You people don't really care do you? I just want to make a good story but you all are blowing me off and ignoring me, fine then, I'm going to keep going anyway. I've decided to use point of view so to not get confused.
Sam's POV
Sam looked around them at the square; it was packed with people of all shapes and sizes. But the similarity was they all looked beaten, old-looking clothes, grim expressions, thin stomachs, just as Sam expected. Jet and Thalia however seemed very surprised at the people and were staring at every unusual passerby.
"Are they always like this?" asked Jet, Sam paused and said "yes, everyday, all the time, Herobrine gets fifteen percent of all their crops for his soldiers, If they don't agree, he takes it by force" Jet's surprised expression turned to disgust as they walked through the crowd towards "Tommy's gold shop" Thalia took out the half-apple Bruce instructed to give to him and walked inside, gold tools and decorations hung on the walls, at the counter at the back of the room was a man with short brown hair and a leather apron with gold flecks in it, unlike the other people in broadingale he looked rather muscular as well as thin, a very bad combination.
When they walked in a smile flashed across his face, then vanished as he cleared his throat and said with a stuttering voice "w-w-welcome customers, how can I h-help you" Sam nodded to Thalia, who put the half-apple on the table. Tommy's stutter disappeared when he said "welcome back Sam, it's good to see ya!" then cleared his throat again as a man walked in, his eyes did a double-take and resumed stuttering "n-n-now I have some very interesting product in the b-b-back I think you might b-be interested in, f-follow me" and he led them through a door behind the counter leading to a forge with gold bars stacked in the corner and a flat piece of gold on an anvil in the center. They went through another door outside to a set of tracks with carts on them, Tommy said "these are the tracks I use to get gold from a mine not far from here, hop in and you'll be on your way" Sam went over and patted him on the back "its good to be back Tommy" who nodded as they got into the carts, the tracks led down underground so soldiers would not see. When they got inside Tommy said to them "Notch be with you" and pulled a lever, sending them into the hole.
Thalia's POV
Thalia held on the side of the cart for dear life as they sped down, when the tracks leveled out there was a lurch that almost made her lose her breakfast. They sped along the tracks, every twist and turn making her sick, Sam and Jet on the other hand were fine, Sam was reading his spell book while Jet had his hands inches from the ceiling yelling "WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO!" Thalia rolled her eyes and tried to relax in her seat, it was hard to lie down and every bump felt like a pinch but eventually she closed her eyes and thought to herself. Eventually the carts turned upward into the bright light and stopped at a small house in a forest, they all got out and dusted the gold powder from their pants. Thalia from her shirt as well since she had been sleeping. Inside the house they found a bed, a chest with stacks of gold ore in it (which they put in the carts to send back to Tommy), and another copy of Thalia's painting on the wall. Sam walked over to the bed and lifted it as if it was light as a feather, revealing a trapdoor with a ladder under it, "the rebellion awaits" and motioned her and Jet to enter, Thalia entered first, then Jet, then Sam as he put the fake bed back above the trapdoor. As they climbed down the long ladder Thalia tried to refrain from looking up at Jet's rear. The ladder stopped and the trio stood in front of an iron door with an eye slot in it, Sam knocked on the door and a pair of brown eyes stared back, widened, then turned to suspicion, the person spoke with a gruff accent and said "prove that yer Sam, stranger" Sam put his hand to the door and said "elte un", the door began to glow red as it heated up. The man behind the door responded with a "AH! HOT!" then opened the door using a glove, the man was in plate armor with a blue cape, his face was stern and his jaw came out at an awkward angle, he scowled at Sam and said "you didn't hav' to do that ya know" Sam replied smugly with a "nice to see you too Theus" and strode into the stone brick hallway beyond, as Jet and Thalia passed Theus's eyes widened again and stood flat against the wall, almost in salute. "Welcome to the rebellion" he said, and they walked down the hallway behind Sam.
Please R&R I need more ideas too add to my own.
-buiostella