genjustu was absolutely pitiful. He couldn't dispel it. he was so confused on how to stop the genjustu. Poor naruto
Ninjustu on the other hand was great! Naruto excelled in it. he used at least 100 shadow clones and it outnumbered kakashi. But kakashi also used shadow clones and they managed to destroy each others. Naruto used a wind justu but kakashi intercepted that as well. all in all, naruto really needs to work on genjustu.
Up next was Sauske. Taijustu was great but not perfect yet. He could use some work. Like naruto he needs to stop letting his emotions cloud his thinking. Genjustu was a breeze since it's his clan's specialty. He dispelled it within 2 minutes; which was a great time. Ninjustu was good. He used his clan's giant fireball justu. He did other fire Justus before running out of chakra. All in all, naruto and sauske have a lot of chakra but they don't know how to control it yet.
Lastly, it was my turn. 'oh I'll give them a show' I thought amused. My taijustu was amazing since I was already trained in hand to hand combat back in the feudal era. Our taijustu match lasted for awhile; we were both trading blows. One second kakashi had the upper hand, the next minute I had it. We were evenly matched for right now. We decided to cut the fight short so that we could move on to the other evaluations.
Next up was genjustu. I dispelled it within 3 minutes. Sauske was better at this than me but I'm going to train to get it better. Lastly, it was ninjustu which I excelled in. I used a water shark justu to start off which kakashi had to dodge and use a substitution justu. I was already weaving through another series of hand signs. Unlike naruto and sauske, I know how to control my chakra, and I could do so much more. I used a fire dragon justu which erupted into a full size dragon that chased kakashi until I released the justu. But sadly he used a water wave to disperse it and when blazing fire meets ice cold water it tends to get misty. So I used the mist to my advantage and started another series of hand signs.
This time I used an ice bird that explodes into thousands of icey needles when I want to expand it. kakashi barely evaded that justu, but he called it quits since he has seen enough. Everyone was staring at me with awe on their faces. I smirked.
"Well I've seen all that I needed and know what you guys lack and what you guys are best at. Get some rest, tomorrow is going to be our first mission!" Kakashi said and then once again disappeared.
Time Skip…..
"Yo." Kakashi said. Everyone sweat dropped except Kagome, she was just staring at the client next to Kakashi. He looked liked an old and drunken bastard.
"Can we get going now? I'm bored just standing here and I think Naruto is about to explode from excitement." Kagome said with a bored expression. They all nodded and set off with a very excited Naruto trailing ahead of them practically hopping while walking.
They walked but a puddle and Kagome and Kakashi paused and stared. Kagome looked at Kakashi and nodded. They both knew an enemy was here and to be on guard while everyone else was clueless. They kept walking until Kakashi was torn into pieces by chains from the two sound ninja.
"KAKASHI SENSEI!" Sakura yelled, shocked that their sensei just got torn to shreds. Naruto and Sasuke were both wide eyed and shocked, while Kagome was on guard with a kunai in hand. Sakura ran to the client and guarded him while Naruto was frozen and unmoving.
"One down. You're next whiskers." The sound ninja said and ran towards Naruto. Kagome ran towards Naruto with amazing speed, she just disappeared and reappeared in front of Naruto. She blocked the attack with her kunai and punched the guy in the face with amazing strength, sending him flying into a nearby tree. Sasuke used shuriken to pin the ninja to the tree and took care of the other ninja well at least he tried but Kakashi came out and grabbed the ninja in a headlock.
"Good job Sasuke, Sakura, and Kagome. Naruto I didn't think you would freeze up like that." Kakashi said with his eye crinkle smile and disappointed look to Naruto.
"Hey are you hurt? You scaredy cat." Sasuke taunted. Naruto was silently fuming. He just couldn't believe that he was useless! He did absolutely nothing!
"Naruto give me your hand, your bleeding and there's poison in the sound ninja's blades." Kagome said. Naruto gasped. He pulled out a kunai and before anybody can stop him he stabbed himself while everyone gasped except Kagome who had an amused glint in her eyes.
"On this wound I promise to never back down and lose to Sasuke!" Naruto vowed.
"Um Naruto that's cool and all but if you lose anymore blood you will die." Kagome said bluntly and Naruto became frantic. Kagome quickly grabbed his hand and her hand glowed green with a tint of pink that wasn't noticeable and healed Naruto's hand.
"There you go Naruto." Kagome said. The others stared in shock.
"You know medic Justus?" Sakura asked, amazed. Kagome nodded.
" Naruto threw a kunai towards a bush and said,"There!" A white rabbit with fur white as snow hopped out and Kagome and Kakashi knew something was wrong since snow rabbits didn't come until winter and it wasn't winter.
"Everyone get down!" Kagome yelled and tackled Tazuna their client. Just then a huge sword whipped through the air and embedded itself in a tree and shadowed figure landed on top of the sword's handle.
"Zabuza Momochi! Missing nin and is in the bingo book of one of the most wanted missing nin. He specializes in the art of 'silent killing'." Kagome said.
"Oh the girl does her homework and hand over the bridge builder I have to kill him." Zabuza said and everyone tensed.
Okk well that's a wrap for this edited chapter. Left it at a cliffy I think. Lol sweat drop welp hoped you enjoyed so REVIEW !
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