Planing:
I have heard from my readers they don't want a Hinata/Naruto story I'll give them one,
with my little talk with evil-pain I'm going to make Hinata want to save the Branch Family
cause naruto wanted to everyone in konoha. Hinata reason with naruto the spear to branch
family as they were fource by the main branch to beat him, naruto agree sending a group
of SS Uchiha elites to aid her as they will also help break to seal. Hinata would take the
group into Kumo.
That my brainstorm in what might happen in chapter 5 after i read the reviews all kind sir
has sent to me.
But one person (i won't give out his name), said my story was rubbish, he has
no manner if he don't like my story don't read. Don't go offending some else work, I'm
only a sixteen chinese asian english is my second language I'm not a native english
speaker.
So my grammar does have some problems sorry, also please give me your reviews
about my brainstorm.