Name of story: Temptation
Chapter 6 The Bite
Authoress::cowers in a dark corner:: I don't want to say who I am...
Fans:::holding torches and pitch fork:: we already know who you are Cat!!! Get your ass out here!!!
Authoress::cringes:: i'm not here::nervous laugh::
Fans: if you don't come out we'll stop reading!!!
Authoress: What!!!::sobs:: okay you guys have to vote then.
Authors note: Btw... I am getting death threats to keep Bella and eddy together and I have decided that...ill give you one more chapter for the poll to end... (Evil grin)...but I'm really mad that people don't like Charlotte... I liked her... but remember that you guys need to give me 20 No's!! I have 9...so you need to tell your friends to come and say no or YES!!! Come on!! Someone say yes!!!!! I want Charlotte and Eddy but...PEOPLE ARE GOING TO STOP READING!!!!!!And SOMEONE actually said they'll stop reading sooo...(sigh) yeah...BUT I'll solely rely my answer on the poll ...SO...YEAH... (Evil laugh) btw I just noticed that every chapter had gone up in words... lol like (ch1-1057 ch2-1108 ch3-1229 ch4-1348 ch5-1824 ch6-1863)ha!! crazy!
The memories flooding back into his mind were driving him on the verge of insanity, while he watched the perfect vampire sleep peacefully on her soft bed. He wanted to speak with her but he was scared. He was having weird feeling he couldn't understand for himself. Every time he looked into the sparkling blue eyes his stomach would churn. He refused to admit that he liked it but deep in his mind he knew he did have feelings for the blonde.
As he continued to watch her until he noticed her face was cringing with pain. She started to thrash in her bed, throwing the covers and the floor.
"No!! Stop!! I don't want this!! Please..." she started to scream in her sleep. She continued to thrash in her sleep.
Edward used his gift to seep into her mind. "Forgive me for the intrusion." he whispered to her, seeping deeper into her thoughts; her dream.
A dark face covered in shadows threw her into the wall, taking his shirt off aggressively.
"Please don't do this." Charlotte whispered suppressing tears that begged to come out. The man continued to come closer to her stripping off his clothes, staring death into her eyes. Once his pant were off her slid off his boxers revealing a painfully erect member.
The man continued to slowly make his way to her shivering body. She curled to the floor, continuing to shiver uncontrollably on the floor, holding her knees to her chest.
"Please, don't do this. I didn't know you were here. I thought- I didn't- please, not again." she begged, holding her knees tighter.
The mysterious man grabbed her arm, pulling her up and holding her to the wall with one hand while the other was occupied taking of the young girls' pants. Her tears she had tried to keep away were now pouring out as she hiccupped to breathe. Once the girls' pants and underwear were ripped off, he threw her to the bed next to them, as if she was a doll. She tried to cover up her privates but he got to her first.
Her opened her legs and placed his erection on her entrance. She shivered and the tears came out with a heavier pour. He held her legs open with both hands and slowly entered her. She thrashed wildly willing him to stop. She continued to cry and tell.
Edward started to pull away from the dream to awaken her from this horrid dream. But before he could completely leave and scared and painful yell filled his mind. "Stop! Father!!"
He snapped back from the dream and shook the shivering girl. She was not waking up. He placed his hand on her cheek and shouted, " Charlotte!"
The young girls' eyes bolted open and bit into the boys' wrist, not sucking the blood but more like letting a cold liquid in. Pain shot up through his arm. The feeling of a flame engulfed his hand. He ripped his hand from her grasp and clutched onto his wrist. He fell to the floor feeling a pain he had not felt since he changed.
Charlotte fully awakened and noticed and screaming Edward on her floor. Edward continued to scream from the agonizing pain rushing through his veins. The cold liquid continued to rush through his arm slowly.
Ba-dum
Edwards's heart beat. He grabbed his chest and screamed louder. "AHHHHH!!!!!!!" Charlotte panicked and rushed to his side.
"What's wrong? Edward tell me! What's going on?!?" She rambled on looking for what was causing so much pain to a vampire. She spotted Edwards wrist and pulled it from him. Blood was gushing out of it and what looked like snake venom was around the wound. She looked at it and the only way she thought she could save him came to his mind. I need to take it out of his system. She thought. She carefully placed her lips on the wound and begun to suck out the venom with some of his blood.
Ba-dum
His arm grabbed harder into his chest, breaking the skin. "AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" he screamed softer than before but still really loud. She continued to suck out his blood tasting for venom. The venom tasted sweet and tasted familiar to her. Once she could only taste is blood she stopped and removed her fangs from his wrist.
Edward panted loudly still clutching onto his chest waiting for the painful sting to return to his chest. Once he waited for a few minutes and his heart stopped beating he let go and continued to pant loudly. Charlotte just stared at him painfully, trying to settle her stomach. The blood was churning it wildly, making her want to throw up.
Edward's breathing slowed and he looked to his side, looking at Charlotte grabbing her knees. He propped himself with one hand; the other still lightly pulsing with pain. He continued to move towards her wincing in pain when his wrist moved slightly. Once he was close to her he stopped and looked at her face. She was sweating and holding her knees tightly. Her mouth was slightly open gasping for breath.
" Charlotte," He croaked his throat raw from yelling. She pushed him away and ran out of the room, her damp hair swaying behind her. Edward stood up and trudged over to the bathroom where he heard gagging and her empting her stomach. Once he heard he stop and turn on the faucet he walked in.
" Charlotte, I-"
"Don't," he was cut off, "This is my fault. I guess we're not supposed to drink our own kind's blood." she forced a laugh.
"Look, you saved me, I think." He said as he rubbed her back while she rinsed her mouth of the blood she just coughed up.
"I don't know what happened. I wake up and you're screaming. I couldn't think of anything else to do. I'm sorry."
"You don't need to. You did the right thing. But, what confuses me is that your bite did this to me." He said walking after her to the kitchen.
"My bite?" she stopped in her track. She took his hand and cleared the wound with her thumb. She gasped when she brushed over the wound and took a few steps back.
"What?" his confusion pilling up. She fell to the floor and started to tear again. " Charlotte, what's going on?"
"I- did this to you. I almost... I don't know, but your ...warm." she pointed an accusing finger at him.
He smiled and touched his wrist unconsciously. Heat radiated off of the wound, like a human. It was warm and soft. It was a small patch, but it was there. If she would have left him there. He would be mortal, and normal. He could kiss Bella without hurting her. A human.
"Your...gift...it's amazing." Edward said staring at his bloody wrist. Half of him wanted to be bitten again, but the other half made more sense. He would be mortal, and fragile. He decided it wasn't worth it.
"Amazing?" she asked picking up a blood box and walking past him to her room. Edward followed obediently. "You call a gift that causes unbearable pain amazing? Something's wrong with you Edward." She entered her room and got the cream from her vanity.
"Well I think the fact that you can make the dead live is pretty amazing. Your one of a kind." she sat him down on the bed where the sheets had been thrown off. She rubbed the cream over the wound and it quickly vanished. "What is that?" He asked, again mesmerized by the magic.
"Something Jaiden gave me. He would get upset that I hurt myself so much so he made this for me." She smiled and put the cream away and sat next to Edward.
" Charlotte," He didn't know how to say what he wanted to say. He had a love triangle going on and he couldn't choose. He also was not intending to lead her on in any way, which didn't work so well since he DID like her. "I don't know how to say this but," He was cut of by a finger that was laid on his lips.
Charlotte moved in closer to him; their breathes mingling. If Edward had a heart it would be beating wildly. She got closer and took off her finger replacing it with soft, cold lips.
Edward was filled with passion, lust. He hadn't kissed anyone in a long time, and he knew he wouldn't hurt her. He wrapped his arm around her waist and returned the kiss.
Reality hit him hard a few seconds after. What the hell am I doing? He thought. He ripped his lips from the young girls and stumbled backwards.
"What are you doing?" He said to her backing away from her with a scared expression. What have I done?
Authors note: OMFG!!! I can't believe I just read that!! I'm such a bitch to my readers...lol ok for all of you Bella and Eddy people...I COULD STILL MAKE HIM GO TO HER!!!!! Jeez. And just to clear things up. I like Bella and Eddy together but I just wanted to try something different from all the other twilight/newmoon fic's. You know DIFFERENT!!! But people hate different so remember the poll!!! This is the last chapter where you could do the poll so...VOTE!!! Bella and Eddy... Charlotte and Eddy... or it's completely up to me...The WRITER!!!!! Lol love you guys... btw guys next weekend is the deadline for the poll since i will be typing it then so... cast your votes quickly!!
Here's the update on the poll...
Eddy and Bella-14
Charlotte and Eddy-6
I don't give a damn!!-9
Edit: GUYS THE POLL IS OFFICIALLY CLOSED!!!!! THE POLL ENDED IN (GO TO HELL BELLA..8) (I REALLY DON'T GIVE A DAMN...19) AND ...(DRUM ROLL) (BELLA AND EDWARD...19) IM RALLY SORRY GUYS ILL MAKE THE STORY THE BEST IT CAN BE AND IF IN THE END I THINK THEY SHOULD BE TOGETHER THEN I WILL BUT NOW IT IS COMPLETLY UP TO ME! SORRY GUY...I HOPE YOU WILL KEEP READING.. AND BTW ...EXPECT THE NEXT CHAPTER REAL SOON!